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shijinareneesh

@shijinareneesh

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#191

Brilliant brilliant brilliant... Absolutly perfect... I wish I could say more,but words always fail me such times... N waiting for your come back..

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nishkka

@nishkka

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#192

Loved it.
It is sad that this ff has ended. It was and will always remain special. Looking forward to your next ff.

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luvraj4ever

@luvraj4ever

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#193

Lovely end to a beautiful story...loved the whole idea of khushi studying and arnav meeting her often..I just loved the whole feel of it...them behaving like very much in love couple was just too cute...I always wanted to read something like this about arhi...where khushi would be studying somewhere far and arnav would visit her...and u made my dream a reality here and that too soo beautifully. ..

loved the proposal scenE...khushi did beat arnav this time..hehehe..poor arnav he was so shocked. ...Hahaha..

but arnav's idea of taking her back to the campus and asking her to stop him took my breath away...it was just so beautiful and pure...

loved every bit of this fic...

am really sad that this fic has ended..

I hope u will continue writing for your readers. ..

so I would not say bye..

pls continue soon for us...

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#194

Came back home from work to read the end.

I am just overwhelmed.

This will always remain one of my favourite stories ever.

Loved reading it.

And would wait impatiently for an update.

Thanks a lot, Dedee, for sharing this with us.

And I do hope you will write another one soon.

When you do, please do inform me.

Don't want to be left out of reading your work.

Khushi deciding to finish her degree was a very sensible decision.

She gained confidence in herself and the distance from Delhi and the media, too must have helped.

Loved how Khushi proposed Arnav.

And I just loved the song you used for the update.

Then came Arnav's proposal.

Both of them seem to have outdone each other.

Lovely unique ways of proposing.

And I loved the collage of pictures.

Hoping to have you back on the writing table soon.

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amus5

@amus5

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#195

dear Dee

this has been a very fine story which has touched upon the gory aspect of life though shrouded in arshi's positivity which acted as the stress buster to read the hard realities of life... by telling it through the eyes of arshi we readers always knew that somewhere positivity,hope and happy ending was coming bcos never once did we suspect or question arnav's capacity to fight for khushi and that he is there to take on the world of evil... i sometimes feel that somewhere we trust arnav as our superhero to haul khushi and subconciously to fight against the evils that prevails in the society...

this was one FF worth reading and enduring the pain alongwith arshi...

thanx for this story and for reasserting the fact that there is always hope and light at the end of the darkest of the dark tunnel...

will be waiting eagerly for the next FF to roll out from your side... till then c ya 😃

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ps i loved the collage ... very beautifully made ... infact most of the pics had me going back to remember the time or scene when that pic must have been taken in ipk 😳

Edited by amus5 - 11 years ago

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tanu_15

@tanu_15

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#196

loved ur ff very much ...
its is one of my favorite
thnx 4 writing it
u rock dee
will w8 4 ur nxt ff
continue soon

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sheena29

@sheena29

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#197

Your talent forces me to write this note of appreciation. Just started reading this story a few days back and have to say that you've done a commendable job. You have that ability that one of my very favorite writer on this forum has, make me visualize your story, your Arnav and Khushi had the faces of the actors but a life of their own and they and you had me captured throughout. Kudos to you. Hope to read more from you. And guess who's my favorite writer... the same one you dedicated your story to.. 😊 your honesty as a writer is so close to hers and your joy in your work too...