KriYaansh OS - On Fire - Updt Rey's POV on PG5

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akanksha

@sharif_lafungi

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Who are u ?? A mind reader or what ???..if nt then must be some spirit who likes to enter into the souls of kria nd rey to know the emotions nd den writes it here...straight to d point, d OS seems way too real as per current scenerio...m confused whether to kiss ur hands 4 writing it or to steal ur brain 4 creating it...i dnt wanna put a scratch by tying it up in my words...it was wow..u r one freaking awesome writer

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Diya Sengupta

@SrkDiya

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

WOW! What a wonderful OS. I was thrilled to read this. The emotions denoted were so well put by you. Thank you for writing another part of this OS. I must say that it was absolutely a treat to read them both. 😊

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medha

@SavageMissMe

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

do you ever, ever give anything less than perfection???

i dont even know what to say, it was sheer brilliance. absolutely loved it

Edited by medha_is_me - 11 years ago

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k.sweet

@k.sweet

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

superb 😊

loved it

thanks for the pm

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moumita

@sumimita

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

hey this is just superb..

i mean just perfect...each and everything was described so nycly..

just awsome...loved it

with lots of love

moumita

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nifty-nia

@nifty-nia

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Brilliant! This was just brilliant. I really want to read a full fledged story by you.

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@Black_Stone

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Ah-Mazing One !!

Beautiful Potryal of emotions.

The way you framed the his POV, Loved it !!!

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Khyati

@So_Naley

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Its reaaallly good !!!
Loved how you explained Rey's turmoil after Kriya's return so beautifully !!! 😳
Refreshed my memories of the rain dance and made me gush all over again !