KriYaansh OS - On Fire - Updt Rey's POV on PG5

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Its amazingly put up.. I love the way his thoughts were been framed.

beautiful..

I loved the last line the most..

this one:

Before he'd stepped onto that court, he had been trying to convince himself he hated her, but by the time he stepped out, he was struggling not to hate himself.

oh I loved it..

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unisha

@unishaz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

superb dear.. loved it.. thanks for pm..

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kriapatel

@kriapatel

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Poor rey kitn bhi try kare lekin kria ke baare me sochnese khud ko rak nhi sakta
n jitna wo usse dur jaraha he utna hi wo karib aarahe he
n i love it
rey's pov had beautifully written

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DocSNair

@Mukthaa

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

👏👏..
great update..
u write so well...

Before he'd stepped onto that court, he had been trying to convince himself he hated her, but by the time he stepped out, he was struggling not to hate himself.

That was always the effect she had on him anyway.

loved these lines

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Bhaadmejaa

@Bhaadmejaa

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Very nice! I love characters that ooze angst. 😊Pls do continue writing its a pleasure to read! Thanks for the pm!

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

that was amazing and great... liked it

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Shanaya

@Lovelylavender

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Amazin ya!!
U define n carve d emotions in such a soothin manner tht the readers can feel d rush of emotions in their hearts..
As if feelin exactly d way k n r do..
Fabulous writer!!
Luvdd it!!