ARAKSHI FF: JEEVAN KAY DIN T2 (update part 50 ) - Page 20

Originally posted by: easha4539

Aapki story excellent chal rahi hai. U can take your time. U always try to describe every single thing. That's the part I love most. Plz don't go rush. Write the way u r doing now. Waiting for next update and plz don't worry. Write the way youe heart wants.

Thanks dear
I try to write small detail to involve all my readers
In that situation
If you feel like you are present there
That mean I successful
Thanks once again 😃

Originally posted by: ugababe

Your doing fantastic!!! You've kept us all interested so please don't hesitate to continue!!

Can't wait for the next part!

Take care of your hands...it's ok to take a break :-)

Khushi

Don't worry dear
I update soon
Thanks 😃

Originally posted by: rizwanaa

hey dear...
the story is moving ahead wonderfully
and you say that you aren't a good writer
but that's not true to any extent
i love n really enjoy reading your stories
the way you depict all the emotions
whether happy ,sad or emotional
they all are beautifully written by you
almost in my every comment i've mentioned
that i love the way tend to mention
both big n minute details n as a reader
it really helps to connect with the story easily
and also it visualization gets easy
n the one who reads it enjoys n remains bound to every emotion
mentioned in updates
lastly, i really like that you're never late in updating
your stories
this thing even i lack in my stories
so keep it up!!
n one more thing plz never thing yourself as less
n a bigg thanks n lots of 🤗
for all the wonderful stories you've given to the readers

You are right I try to write each and every detail
To involve my reader in that imaginary world
As we lost our inspiration and our beloved pair
Sometime I was thinking if we no professional writer write in good ways
So, why not they thought about it?
If they serious with this show it never happen
And we still enjoy our show
But we don't know inner story
Anyway I always read your comments
It give me more energy to write and I start writing non stop
Thanks dear 😃

Originally posted by: Rehana25

Yaar aaj main opper asmaan neechay
Aisa lag raha hay
Tum nay toh yaar kuch kahnay Kay qabil nahi chora
Thanks yaar 😳
I am not thinking discontinue just thinking
It's going very big
May be all going bore
That's why I want to know the opinion
Of my readers but I say thanks to all of you for
Encouraging me
Thanks I try to update soon 😃

aww aj mai upar wow
yar sach mai ek dam classic stories hain thank u 4 continuing n love ur new story also plz plz plz stop ni karna mera time kaise guzre ga agar u update ni karo ge 2 i them twice thrice in a day so keep updating plz...

Originally posted by: PoohLover

Your story is very very nice and the storyline is superb..your going very good...do continue and yes we're with you😃😃

And yes grammatical error is not a problem at all...dont worry🤗

Thanks dear
Yes I aware of grammar mistakes
But sometime it's because of typing
I update soon
Thanks stay with me 😃

Awww the stories are going awesome
Take care

A VERY BIG THANKS FOR AL OF YOU WHO GIVE ME ENERGY TO WRITE AND ENCOURAGE FOR WRITING, I FEEL MY SELF VERY LIGHT AND HAPPY.

Her train of thought broken...when her cousins start praising her and arjun...when the song start...only three pair follow the verses...which is rahul and neha...ram and kareena...arjun and sakshi...because they know all the verses and related action...others give them room and move a side...

Arjun feel a big burden comes off...he feel very light...showing his love in her way...he feel very nice...he feel himself like that child who get top position in whole school and make ready to get his reward ...He happily accepted praises from all youngster...and try to find sakshi...she is disappear somewhere...after finishing that act she is very shy...where is she?

Arjun find her talking with kareena and neha in little dark place...something really serious going between them...they agree in one point and showing thumb up to each other...kareena and neha going other side...while sakshi standing there lost in her thought...he rush to go her...his hand slid on her waist...her chain of thought broken...she slowly turn to his side... Looks him once and lower her gaze...

Arjun chin her up...make her to look him and said: sakshi, tum mujh say itna sharmao gi toh kaissay kaam chalay ga...hum ETF main saath kaam bhi toh karain gay.

Sakshi: (rest her head on his chest) arjun, main nay kabhi bhi aap say itna expect nahi kiya tha...yeh sab meray liyay ek dream ki tarah hay...mujhay aissa lagta hay kay aankh khulay gi aur sab khatum ho jaiy ga...(she take deep breath) abhi apnay aap ko yaqeen dila doon phir aap dekhaiyay ga...kaissi sharam ...She smiles to see him.

Arjun tight his grip around her...make her walk near the wall...he pin her dark side on wall...look in her eyes...place hand both sides of wall...capturing her in between and said: abhi yaqeen aa jay ga. He bends his head and kisses her crook on neck...

Sakshi stammer...kkkoi aa jay ga.

Arjun while kissing on her throat...aanay do.

Sakshi again say with gulping...kkkoi dekh lay ga.

Arjun brushing his lips on her cheeks...dekhnay do.

Sakshi said with heavy breathing...bhabhi bula rahi hoon gi

Arjun move little down on her front neck...bulanay do.

Sakshi can't bare more his passion...place her palms on his chest...just whisper...his name...arjunnn.

Arjun bend for further more and kiss deep on her front neck...he was starting from her throat...till deep on her neck...sakshi try to control her feeling...her finger dug on his back...

Arjun step back...when he feel it's enough for her...sakshi calm her down...it's take a little while her...but she compose at last...

arjun look her naughtily... and ask: ab bhi yaqeen aaya...ya phir...he incomplete his sentence...

sakshi hit his chest playfully...he loose his grip and she quickly slip away and left in hurry saying...(I have very important work)...arjun just take a deep breath and back in hall.

Everyone busy with their own activities...when full lights on ...everyone stop and look in one side...

Sakshi comes with mike on her hand...she smile to see everyone and said.

Sakshi: my dear brothers, sisters, friends and cousins...I hope you all enjoy this party... (Everyone noises say yes) thank you, thank you...I really want to say thanks... All of you... for your coming and giving us honour...and offcourse participate in this show and giving us gifts...but...I must say hearty thanks to my loving fianc...for his mind blowing love confess...which is totally give me heart attack (she smile to see arjun) but I must thanks for one person more who is behind this all act...yes, Mr Rahul Malhotra...aap ka thanks karna toh banta hay... (She smirks)

Sakshi continue and said: After all... he steals my private thought...my private thing and public it...but I am not angry...just want to give something in return...(rahul become confuse and try to say something...only stop by sakshi) no no, I am not finish yet...mr rahul...let me finish first...

Toh aap sab dil tham kar sonnay...hamari sab ki piyari neha ko oxford university ki taraf say complimentary one year internship ki offer hui hay... (Everyone making noise with happiness...clapping...they shake hand with neha to congrate her)

Rahul become angry and said: what rubbish...it's not possible.

Sakshi: why, are you doubt on your future wife, rahul?

Rahul: aissi koi baat hoti toh neha mujhay zarror batati...kyun neha (he look neha)

Neha: actually, I receive a call today...I try to tell you but you are very busy...

Sakshi smile on him and said: bohat dukh ho raha hay na...kahan toh two month main shaadi ho rahi thi...ab ek saal ka intezaar karna paray ga... (she tease him) magar koi baat nahi...rahul...tumhari wife ki CV main kitna weight barh jaiy ga...socho...oxford ka naam us ski CV ko kahaan say kahan lay jaiy ga.

Rahul: go to hell that CV...I don't care for that damm CV...mujhay koi uss say job nahi karwani (he become fierce)

Sakshi give him teasing smile again and said: insaan job karnay kay liyay toh nahi parhta hay...aur phir oxford main parhnay ka ya internship karnay ka toh sab ka khawab hota hay...kyun guys...theek kah rahi hoon na.

One boy: aaray yaar rahul theek hi toh kah rahi hay...soch yaar neha ko bhi kitna shauq hay...rahul cut him said...oh toh chup kar...

He turns to sakshi side and asks: tum nay yeh baat aur kiss kiss ko batai hay.

Sakshi smile and said: pehlay iradha nahi tha...kissi ko bhi batanay ka...par ab soch rahi hoon kay bata doon...specially uncle and aunty ko (she continue) tum toh jaantay ho woh...kitnay khush hoon gay sunn kar kay un ki beiti ko select kiya hay...aur phir shaadi ka kiya...tum kahin bhagay toh nahi jaa rahay ho... (Finishing her talk with big smile)

rahul rush to go her side...and said: OK, fine tell me mujhay kiya karna hoga...

kareena: aaray itni jaldi haar maan gay ,Rahul.

Rahul ignore her and repeat his question...everyone hiding smile and enjoy rahul condition...even arjun amaze to see his state.

sakshi: ab tum keh hi rahay ho toh sochtay hain kay kiya karain...with cheeky smile...she look neha and kareena...both come to her side...standing her right and left.

Kareena: first tell us...how you know her private place?

Rahul chuckle and fix his collar said: maanti ho na...kaissay dhoondh nikala...hum nay uss khufia jaga ka pata...

Sakshi: yes, I am dying to know that...because nobody knows...rahul cut her short and said: hhmmm wrong one person knows it... (He pauses and said) aditya...

Sakshi repeat...aditya...oh, my God (she closes her eyes with thinking some) off course...how can I forget? She admit but continue...but I never accept this that he told you straight ...you play trick with him...tell me...she urge him to say.

Rahul: you are absolutely right, my little sis.

The girl trio look each other...shake head with unbelievable...then sakshi say...ok, time to pay penalty...

Rahul: I am ready...but you have to promise that you never reveal this to any elders...specially neha parents (he looks neha...she lowers her lashes)

Sakshi: cross my heart sweet friend...then she discuss with kareena and neha...continue her talk...ok, rahul tum nay jo bhi kiya uss ki saza hay kay tum...pehlay toh mujh say promise karo gay...never do this thing again...don't even think to do anything between me and arjun...stay away...right...you already done a lot... (rahul repeat all sentences after sakshi)

After that sakshi said: last thing you do hundred push ups...now...

Rahul scream...what in this dressing and now...yes, now...sakshi repeat.

All girls start clapping and making noises...while all boys gather near rahul to cheer him up...

Ram said: sakshi, thoora kam kar lo...yaar...hundred toh bohat ho jain gi...

Sakshi nodded negatively...rahul poor guy start his push ups...all girls laughing and teasing him...but other side all boys cheering him...and he finish his punish...when he stand and take deep breathing...

neha rush to come his side...she stop just inch away...look him...and quickly move near him and hug him...rahul shock for her sudden action...for a moment he don't understand...what just happen?

When he realise...his hand enveloping her...soon...he hold her tight...neha feel his arms around her...she raise her head...look in his eyes...and said...I love you Rahul...I love you more than anything...I never leave you...I never go anywhere...leaving behind you.

Neha love confess is a second big shock for her...first she hug him in front of all...then confess her love...he confuse what she said? He parted and asks...what are you saying...you are never leave me.

Neha look back at sakshi...she shake head...give her permission to tell...every one look first sakshi then neha...

Neha: we trick you Rahul...I haven't got any opportunity for this...and even if they offer me then I sure reject it...nothing important in my life...only you...you are the most important part of my life...and I want to be your as soon as possible (she hide her face in his chest)

Everyone clapping and teasing rahul...which is still standing in shock...he chins her up...looking in her eyes and softly kiss on her cheeks...said: thanks...thanks for this beautiful love confess...I never thought that you do this for me...I never expect this for you...(then he remind some...he parted...look sakshi...one look her...he get his all answer...he step forward towards sakshi side...stop a bit far for her...both looking each other...then some strange thing happen...rahul stretch his arms...sakshi smile...rush to come and hug him...everyone clapping...)

rahul peak on her forehead and said: thank you, only because of you...

sakshi smile and repeat pointing at arjun side: thank you, only because of you...

Everyone happy and enjoy the moment...today, it's the most memorable time for them...they all are witness of two beautiful loves confess...witness of their love...witness of their passion...

This day finish with lots of happy things and bonding between them...arjun is happy to interact with this amazing family...who accept him so easily...he never thing in a second that he met with all of them first time...youngster joking with him...sharing their views...teasing him...they drag arjun in all her private talking which is no more private in between...arjun feel the strong bond between them...keep a side they all due respect with elders...they control their emotion in front of them...no one even give a look to his or her partner...when all elders gone...the scene is totally change...

arjun like this very much...he also feel very comfortable...otherwise...it's really difficult for him to do his act...family elders also aware of this things...they give their children freedom...in limit...not over...not under...they have permission to meet their love...but not secretly...openly but in limits...all youngster follow this happily...that's why they all are happy and feel solace in their family...share feeling with each other.

arjun love to be a part of such a amazing family...he understand that this family have some values and goals...and everyone follow that...they all are very rich, highly educated and well set on their jobs...some still in educating but everyone obey family value and goals...arjun meet and find everyone on good job...all girls are pretty and nice...wearing beautiful dress...avoid nudity...appropriate dressing with matching jewellery and minimal makeup...give all of them gorgeous look...

arjun think...if family have this kind of beauty available...who go outside and find other girl...he get easily this idea that most of couples and pairs...relate with each other in terms of family...

rahul smile to hear his thought and showing some girls...said: look those they are not belong in our family but look not difference...and look those boys...they also not belong to our family...and you, yaar...what about you? (You are also not belong us before but now...you are a part of our family)

samjhay ya samjhaon...rahul throw naughty smile on him and make him smile.

Everyone ready to go...again dev, bhabhi and arakshi standing exit to say everyone good bye...it's almost midnight...some guest already gone...some going now...bari mammi stay with them one day more...soon, all guest gone and host comes and sit on sitting room tired but happy...party going very successful...everyone enjoying and happy...every guest while going praise arakshi couple and wishes for baba health...big pile of gifts waiting them to be open...but not this time...they leave this task for tomorrow and head to go their room.

Sakshi ask bari mammi to stay with her in her room...she accept happily...bari mammi love her very much...she love her mom very much and have a very good memory with her...every time when bari mammi comes...sakshi sleep with her...they are talking late night...old memory regarding her mom...dad and brothers...she sleeping hearing those moment...feeling satisfied.

Bari mammi sitting on her bed...leaning her back with bed crown...sakshi rest her head on her lap...laying on bed...mammi caressing in her hairs...both talking with each other...when hear the knock on door...they look each other.

sakshi said: come in.

Rahul and arjun enter in the room...rahul wink at arjun and said: dekha main nay kaha tha na... muhtarma laad uthwa rahi hoon gi...bari maa say...

Sakshi: haan aur tum jal rahay ho...she squeeze her nose...uff kitni smell aa rahi hay jalnay ki...hay na mammi...she is sitting...making place to sit them.

Mammi: kyun larh rahay ho...itnay baray ho gay ho...phir bhi bacchoon ki tarah lartay ho...rahul sit and signal arjun to sit as well.

Sakshi: yeh rahul...she teases him.

Rahul: yeh sakshi...he returns her.

Mammi: phir shuru ho gay...agar aur kissi ka nahi toh...iss becharay ka hi khayaal kar lo...mammi point at arjun.

Bechara...sakshi and rahul laughing hearing bechara for arjun...chhhchh bechara...

sakshi said...mammi..yeh itnay bechaaray nahi hain...haan...bas thoora lehaz kar rahay hain...warna in kay agay toh sab ki bolti band ho jaati hay...

mammi: sab ka toh nahi pata...par main toh ek baat jaanti hoon...kay iss nay tumhari bolti bandh kar di hay...woh bhi acchay say...mammi hold her ear and twist it.

Sakshi scream...hay mammi mera kaan...agar kaan na raha toh pati dev ki baat kaissay sunno gi...aur agar un ki baat nahi sunno gi toh mujhay...kitnay tanay sunnay ko milain gay...SHE BEEN NAUGHTY.

Mammi leave her ear and side hug saying...majal hay kissi ki jo meri bacchii ko kuch kah kay toh dekhay...

she turn to arjun side and said: dekho baita...meri bacchii bohat nazoon main pali hay...khabardar...jo kabhi bhi uss ko daanta ya...tanay diyay...

arjun: ji main kyun tanay doon ga...aur kyun daantoon ga...yeh koi bacchii toh nahi hay...

mammi: bacchii ho ya nahi...bas main nay kah diya hay...toh kah diya...agar mujhay pata chala kay tum nay uss say kuch bhi aissi waissi baat ki hay...toh dekh laina...main kiya karti hoon (meri behan jaissi nand ki nishanni hay) her voice become teary.

Sakshi held her arms around her neck...make mammi look her...she wipe her tears...

arjun move forward...hold mammi hand and said: aap ko mujhay dekh kay aisa lagta hay...kay main iss ko daantoon ga ya...tanay doon ga...nahi...jiss nay mujhay jeenay ka sahi tariqa samjaya hay...ussay main kaisay kuch keh sakta hoon...aap bari hain...samjhdaar hain...tajarbakar hain...aap ko meri aankhoon main iss kay liyay piyar nazar nahi aata...toh aap ki tassali kay liyay muh say kah deta hoon... (arjun look once sakshi...she knowing what he is going to say...she lower her lashes...arjun smile on her gesture and said) I love her...love her more than my life...she the reason of my life...without her I have no life...I love her very much.

Bari mammi cup his face and peak on his forehead...said: I believe on you baita...opperwala...always make you happy and stay away sorrow for both of you...he always safe your couple from devil eyes...I really proud of you...and satisfied that she got a gem...which she really deserve it...mammi hug sakshi again.

After that, they all busy talking ... for long time...no idea for time...dev and bhabhi also join them...it's fun time...no one in leaving mood...it almost dawn when they way to go their room...to catch some sleep.

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REHANA25

yippee first to comment good one

Awesome update. Dil khush kar diya madamji. So Sakshi took her sweet revenge. Loved it..

So emotinal and wonderful epi