Beautiful lie!!!A Rantara Reincarnation FF; updated part 21 in page 46 - Page 29

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Posted: 11 years ago
Jyo, Jyo,
You will finish by kill me wid your update.
A very lovely update, i liked Raghu's tension to control himself
I liked when they fall on the bed and the dialogue after

The precap - wow!

And a special mention like always to the music and pics

❤️

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Posted: 11 years ago
Jyo, Jyo,
U will finish by kill me wid your update

It was a very lovely update
I lked everything and specially Raghu's tension to control himself wid Antara, and the bed scene when they fall and then the dialogue

the precap - Wow!

A special mention to the music and pics

❤️❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
I am new reader and must say your writing skills r excellent..!
There is an existence of every element in this story..
Perfect balance of emotions and those pictures add more meaning to it...
I would really love to follow this story n definitely its going to be great... no doubt... 😊
Edited by Classic90 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Should i say that u r always trying to think just opposite of me.. ??
In that regard, this story is just of its kind..
Solid story-line.. I was literally experiencing goosebumps like, okay what is going to happen...??
Raghu's desire was just out of control but i must appreciate his understanding..
Loved every feeling of this update... It was so sweet of Raghu teaching her how to play a guitar.. I would like to have one like him...!!
Next Part: Waitinggg
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG...m commenting after a long time...
that was a awesome update jyo...loved it..😊
u describe each n every thing so beautifully...❤️
the bg music was so lovely..loved the pics...😳
continue soon😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Not only raghu is gone case...😛I'm too gone case after reading ur update🤣
They come so close to each other...Attraction stage begins...Uff...raghu had to control himself so hard!!😉
Eeekkss!!! Love ur update so much jyo...amazing!!!!
music is the way they connect with each other...music bring them together! I just love the way the story is building up jyo...
I'm madly in love with deewana song
waiting when will antara get her eye sight back...& find out that the person who she loves is actually raghu!!! i think we have to wait a long time for that...😛

P.S: Love the pics...& the song...waiting for the precap...date😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
Fantastic .
Loved it .
Like always perfect .
Everything is excellent
Continue
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Posted: 11 years ago

Special note: Yes, it's hilarious that this is 19.5, not 20!! The reason of this craziness is- I wanted to put the date in one post. As this is the preparation of part 20, so I named it as 19.5!! And about the title, actually I am asking this to you all readers. Find the hint!! Focus on Raghu's self thoughts!! 😉Enjoy!!

Part 19.5: Find the hint!!

Do you have any idea how beautiful and tempting you are??What do you expect from me? That every time I will just control myself?? Haan?? Come on!! I am a human being!! I can't do this every time. Do you know that I had to KILL myself to leave you tonight...on...bed??How can you be so dedicated to your Sameer??He is just your fiancee!!! Not your husband yet. You don't have to trust him so fiercely. How can you just submit yourself to me...err...to him like this?? Don't be like that Antara!!! You have to put yourself above everything. Don't let anyone to have you so easily!!! I swear, next time you do such thing like closing your eyes in vulnerable moments, I will scold you...or I will yell at you...I don't know what I will do but I won't tolerate this any more. You understand?? Now good night!!! Sleep well!!

After Raghu finished his conversation with Antara's anklet, he put that in his bed side drawer and got prepared to sleep. He was just about to turn off the light, suddenly his phone rang. He looked at the clock. It was almost 2 am. He quickly checked the caller and it was saying Antara.

Raghu: Hello!!! What happened?? Are you okay??

Antara: I am fine.

Raghu: Then why are you calling me at this moment?? It's 2.

Antara: Ok, fine then. I will talk to you later. Good night!!

Raghu: WAIT...wait wait !!! I was just...all right. What's the matter??

Antara: Nothing.

Raghu: Are you angry with me??

Antara: No. I am angry with myself.

Raghu: What do you mean by that??

Antara: May be I did something wrong. For that reason...erm...

Raghu: For that reason...???

Antara: Look, you used to be so flirty and curious about dating and dinner and all those romantic stuff earlier. And it was ME who was used to shove those ideas in your face. But after this accident, you have...changed.


Raghu: Listen to me!!! I have nothing to do with this fact that you can't see now. We have already had this conversation before. You are the same Antara to me.

Antara: NOOO...NO...I was trying to say that, you have changed a lot in case of your basic behavior. You sound more mature and ...and...sensitive. Less flirty!!!

Raghu: You have said that before.

Antara: What I want to say that...erm...look...erm...I want to say it very frankly. Like the other girls, I am not going to hide my feelings just to show that you are just doing your duty toward your girl friend, so it's ok. Honestly speaking, I am very impressed about you and I have decided that...we should start dating.

For some seconds, Raghu put down the phone and thought:

What??WHAT?? She is giving Sameer permission to get her in date?? That means...THAT MEANS...they have never gone in date before. This is our...I mean..her first date?? But why now??


Antara: Hello!!! You there??

Raghu: Ya ya. I am here. Huhh...but why now?? You never permitted me to take you in a date before!! So what happened now that you are ready??

Antara: Sorry for my remarks, but you seemed a bit immature and naughty to me before. I was sort of scared to go with you alone.

Raghu got curious. He said- So, you didn't trust me before??

Antara: Gaining a girl's trust is not so easy Sameer!!! I love you but trust have been always an issue for me. So I didn't go with you then.

Raghu: And?? You trust me now?? Why??(He felt an immense joy from inside)


Antara: I will be very honest with you Sameer!!! I like you more than before. Every moment, you surprise me with your compassion and manner. I can't stop but admire you. And tonight when you...didn't say a single ...you know...flirty thing when we were alone in my house, I decided to...share this thought with you that...

Raghu: That??

Antara: I was right about you!!! I had so many confusion when I got in to a relationship with you. Still I tried my best to be dedicated to you completely. I have tried to LOVE you from my heart and you have also enlightened my life with your fun and friendship. But after I lost my eyesight, I have seen a new man in you for whom I can do anything and everything. You have given me confidence that whatever happens, you will always be for me. So, I have decided that I will trust you and will agree to go with you in our pending date which you asked me for like...10000 times and I refused.

Raghu: Erm...but ...we do date everyday right?? Even tonight's guitar lesson can also be considered as a date!!

Antara got angry. She said- Mr. Sameer Malhotra!!! What's wrong with you?? At first decide what you want. Date or no date??

Raghu: Ok, DATE!!! My god,...I am not used to your this temper!!! Huhh...it needs a lot of expertise to handle a girl you know ??

Antara: As I have opened up my heart to you now, always be ready for the surprises, ok??

Raghu: Mam, anything else??

Antara: WHAT'S WRONG WITH YOU?? Tell me what are you supposed to do now??

Raghu: What am I supposed to do now??

Antara: I won't give you a hint. You find out and tell me. I will wait!!!

Raghu: Am I supposed to ...erm...give me a single hint!!!

Antara: UFFF...YOU ARE SUPPOSED TO ASK ME FOR A DATE!!!

Raghu: Ohhh...but I agreed to take you in a date na??

Antara: Arre but a man has to ask politely for this. How can you be so informal about our first date??

Raghu: Ok, ok!!!! So, Ms. Antara Sharma!!! Will you please allow me to take you in a date??

Antara: Hmmm...(pretending to think over this) ...OK!!!!

Raghu: YESSS!!!! So, when will that auspicious time come??

Antara: Tomorrow. Whenever you want.

Raghu: Ok, then 4 pm??

Antara: Ok. I will wait for you. We will go to the market at first...

Raghu: Market?? But ...

Antara: I have to buy something and after that you can take me whenever you want me to take!!!

Raghu: All right then!!!

Antara: You have got the whole morning to prepare Mr. Sameer.

Raghu: I won't disappoint you Ms. Antara!!

Antara: Good night!!! I love you!!!


Raghu: Good night!!!!

He hanged up. He was feeling very happy and he was mentally slapping himself for being so chirpy about this date.

It's all fake!!! I am not Sameer!!! I have to behave well. God, why am I so stupid?? I don't have to be so happy. I am sad. I AM SAD that I have to pretend a date now. Ufff...Yesss...I mean...Nooo!!!!


But I can't understand one thing!!! She said that she wasn't so sure about her relationship with Sameer at first. She didn't let him come close to her. She didn't even go on a date with him. She had some trust issues. She found him immature and naughty. So she got scared a bit about her own protection with him around. Though she loves him...she drew a certain line between them. Then why the hell did she get in to a relationship with Sameer in the first place?? If you have so many doubts about anyone, why would you decide to MARRY him?? I didn't catch that. Is there a reason for choosing Sameer rather than Sameer himself?? Ufff, iss ladki bhi na!!!! She will drive me crazy!!!


Waise as it's her first date, she will expect some gift from me!!! Oh...god...I have to plan a gift for her now. But what should I gift her?? What will make her happy in this stage of our...I mean her and Sameer's relationship??

Raghu started to think over this. Suddenly his eyes fell on a package which was laying on his side table. It was his newly bought mouth organ. He quickly searched that paper in which he wrote Antara's lyrics. He sat on the bed and concentrated on the lyrics. When he held the mouth organ near his mouth for the first time, he felt an immense excitement. Suddenly he became very determined and decided to spend rest of the night with his music.


Precap:


Edited by goodstorywins - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
-What a dhamakedaar update 👏
-Omg!! Raghu was conversing with Antara's anklet 😳
-Does that mean he's in love.?? 😕 oh ofcourse he's falling for her 😆
-But now its evident that Raghu is losing control over his emotions..he doesn't want to be sameer anymore..he wants Antara to love him ie love Raghu and not sameer..
-frankly speaking I'm happy that Antara wasn't not in a real kind of relationship with sameer... I mean she didn't trust him, she never allowed him to come closer to her..she thought him as immature and naughty and flirty..
-and now she is impressed with this new sameer..his behavior, his sensibility, his matured nature which is actually Raghu..she's actually falling for Raghu whom she thinks is sameer..
-but to be honest..I didn't get this! If she never trusted him, she thought him as immature and flirty then why was she in a relationship with sameer in the first place?! I didn't get this..
-wow Rantara going on a date..!! 😳 I'm excited to read about their first date..
-okay so, Raghu will play the tune or the song which Antara has written on the mouth organ ? 😆 I'm happy about this..
-precap: I can sense something really romantic or very much important coming up in the next part 😉 (I hope I'm right)

P.s: yaar i tried focusing on Raghu's self thoughts.. I reread it...but umm..I didn't catch the hint 😕
So can you tell me what was the hint... You know I'm really bad at guessing the hints 😛
And yeah..your selection of pics is as always perfect 👏
Edited by hareem27 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: hareem27

-What a dhamakedaar update 👏
-Omg!! Raghu was conversing with Antara's anklet 😳
-Does that mean he's in love.?? 😕 oh ofcourse he's falling for her 😆
-But now its evident that Raghu is losing control over his emotions..he doesn't want to be sameer anymore..he wants Antara to love him ie love Raghu and not sameer..
-frankly speaking I'm happy that Antara wasn't not in a real kind of relationship with sameer... I mean she didn't trust him, she never allowed him to come closer to her..she thought him as immature and naughty and flirty..
-and now she is impressed with this new sameer..his behavior, his sensibility, his matured nature which is actually Raghu..she's actually falling for Raghu whom she thinks is sameer..
-but to be honest..I didn't get this! If she never trusted him, she thought him as immature and flirty then why was she in a relationship with sameer in the first place?! I didn't get this..
-wow Rantara going on a date..!! 😳 I'm excited to read about their first date..
-okay so, Raghu will play the tune or the song which Antara has written on the mouth organ ? 😆 I'm happy about this..
-precap: I can sense something really romantic or very much important coming up in the next part 😉 (I hope I'm right)

P.s: yaar i tried focusing on Raghu's self thoughts.. I reread it...but umm..I didn't catch the hint 😕
So can you tell me what was the hint... You know I'm really bad at guessing the hints 😛
And yeah..your selection of pics is as always perfect 👏




This is the hint!!!😉

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