Beautiful lie!!!A Rantara Reincarnation FF; updated part 21 in page 46

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goodstorywins

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Posted: 11 years ago

#271

Originally posted by: honeybees22
OMG that update was just beyond beautiful
loved it soo much

Antara: Raghu, why are you so silent?? doesn't she call him Sameer

pls cont asap

OMG!!! Thanks for pointing this mistake!!! Main bhi kitna pagli hoon. I should have noticed that. 🤢Thanks for liking my story!!😃

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alishamerchant_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#272

Originally posted by: goodstorywins

Adorable?? But it was supposed to be hawt!!! 😕 Alright!!! I think I have to do a lot more to make their situation HAWT!!!😉😳

ROFL! 😆😆😆

aree jyoo it was HAWTT! but when i was typing the review I didn't know what to write...i was so busy drooling on Raghu's pics!

But no worries...you can definitely work on making the situation hawtER! 😳😳😳

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priyanka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#273

jyo ur an amazing writer i mst say...
loved ever bit of what u hv written...
dis ws one of beautiful chapter of dis ff..
im loving what raghu is feeling n going through fr antara ..
a selfless guy...who nw is in love...
dese little romantic moments r worth reading...
waiting fr antu to feel same fr raghu..
loved ur choice of pics fr d chapter..
thanks fr d update
waitung fr nxt part.

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goodstorywins

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Posted: 11 years ago

#274

Originally posted by: ankusanu
jyo ur an amazing writer i mst say...
loved ever bit of what u hv written...
dis ws one of beautiful chapter of dis ff..
im loving what raghu is feeling n going through fr antara ..
a selfless guy...who nw is in love...
dese little romantic moments r worth reading...
waiting fr antu to feel same fr raghu..
loved ur choice of pics fr d chapter..
thanks fr d update
waitung fr nxt part.

Thanks Pri!!! To me, this chapter is very important too as their attraction phase started from here only.😉 About romance, I am taking that slow because both of them are very shy in nature.😊

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priyanka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#275

Originally posted by: goodstorywins

<font size="4" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Thanks Pri!!! To me, this chapter is very important too as their attraction phase started from here only.😉 About romance, I am taking that slow because both of them are very shy in nature.😊</font>

np dear..take ur time...
i m waiting... whatever u vl write i vl love it.. 😉
im sure

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bokul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#276

mind blowing marvelous update

i loved and enjoyed it too

jyoti when will antara realize ?

i mean when will she start getting the flash backs

when will she remember the past life ?

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SM-ILE

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Posted: 11 years ago

#277

@Jyo I started reading your story "The beautiful lie from the beginning for continuity sake. To be very honest I did not subscribe to the reincarnation track because I thought it would be difficult to depict all this on the screen. But thanks to your vivid imagination I feel this could have been shown in a believable manner. Hats off to you for this.👏

In each chapter there is some sort of suspense and we wait for the next one with keen anticipation. You have done some research on the medical part for sure which gives it more credibility. 👏

The interplay of past and the present is intriguing and to make everything fit in place is difficult and so far you have done an awesome job.

This is a well thought out story and as the writer you don't have any doubts as to which direction it is going. On top of everything like the icing on a cake we have a hands on writer who calms all our fears and answers all the questions that crop up in our minds. Since the control is in your hands we know that nothing bad can happen to these two. So I am going to relax and enjoy the journey! I am happy to see that what we wished for Rantara you are fulfilling through this FF. 😃

I am happy that I have caught up with the rest and will be able to give my opinion for each section. I was laughing when Avay was teasing Raghu and calling her his "fraand". 😃 The pictures are well chosen for each and every scene. The music is good. At first I was distracted while reading but now am beginning to enjoy it while reading. The romantic moments have started. These moments we used to wait for when Rantara was in DDEJ and we are waiting with bated breath now too. Thanks Jyo for getting me back into the reading habit. For some time I had given it up because I found it difficult to concentrate.