Aaslok : forever mine...........part11 page 144 - Page 67

Roshanii, you are a good writer and have come a long way since your first FF. So don't give up yet, I apologise I have not had the time to continue reading your FFs, but that does not mean you are not a good writer,so pls do continue

Originally posted by: sweet cherry

Hi, jst read ur update
Been busy wit family stuff so not had tym to read or comment
Continue soon

Originally posted by: Geeta.R

Youre a fantastic writer please dont discontinue xx

Sorry i havent been commenting just been busy with uni

Promise i will catch up an comment xx

Originally posted by: latha_555

hi roshani, i like your story a lot, just felt that there was a big jump between chapter 7 and 8...chapter 7 end was at a crucial part of the story and then it jumped to a few months later, but i would have liked to see what happened then, after shlocks mum spoke to aastha...would have liked to see his grandma taking revenge and shlock protecting her and some romance that way.

dear most of you told me about the twist so i gave the twist but dont worry i will surly come back with flashback scenes 😊

Originally posted by: missmk

Very nice

Originally posted by: mayabharathi

of course you are a very good writer please do coontinue

Originally posted by: Operaqueen

Roshanii, you are a good writer and have come a long way since your first FF. So don't give up yet, I apologise I have not had the time to continue reading your FFs, but that does not mean you are not a good writer,so pls do continue

Originally posted by: roshanii

i am very disappointing guys and thinking about to stop write this story further ...i think you guys did not find this story interesting enough so that you shown least interest to read it and tell me how is it...😭

but may be i am wrong

so if i am wrong than please guys read my story regularly and please also drop your comment

😊

so that i can continue my writing like always

please read last update here is the link

part 8: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/101523189

Originally posted by: roshanii

why you hating him dear

now he will be the positive one 😉

Originally posted by: roshanii

i know i am good writer but i think that story is not so good 😊