Aaslok : forever mine...........part11 page 144 - Page 65

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pwenCezz_symrun



yeh huyi nah baat..
so now keep all ur madness aside nd start planning about next chapter...
coz i m now anxious to read it..😆

i will soon anyways what is your sweet name dear😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: roshanii

i am very disappointing guys and thinking about to stop write this story further ...i think you guys did not find this story interesting enough so that you shown least interest to read it and tell me how is it...😭

but may be i am wrong
so if i am wrong than please guys read my story regularly and please also drop your comment
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so that i can continue my writing like always
please read last update here is the link

ohh dnt be disheartend dear we all read it
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: roshanii

hey guys i am back with yet another update and i twisted the story on the demand of readers and sorry for taking the fever idea from serial😆

Part8

Aastha woke up and looked around her room, her own room. She could not believe on this but it was true, she walked towards her balcony, full of roses with different colors and white lilies. She inhaled a long breathe. She remembered the entire incident from past months. She thought that was like her darkest night mere but no that was not the night mere, because night mere could not change your life drastically. Her life became completely changed. She came close to mirror and looked herself. She was looking a shadow without life. Her skin was pale. Her pink lips were dry and her eyes were strand due to lot of weeping. She had only cried from past few months.

She tried to forget everything but was it so easy. She remembered how her step mother deceived her how Shlok made her slave and crushed herself respect and then how was everything changed suddenly. The person who pushed her into the darkness of life became the light of her life. She could not believe that Shlok brought her out from that hell. She was waiting for her death there but suddenly everything became changed.

She was confused on her fate. Her destiny was very dramatic. She thought and opened her wardrobe. She picked her dress and went to take the shower.

She could not understand that why Shlok did all that. He was her savior and also her enemy at same time. He saved her from the clutch of Romila but he took the price of that from her and assaulted her. Again he saved her from the trap of death but she did not know, what was the cost of that she had to pay now.

She was realistic now. She could not think that her good was time started. She made her strong enough to face anything worst. She was not innocent or nave girl anymore. She became entirely different and strong person now. It was fixed that she would never forgive him for ruining her dignity but now she knew that he was also the victim of pitfall made by his own family. That was not his family that was only the illusion of him.

"But whatever, I will never forgive him for that" she thought and jerked her head.

************...***************

Shlok lay in his bed. His eyes were shut tightly. He was in dilemma. He crushed himself for the past incident. He looked gloomy on his deeds. He looked deserted. His cloths were sloppy and his face was unshaved. He could not believe that his close relation could do that with him.

He was remorse on the wrong what he did with Aastha the poor lonely soul.

He got up from the bed and held his head in both hands.

"I ruined her life, I destroyed her family... oh god please forgives me... now what should I do..." he thought and his mind was bursting. He felt guilty himself and wanted to do something for her. He was very sad and depressed and he didn't go out from his room since yesterday. He could not face her anymore after the whole past things. Don't know how long he lay there like that. Someone knocked his door and came inside.

"Sir your breakfast...?" the servant came inside carrying a tray. Shlok was sleeping. He again tried to wake up him but he didn't show any response. The servant tried to wake up him once more and nodded his shoulder. Suddenly he felt that he was burning like embers and unconscious. He ran towards outside, called the doctor and informed Aastha about the same. They didn't know anything about what happened with Aastha. They thought that Shlok saved her from the accident and brought back.

They were all shocked after find the real face of Romila. One month back, when Aastha met with accident, everyone thought that she died in accident. They all very sad, Romila looked very depressed and devastated. But soon her dramatic face became unmasked in front of everyone when she caught red handed. She tried to transfer all the money in her account from the trust but Shlok sent the clip of her confession to the police, press and media. Police arrested her under the charge of murder, attempt to murder and arrogated the wealth of Aastha. Shlok had done all this before taking Aastha to his home but due to his devious plan, he didn't leave any clue for her behind him. He took her to his village in hurry.

All the people thought that Shlok hidden Aastha due to her safety. no one didn't know the real face behind Shlok. Aastha thought that she will teach him a lesson in her way so she decided to tight her lips on whole matter.

*********...******************

Aastha saw him, for a second she thought "let him die like this" she looked his pale face and smiled ironically but in next moment she scolded herself

"Aastha you cannot be inhuman like him. You should care of a sick man and what he had done with you, that was his karma but you should do what is right and why do you forget that if he did wrong with you then he did also your help two times so you have to do his help to land his favor on you" she thought and put the cold strips on his forehead until the doctor came.

Doctor saw him and gave the prescription. Aastha brought the medicine and cared of Shlok whole day. In the evening he opened his eyes and saw Aastha slept on the chair. He sighed and understood that she nursed him whole day. He thought about wake up her but he stopped his hand in air when he looked her innocent sleeping face. He was mesmerized by her beauty for some moments. He didn't want to break this beautiful magical illusion around him.

Suddenly she awake and saw that he gazed him like a hypnotized person. She coughed slightly to divert his attention. He came in senses and became embarrassed for a while. She glared him and stood up. He could not match his gazed with her due to his own guilt. She took the tray of fruits and put that in front of him

"First eat something then you have to take your medicine." She took the glass of juice and gave in his hand. He was so surprised by her genuine behavior. He thought that she will hate him forever. He looked her like a fool

"Don't look at me like fool, drink it... I don't want that anything happen to you..."she said in cold manner when Shlok raised his head and held her hand

"Have you forgive me" he asked in hope of his life when she jerked his hand and replied in firm voice

"Please listen the whole. I said I don't want to happen you anything in my home so as long as you are here you have to take care of yourself properly." She said and gave him medicine. All the hopes of Shlok died on her words.

"Listen I don't want to live here also but I cannot leave you alone because I am afraid that you are not safe here. They will search you everywhere and tried to kill you so please tolerate me for few more days until I will not believe that you are safe" he pleaded to her.

"Do I have any other option?" She made her face and left the room.

***********...*****************

She set in her room and was thinking about Aayushmaan. She was thinking that how happy she was in her past. It seemed the perfect life to her. She smiled and thought "when Aayushmaan will get to know that she is very much alive... he would be very happy I should call him ad tell him that I am alive" she took the phone and was just about to dialed the number but suddenly she stopped.

"What will she say to him that she is alive but not as like before? Aastha you lost everything, you don't deserve to him. You lost your dignity, you lost your respect. It is better that he think that you are not alive.

She screamed and broke all the things in fury. Shlok heard the noise in her room and despite of his weakness he ran to her room. She cried very badly. Shlok looked her and punched the wall being remorse. He tried to hold her and console her when she jerked his hands

"Get off me, I don't want to see your face" she cried when Shlok shut the door so that none could see her in that state. He again grabbed her in his arms. This time cried bitterly on his shoulder

"You snatched everything from me. You took away me from Aayushmaan. You ruined me now tell me what I do." She sobbed when he clinched his fist in pain to listen Aayushmaan name. Suddenly he thought... he broke the hug and cupped her face

" I took you away from him but now I will bring him back to you." He said and she was looking him in surprise

"Are you mad" she just could speak only the words when he interrupted her

"Believe me I bring your happiness back" he nodded his head. She just glared him and forgot weeping.

its great...n so different..kudos
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: megha_b

its great...n so different..kudos

thanks dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved the update!!
Seriously Shlok is repenting after all what he did to Astha..😡 Hate him...
And now he is like he will bring back her happiness... It better be...


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Posted: 11 years ago
And plzzz do not stop writing.. this story is awesome... plzzz for your loyal leaders atleast...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sparklingeyes11

Loved the update!!

Seriously Shlok is repenting after all what he did to Astha..😡 Hate him...
And now he is like he will bring back her happiness... It better be...


you read it deeply
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved the update.
Plz don't stop writing.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SHINYSHREYA

Loved the update.

Plz don't stop writing.

yes dear i will not stop
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Posted: 11 years ago
u are awesome writer...
pls continue writing...

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