OS-JALAL JEALOUS(epilogue-pg 78) - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
superbbb aachal...jalal carrying jodha in his arms fabulous...and jodha khasam khas begum wwwooowww...awesome job dear...continue soon plz
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72
Awesome anchal🤗
haaye kya likha hai... yeh dil mange more..😆 i feel tum likhti raho bass likhti raho🤣 aur me padhti rahu😳

super, splendid, marvelous am just short of words now😆


P.S: merry christmas🥳

P.P.S: Update please🤣 jaldi
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
if he had carried her into the hall...it would have been a awesome entrance
superb upt
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
Jalal took jodha with him to his royal throne,turned and greeted all those assembled there...he got seated alongside jodha and asked for the function to commence again...the musicians started strumming the cords again and benazir took to the center of the hall to dance infront of jalal...her everymove calculated to attract his attention,but everyone gathered there had the same questions running in their minds...
RUKU-YEH JALAL KO HO KYA GAYA HAI..KAL JISKI ITNI BEZATTI KI AAJ USSI KO APNE SAATH DARBAR MAIN LE AAYEIN HAIN...JIS JODHA KE BAJAYE BENAZIR KO APNE SAATH BITHAYA AAJ USSI JODHA KO ITNI IZZAT BAKSH RAHE HAIN...HUA KYA HAI EK DIN MAIN.

MAHAM ANGA-JITNA BHI ISS RAJVANSHI BEGUM KO JALAL SE DOUR RAKHNE KI KOSHISH KARO WOH HAMESHA ISSI KE PASS CHALE JATE HAIN...DUNIYA MAIN KYA AURTON KI KAMI HAI JO JALAL ISKE PEECHE HAATH DO KAR PADH GAYE HAIN..

BENAZIR-HUMEIN TOH LAGA THA KI AAJ RAAT SHEHENSHAH HAMARE HONGE MAGAR ISS RAJPUT BEGUM KI VAJAH SE LAGTA HAI HUMEIN APNA MAKSAD PANE MAIN KUCH AUR DIN LAG JAYENGE...

RANVEER-AAISA LAGTA HAI KI IN MOHTARMA KO HUMNE KAHIN DEKHA HAI...LAGTI TOH JANI PEHCHANI SI HAIN...PAR SHEHENSHAH NE INKE MUKH PAR YEH GHOONGHAT KYUN RAKHA HAI...KAHIN YEH...


while benazir was busying eyeing jalal and trying to get his attention.jalal had all his attention on ranveer.the confused look on ranveer's face was an indication that he had still not recognised jodha...jalal wanted to keep it this way for the time being...any other man ogling his wife,over his dead body...jodha is his and only he has the right to look at her..

after the song finished benazir saluted jalal and very seductively tried to walk to him to sit besides him,but jalal put up his hand to stop her...

JALAL-AAJ HUM AAP SAB KO APNE MITRA RANVEER SE MILWANA CAHTE HAIN...YEH KHAS HUMSE MILNE AAYE HAIN AGRA AUR HAMARE BACHPAN KE DOST HAIN.HUM CAHENGE KI INKA SWAGAT SATKAR BAHUT ACCHE SE KIYA JAYE ,INHE YAHAN KISSI KISM KI TAKLEEF NAHI HONI CAHIYE...

with this jalal took his leave and taking jodha with him he left for his chambers...once he reached there he send jodha back to her room and asked her to get ready for dinner...he was going to dine with his 3 khas begums and his dear friend..

JODHA-SAMAJHTE KYA HAIN APNE AAPKO,HUM KYA DASI HAIN JISSI JAB DEKHO KUCH NA KUCH KARNE KA HUKUM DE DETE HAIN...AB BOLA HAI KI HAMARI BEGUM KI TARAH SAJ KE AANA...HUM KYA BEDHANGI KAPDE PEHENTE HAIN...SHEHENSHAH BHI NA.

jodha was getting ready in a turquoise colored lehenga with silver work on it,a low cut choli and a red dupatta...she wore heavy diamond jewellery with this,her beautiful mang tikka when suddenly jalal was announced into her chambers...she was yet to finish dressing up...

JODHA-SHAMA KIJEYEGA SHEHENSHAH HUMEIN THODA SAMAY LAGEGA...AAP CAHEIN TOH BHOJAN PRARAMBH KAR SAKTE HAIN..HUM THODI DER MAIN AA JAYENGE...

JALAL-NAHI JODHA BEGUM,HUM APKO APNE SAATH HI LEKAR JAYENGE...

JODHA(thinking acchi zabardasti hai)-THEEK HAI SHEHENSHAH HUMEIN BAS THODI DER DIJEYE...

jodha started getting ready fast.she put on her bangles and her bindi and was about t tie her hair when jalal stopped her...

JALAL-NAHI JODHA BEGUM,APNE BAAL KHULE RAKHIYE,HUMEIN YEH KHULE ZAYADA ACCHE LAGTE HAIN...

JODHA-PARANTU SHEHENSHAH BAHAR BAHUT HAWA CHAL RAHI HAI,YEH ULAJH JAYENGE...

JALAL-APNE SUNA NA BEGUM...HUMEIN APKI ZULFEIN KHULI HI ACCHI LAGTI HAIN,AAP INHE KHULA RAKHIYE...

after cursing him a lot jodha finally got ready.taking her ghoonghat she was about to proceed to the entrance when jalal stopped her...

JALAL-THARIYE BEGUM

JODHA-AB KYA HUA SHEHENSHAH..

JALAL-HUM AAPKE KAUN HAIN JODHA...

JODHA-YEH KAISA SAWAAL HAI...AAP HAMARE PATI HAIN..

JALAL-TOH AAP ISKA PRAMAAN KAISE DENGE SABKO...

JODHA-SABKO TOH PATA HAI KI HAMARA KYA RISHTA HAI...

JALAL-NAHI JODHA SABKO NAHI PATA...SABKO NAHI PATA

jalal came close to her and taking sindoor out of the arti ki thaali he filled her mang with it...jodha was so embarrassed ..how could she forget to fill her mang...

JODHA-SHAM KIJEYEGA SHEHENSHAH,JALDI JALDI MAIN HUM SINDOOR LAGANA BHOOL GAYE...

JALAL(looking intensely at her)-JO HUMEIN AAPSE JODTI HAI JODHA,HUM CAHTE HAIN KI WOH HAMESHA AAPKE SAATH RAHE...AAGE SE AAISI GUSTAKHI NA HO...

guyz next part aaj raat ko pakka...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
Wow ! wow ! wow ! it was amazing 👏
Just loved it
👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
I'm sooo excite for d dinner!!!...
Sooo much is gonna happen!!!!!... 😛 😉
Wow u r really good!!... Keep up d good work 👏 🤗
Love ya <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
I'm waiting for tonight!
I'm so happy with this update.. It was amazing
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
wow...loved it...
just wish ki u were the writer of the shw !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
AWESOME DEARU 👏🤗
KHUDA KASAM , UPDATE AJ RAAT NAHI MILANA TO TUJHE JINA KHARAB KARDUNGI 😈😈
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80
woww.., jaldi se update karo plzz...

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