OS-JALAL JEALOUS(epilogue-pg 78)

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vinitaj27

@vinitaj27

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#81

wow! its one of my favorite OS on forum. u r an amazing writer. i just can't wait to reaad abt ranveer's reaction when he recognizes jodha. pls update fast.

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spanishgirl88

@spanishgirl88

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Posted: 11 years ago

#82

Nice but i only understand the english 😭

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Arshaya

@ROBSTENLOVER

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Posted: 11 years ago

#83

beautiful part.
Plz update nxt 1 soon!

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Pallavvi

@Pallavvi

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#84

aanchal plz tadpao mat yaar/...😭

next update should be a longer one ...please...😳😊

its awesome...jaldi update karo waiting eagerly

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cyndu

@-cyndu-

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#85

Loved the update...the last part and dude keep the updates longer wait karna bohot mushkil hota hai :P
Tfs! :)

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bokul

@bokul

Master

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#86

u left it at a critical point 😡😡😡

awesome marvellous superb update

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@--Janvie--

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#87

Anchal You always left me Speechless.This OS is just Out of the World.👏 👏 ⭐️Just can't tell you How much I'm loving it.❤️ 😳 ❤️You are one of the MOST Amazing Writer I have ever seen.👏Take a Bow yaar.⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️Seeing this Possesive Jalal is such a treat.I so want all this to happen in the show.😳 😳Want to give you Big🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗for giving us a Jealous Jalal and making all this come true.😃 🥳 The 2nd part and Jalal's Drunk Outburst was just Outstanding!!👏 👏One of the BESTEST part.⭐️ ⭐️That sindoor bit also showed his possesiveness.😛 😳Just Loved it.❤️ 😳 ❤️And The way He said her to keep her Hair open and Jodha's irritation was cho Cuteee!! 😳 Just Loved it.❤️ 😳 ❤️Waiting for Dinner.😳

Edited by --Janvie-- - 11 years ago

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MsCeylon

@MsCeylon

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#88

This is a lovely story

read all 5 parts in one go and am loving it

do update soon

you write very well and I love the AkDha scenes

this would make a lovely script for the show... kyun ki aag baraabar lagi hai iss kahani me... 👍🏼

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aanchal_c

@aanchal_c

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: --Janvie--
Anchal You always left me Speechless.This OS is just Out of the World.👏 👏 ⭐️Just can't tell you How much I'm loving it.❤️ 😳 ❤️You are one of the MOST Amazing Writer I have ever seen.👏Take a Bow yaar.⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️Seeing this Possesive Jalal is such a treat.I so want all this to happen in the show.😳 😳Want to give you Big🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗for giving us a Jealous Jalal and making all this come true.😃 🥳 The 2nd part and Jalal's Drunk Outburst was just Outstanding!!👏 👏One of the BESTEST part.⭐️ ⭐️That sindoor bit also showed his possesiveness.😛 😳Just Loved it.❤️ 😳 ❤️And The way He said her to keep her Hair open and Jodha's irritation was cho Cuteee!! 😳 Just Loved it.❤️ 😳 ❤️Waiting for Dinner.😳

janvie i am not talking to u,sab update kardenge but u dont update ur ff.