OS-JALAL JEALOUS(epilogue-pg 78)

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Jodha was in the market place.she had gone to visit ambey maa's palace..she was very restless,and she was failing to point out the reason for this..she knew she dint like shehenshah paying attention to benazir but she thought it was bcoz benazir did not seem like a good person..jodha ,try as she might could not take out the scene she had seen yesterday from her mind...
flashback...
jodha was sitting in the garden with a book,she was feeling claustrophobic in her room so she had chosen a secluded area in the garden,she did not want to be seen by jalal.nowdays anytime he used to see her he would make sure ,he created a situation to put her down..she was tired of getting hurt and humiliated...she just wanted to enjoy this evening by herself,not even with her bestfriend moti who for some reason would always end my taking shehenshah's side in front of jodha..suddenly she saw benazir emerge out of the water and walk towards her...how the hell did she find me ,jodha thought...

BEN-ADAB BEGUM JODHA,AAP YAHAN AKELE...ITNI SUNSAAN JAGAH PAR..

JODHA-KYUN AB KYA SHEHENSHAH KI BEGUM KO KISSI DAASI KO YEH BATANE KI ZARORAT HAI KI WOH KAHAN AUR KYUN HAI..

BEN-AREY AAP TOH KHAFA HO GAYI..CHALIYE KOI BAAT NAHI...HUMEIN LAGA HUM THOA TAIR LEIN,WOH KYA HAI NA HUMEIN GARMI BAHUT LAGTI HAI...

JODHA-AGAR AAP NE TAIR LIYA HAI TOH AAP JA SAKTI HAIN,HUM APNI PUSTAK PADNA CAHTE HAIN...

BEN-ADAB BEGUM JODHA...

benazir was about to move from there when she saw jalal going somewhere,he was very close to where they were,she decided to use this to her advantage...she purposely jumped into the water and started pretending that she is drowning,and jalal being jalal jumped in to save her.he had not even seen jodha till then,but when he caught benazir his eyes went to jodha who stood there stunned ,her eyes burning in unshed tears...he knew that his closeness with benazir did not go down well with jodha,so he pulled benazir closer to himself,and rushed back to the harem..leaving jodha fuming and frustrated ...

FLASHBACK ENDS..

JODHA-AAP JANTI HAIN MAA KI WOH BENAZIR SHEHENSHAH KO BEWAKOOF BANA RAHI THI,SIRF UNKE SAMEEP AA NE KE LIYE,PARANTU HUMEIN ITNA BURA KYUN LAG RAHA THA...HAMARE ANDAR ITNI AAG KYUN LAGI HUI HAI MAA...HUMEIN KUCH SAMAJH KYUN NAHI AA RAHA...SHEHENSHAH NE HUMEIN KUSURWAR MAN KAR HAMARE SAATH ITNA BURA VAYVHAAR KIYA PARANTU PHIR BHI HUMEIN UNKI ITNI CHINTA KYUN HAI...YEH HUMEIN KYA HO GAYA HAI MAA...HUMEIN KUCH SAMAJH NAHI AA RAHA,HAMARI MADAT KIJIYE MAA...

jodha turned to go back to the palace but her attention got caught when she saw a group of people following a man on horseback going through the market,he did not look like he was from agra but yes he def looked royal,and had a few soldiers following him...he did not look like a mughal,but then what was he doing prancing around agra so comfortably,dint he know that this is the mughal sultanate ...it was very hot and the sun rays were enough to burn anyones flesh..jodha had her face covered..only her eyes could be seen...before she could get into her palki she caught the strangers attention...he could only see the lovely lady's eyes and my my what eyes he thought...like two ambers shining brightly like the sun...her doe like eyes had captivated the strangers attention and he couldnt stop staring at her...jodha turned back and got into the palki and went away,but the strangers eyes did not leave her...he had to know who she was...
"YEH KAUN HAIN,KAPDON SE TOH MUGHAK NAHI LAGTI MAGAR MUGHAL PEHREDARON KE SAATH MEHEL KI AUR JA RAHI HAIN"

soldier"PATA NAHI RAJASA,SHAYAD MUGHAL SULTANAT KI MEHMAAN HAIN"

the royal group made there way to the palace where they were greeted by atgah sahib...

AS-AAEYE RAJA RANVEER...AAPKA AGRA MAIN ISTAKBAL HAI

RAN-DHANYAVAD ATGAH SAHAB ,AB SHEHENSHAH SE MILNE TOH AANA HI THA NA,AKHIR HUM BACHPAN KE DOST HAIN..

atgah sahab led ranveer to jalal's chambers where jalal was waiting for his friend...jalal tooj his friend in a hug and was very happy to see him..

JALAL-ITNE SAALON BAAD HUM AAPKO DEKH RAHE HAIN RANVEER...

RAN-HAAN JALAL,HUMEIN TOH YAKIN NAHI HOTA KI EK HI DESH MAIN HOTE HUE BHI HUM MIL NAHI SAKTE,PAR ISMAIN AAPKI HI GALTI HAI...PURA BHARAT DEKH LIYA MAGAR HAMARE RAJYA AAKAR HUMEIN SEVA KA AVSAR NAHI DIYA...

JALAL-NAHI RANVEER,HUM BAS BAHUT MASROOF HO GAYE THEE...KHAIR YEH BATAEYE AAPKA SAFAR KAISA RAHA...

RAN-BAHUT ACCHA JALAL,APKA AGRA BEHAD KHOOBSURAT HAI,AUR YAHAN KE LOG USSE BHI ZAYADA...

JALAL-HUM AAPKA MATLAB NAHI SAMJHE...KHAIR ABHI AAP VISHRAM KIJEYE ,HUM AAJ RAAT KO AAPSE MILENGE JASN KE MAUKE PAR...

jalal had organised a function for his friend and benazir was to perform there...he had called everyone to that function including jodha but dint know if she would come..she had send a message to hamida that she was not well and had fever and he had even seen khwaja shera coming from her room...on enquiring he had found that she indeed was not well and had high fever...he had wanted to go see her but did not know what he would say,how he would face her so he had kept a tab on her every other hour...

in the evening everyone gathered in the hall and the function was about to start...jalal and ranveer had taken their seats and benazir was called on to start the function..benazir came and every eyes was on her except jalal..he was lost thinking abt jodha..he was worried for her..but he knew he could not go to her right now,he had to stay and entertain his friend..the dance started and benazir moved sensually to allure each and every male there...she danced mostly in front of jalal and ranveer...though jalal eyes were on her hismind was not,everytime his eyes would go the entrance to see if jodha would come or not...the function finished,benazir was praised a lot and when she was about to go and take a seat besides jalal,he suddenly got up and apologised for his early departure,he had to go attend smthing imp...he took everyones leave and went back to his chamber...ranveer came there and asked jalal what was troubling him...

RAN-JALAL,AAJ TAK HUMEIN AAPKO KABHI AAISE NAHI DEKHA,VAHAN ITNI KHOOBSURAT KANYA NRITYA PESH KAR RAHI THI AUR AAP ..HUA KYA HAI AAPKO...

JALAL-KUCH NAHI RANVEER BAS SULTANAT KE KAM MAIN MASHROOF HAIN...AAP BATAEYE AAP KYA KEH RAHE THE KUCH WAQT PEHLE,KI AGRA BHI KHOOBSURAT HAI AUR YAHAN KE REHNE WALE BHI...BENAZIR ITNI KHOOBSURAT LAGI KYA AAPKO...

RAN-NAHI JALAL,BENAZIR JAISI KANYA HUMEIN BAHUT DEKHI HAIN MAGAR JISSE HUMEIN AAAJ DEKHA JALAL,USKA KOI MUQABALA NAHI...USKI SIRF JHALAK BHAR HI TOH DEKHI HAI HUMEIN PAR EK JHALAK NE AAISA JAADU KAR DIYA HAI KI AB SIRF WOH HI HAMARI ANKHON KE SAMNE HAI...

JALAL-KISSE DEKH LIYA AAPNA?

RAN-PATA NAHI JALAL,SIRF USKI ANKHEIN HI DEKHI HAIN,SHAYAD AAPKE YAHAN MEHMAAN HAI,UNKI PALKI DEKHI HUMNE,AUR AAPKE SIPAHI UNHE MEHEL LE JA RAHE THE...

jalal called his royal painter and asked ranveer to describe who he had seen...jalal had to leave for some work but he promised he'd be back soon and he had hoped by then the painting would be complete...

RAN-HIRNI JAISI ANKHEIN ,CHAUKANI...SURAJ SI CHAMAKTI ANKHEIN JINMEIN KOI DIKHAVA YA MAIL NAHI HAI...JINMEIN SHARARAT BHARI HAI...PAR SHARARAT KE SAATH THODA DUKH BHI,SAWAAL KARTI ANKHEIN JINHEIN JAWAB KA INTEZAR HAI...BADI BADI PALKEIN...

ranveer had finished his description and the painter his job...the painter after loking at the finished product got nervous and uncomfortable...

RAN-KYA HUA ,AAP AAISA GHABRA KYUN RAHE HAIN...

PAINTER-JI HUZUR,YEH TOH...

by this time jalal ad also come back,the painter fearing for his life took his leave and prayed to god that his king dosent burn him alive...he could not believe the eyes he had painted and who they belonged to ...

JALAL-TOH KHATAM HO GAYI AAPKI TASVEER,CHALIYE HUMEIN BHI DIKHAEYE KI WOH MOHTARMA HAIN KAUN AKHIR JINHONE AAPKA DIL JEET LIYA...

RAN-AREY WAAH AAJ JALLALUDIN MOHAMMAD DIL KI BAAT KAR RAHE HAIN,YEH TOH CHAMATKAR HI HO GAYA...

jalal(in his mind)-aaj kal sab kuch badal raha hai mere dost,magar samajh nahi aa raha ki yeh ehsaas kya hai...

JALAL-TOH DIKHAEYE NA...

ranveer took off the paper from the painting and what came in front of jalal left him heartbroken and in rage.his eyes turned blood red with anger,he broke out in a sweat...his nails were digging in his palms and blood stated spurting from them...

RAN-YEH WOHI MOHTARMA HAIN JINHEIN HUMNE AGRA KE BAZAR MAIN DEKHA THA,SHAYAD AMBEY MAA KE MANDIR KE PASS...INKI ANKHON NE HUMEIN INKA DEEWANA BANA DIYA HAI JALAL...JAB INKI ANKHEIN ITNI KHOODSURAT HAIN TOH YEH KITNI KHOOBSURAT HONGI...HUM INSE MILNA CAHTE HAIN...KYA AAP INHE JANTE HAIN...

ranveer turned back,but jalal was not to be found...jalal had rushed out of his chamber lest he kill his childhood friend,he was having a hard time explaining to himself that ranveer did not know who the woman was,it was an innocent mistake ,but he could not quell his burning heart...the painting ,those eyes were of JODHA...HIS JODHA...he had never though he could be so mad at someone that he felt like burning his own kingdom,he market place where ranveer saw jodha...that he could ever want to rip apart his childhood friend ...but this is what love does to you...jalal realised he was jealous..he was burning in jealousy and he dint have a cure for it...not a 1000 benazirs could cure him of this...his only cure was JODHA...


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved it was so cute .but can u plz extend it . I wish we could see this jallu in ther serial .
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I loved it. Can u make it two shot, please? Pm me if u do.
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why cant u make it FF out of this pls contnue and PM it u are amazing
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Please make it FF 😳 it is superb👏
jalal and jodha jealous 😎

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Jalal could not think straight..his mind was messed up...the woman his friend had fallen for was his wife...HIS JODHA...jalal wanted to take his sword and cut ranveer into a 1000 pieces,but his heart knew what the real problem was...he has refused to acknowledge his feelings long enough...this one incident made him see just what kind of an effect jodha had on his mind and...his heart...a thing he only considered a piece of organ..something that only had value as long as it helped him live..he had shut it for the longest time and when it had started making itself felt again he had tried to subdue it...he thought back to the time he had seen the ameri princess for the first time...the gangor festival...the beautiful city of amer...and its precious jewel jodha...that was the first time his heart had raced at all...he had been with innumerable women but had never felt that sensation he had felt that night seeing jodha's gorgeous beauty,her soulful eyes...he knew she was beautiful inside out but things had happened after that ,that had made him hunt jodha like an animal hunts his prey...not bcoz he recognised his feelings for her ,but bcoz jodha had dared to hurt the ego and pride of shehenshah-e-hind...

jalal knew that jodha was a beautiful person,but in his confidence and pride he forgot that she was as much a gem now as she was before their marriage...any saint could fall for her,let alone any man...hadnt he heard of so many princesses vying for her hand...he always considered it a matter of pride that now she is his only...YES SHE IS HIS,but she is still desirable...a woman ,any man would kill for.hadnt he done it himself...and now when his friend had seen and fallen for JODHA..he did not know how to handle this...he was so mad...he straight away went and ordered drinks to be served...sitting on the terrace under the moon the shehenshah had consumed alcohol to calm his raging nerves,but nothing could calm him down...all he could think was how jodha had become someone elses desire ...just the thought of her being desired was consuming him with unprecedented anger and he knew only one person could help him now...


jalal staggered and stood right at the entrance of her hojra...there was no noise coming from inside...either she was sleeping or she wasnt there...he prayed for the former...he sent the guards away and went inside...she was all alone in her bedchamber..for once not surrounded by her maids..for once without any obstacles...he went and stood next to her bed,making sure not to fall down and scare her...

JALAL(whispering)-JODHA BEGUM...

when jodha dint get up he called her a little loudly...

JALAL-JODHA BEGUM...

jodha got up with a start...

JODHA-SHENSHAH AAP YAHN ,ISS WAQT...(adjusting her hair and her dress).

JALAL-HUMEIN AAPSE BAAT KARNI HAI...ABHI ISSI WAQT...

jodha senses he is not sober,and she recollects what had happened the last time he had come to her in this state...she did not want to entertain him now,but things were as it is really bitter between them,she dint want things to get worse..she got up from her bed and took to the couch,and asked him to take a seat if he wanted...jalal sat down besides her,his gaze not leaving her face once..making her all the more uncomfortable...

JODHA-AAP HUMSE KUCH KEHNA CAHTE HAIN SHEHENSHAH...

JALAL-AAP APNE AAP KO SAMAJHTI KYA HAIN JODHA BEGUM...AAPKI HIMMAT KAISE HUI AAJ BAZAR JANE KI...

JODHA-JI,HUM KUCH SAMJHE NAHI,AAJ SHUKRAVAR HAI,HAR SHUKRAVAR KO HUM AMBE MAA KE DARSHAN KE LIYE JATE HAIN,AAJ BHI GAYE THEE,AB ISMEIN HUMSE KYA GALTI HUI..

JALAL-GALTI NAHI GUNAH HUA HAI AAPSE(stand up while saying this loudly)...AGAR AAJ AAP VAHAN NAHI JATI TOH AAJ HAMARA YEH HAAL NAHI HOTA...AAJ USNE AAPKO NAHI DEKHA HOTA...AAJ HUMEIN AAISA NAHI LAGTA KI HUM (he tries to control his anger)

JODHA-HUMEIN SHAMA KIJEYE SHEHENSHAH PARANTU HUMEIN KUCH SAMAJH NAHI AA RAHA HAI...

jalal comes closer to jodha and caresses her face,jodha gets shocked...when she tries to back away jalal grabs hold of her waist and pulls her right into his chest..jodha is really scared by now..

JODHA-SHEHENSHAH APP...

JALAL-SHHH(places his finger on her lips)AB HUM BOLENGE AUR AAP SUNENGI...KYUN HAIN AAP AAISI JODHA BEGUM...KYA YEH KAFI NAHI HAI KI AAPKA DIL BILKUL PAK HAI...AAPKO ITNA HASEEN HONI KI KYA ZAROORAT THI...ITNI HASEEN KI SANT LOG BHI AAPKE DWEEWANE HO JAYEIN..TOH PHIR HUM JAISE AADMIYON KA KYA KEHNA...KYUN AAPKO DEKH KAR SAB APNE HOSH KHO DETE HAIN...KYUN AAPKE DEEWANE HO JATE HAIN,JAISE HUM HO GAYE THEE...JAB HUMNE AAPKO PEHLI BAAR DEKHA THA...AAJ BHI JAB USS DIN KE BAARE MAIN SOCHTE HAIN TOH YAHAN SEENE MAIN DARD SA UTHNE LAGTA HAI...

AAISA KYA HAI AAPMEIN JO SABKO APKI TARAF KHEECHTA HAI...DOST KO DUSHMAN BANANE KI TAKAT RAKHTI HAIN AAP...AB HAMARE DOST RANVEER KO HI LE LIJEYE..AAYE TOH THEE HUMSE MILNE MAGAR AAPKI EK JHALAK KE BAAD AAPKE DEEWANE HO CHUKE HAIN...AB AAP HI BATAEYE HUM UNHE KYA SAZA DEIN...MARR DALEIN UNHEIN KI UNHONE JURAT KI HAMARI JODHA KO DEKHNE KI..KISS KISS KI ANKHEON KO ROK SAKTEIN HAIN HUM...HUM JANTE HAIN YEH NAHI HO SAKTA MAGAR HUM KYA KAREIN,JAB BHI KOI AAPKI TARAF AANKH UTHATA HAI HUMEIN LAGTA HAI KI HUM USKI ANKHEIN USSE CHEEN LEIN...JAB KOI APKI KHOOBSURATI KI BAATEIN KARTA HAI MANN HOTA HAI USSE ZINDA JALA DEIN...MAGAR PURI DUNIYA KO TOH KHATAM NAHI KAR SAKTA NA HUM...YEH SHAYAD SE GALAT HOGA...TOH AAP HI BATAEYE HUM KYA KAREIN..KAISE IS AAG KO ROKEIN JO HAMARE SEENE MAIN JAL RAHI HAI...KAISE PATA LAGAYEIN KI AAPKE PASS AATE HI HAMARE SEENE MAIN JO YEH KHUSHI UMADTI HAI USKA ASLI KAARAN KYA HAI...HUMEIN AAJ TAK SIRF FATEH KARNA SEEKHA HAI..LADNA AUR JEETNA SIKHA HAI...ISS DARD KE BAARE MAIN HUMEIN KUCH NAHI PATA...KYA AAP HAMARI MADAT KAR SAKTI HAIN...

jodha is totally shocked...her mouth is open her eyes and wide..she could not believe her ears..the shehenshah had just told her something that could change their lives forever..she wanted to respond to this but did not have a response...try as she might she could not hold back her blush..she lowered her eyes and said...

JODHA-KAFI RATRI HO CHUKI HAI SHEHENSHAH,HUMEIN MAAF KIJEYEGA...WOH HUM...HUM...

JALAL-HAAN KAFI RAAT HO CHUKI HAI,AAP SONE JA RAHI HONGI...HUMNE AAPKI NEEND MAIN KHALAL DALA,MAAF KIJEYE...MAGAR EK BAAT YAAD RAKHNA JODHA...AAP SIRF MUGHAL SULTANAT KI BEGUM NAHI HAI...AAP HAMARI BEGUM HAIN...AAP JALLALUDIN KI JODHA HAIN...SHABHA KHAIR...
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Originally posted by: roshaeldsouza91

Please make it FF 😳 it is superb👏

jalal and jodha jealous 😎

please plaese make it an FF😳


not really an ff,lets see how long i can make it...😊

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