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Posted: 11 years ago

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Aashlok OS-First Love...Honeymoon special

Part 3-Last

Well friends i m too bad in writing when it comes to romance...so again bear it friends...

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Before reading this part please listen this song ...click on the link below...a little hope that u will enjoy this part...
http://tune.pk/video/890042/Kabhi-Jo-Baadal-Barse-Full-Song-Audio-By-Shreya-Ghoshal-Jackpot

It was about midnight when suddenly astha wake up ...

She was feeling restless...she tried to sleep again but couldn't ...

she just get up ...and walked with difficulty towards window as her leg was still paining a little...and checked whether rain stopped or not...

It was still raining...

Then she went near shlok and lie next to him...she was constantly staring him ...
then she caressed his face...

Kabhi jo baadal barse
Main dekhoon tujhe aankhein bharke..
Tu lage mujhe pehli baarish ki duaa..

Some times, when rain clouds,
I (like clouds, water) hits my eyes, you see,
The first rain of the season you wish to look like ...

But she found him extremely cold...

She noticed that he was trembling too ...his clothes were also little wet...

She remembered how for her ...he went outside two times in sooo much rain and is still in wet clothes...
she was worried for him now ...

She whispered in her ear...shlok ...

Shlok:hmmm...

Astha:r u OK shlok??????...

Shlok:i m feeling cold but u don't worry I will be fine...
but astha could see his condition ...how badly he was trembling...he was getting cold like ice...she started rubbing his hands to provide him some heat...but there was no change in his condition...

Astha thought something for a while and get close to him...very close and started unbuttoning his shirt...

Shlok:what are u doing astha...he said holding her hand...

Astha :ur body is getting so cold u need some heat shlok ...let me do that for u...she said looking in his eyes...

Shlok:I have given u sooo much pain... then why u want to reduce my pain...

Astha:I m doing it for that shlok whom I love ...that shlok who still loves me...for that shlok who saved my life risking his own life even without thinking for a second ...I m doing it for my love...please don't stop me...

Tears roll down his face on listening her feelings for him...

His shivering was getting worse...without wasting even a second astha unbottoned his shirt completely and removed it ...then she came on top of him and hugged him tightly ...so tightly that their bodies were crushing into each other..her hands moved to his back...caressing his body...providing him heat so that his body temperature gets normal...

Tere pehloo mein reh loon..
Main khud ko paagal keh loon..
Tu gham de ya khushiyaan sah loon saathiyaa..

I will live in your shadow
I (you) want to be called crazy
Whether you give me the sadness or joy, my dear, I will bear ...

Astha was continuously caressing his back...his hands ...his arms ...his whole body...even
she was rubbing his feet by hers...to make her normal soon...

Shlok: I m sorry astha ...please forgive me...he whispered in his half conscious state...I don't want to lose u...please forgive me once...
he was continuously repeating this in semi-conscious state...
tears roll down her eyes... as she knew one never lies in conditions like these...
his lips were getting blue due to cold...astha noticed this...the very next second she locked her lips with his and licked and sucked his lips...

After one hour constant effort by her...shlok's body temperature was getting normal...
he was feeling normal now...
astha was still hugging him...her face was resting on his bare chest...

Shlok :astha I m fine now...

Astha still hugging him...just lift her face and look into his eyes and said...
when u were not conscious u ask my forgiveness... u know it shlok...

Shlok : astha I was not that much unconscious that I cann't hear my heart's voice...please forgive me astha...

Koi nahi, tere siva mera yahaan..
Manzilein, hain meri to sab yahaan..
Mita de sabhi aaja faasle..
Main chahoon mujhe mujhse baant le..
Zara sa mujh mein tu jhaank le..
Main hoon kya..

Mine is none other than you, there's
All my sites are here (you alone)
Come over all distances,
I wish to share me with yourself
A small peek at me ..
What I'm doing ...

Astha:unless and until u answer my all questions...I will never forgive u shlok never ... tears were rolling down her face...
shlok wiped her tears...and said...which question u want me to answer... I will tell u everything today...

Astha:if u don't love me then why u saved my life...if u really hates me then why u let that kiss happen between us...did u ever love me even for a second like the way I love u... her tears were falling on his face...

Pehle kabhi, na tune mujhe gham diya..
Phir mujhe, kyun tanhaa kar diya..
Guzaare the jo lamhe pyaar ke
Hamesha tujhe apna maan ke..
To phir tune badli kyoon adaa,
Ye kyoon kiya..

Before, you did not give me any grief,
Then why do you alone have made me ..
We have passed the moment of love,
, Thinking of you as mine
Why you've changed your way
Why did you do?...

Shlok:I will never hide it anymore astha...its true that I married u to take revenge of my baba's insults...that's why I was threatening u for ur baba's reputation...so that u can feel how it feels when ur parents are insulted...but after our marriage I realized my love for u...with each and every passing day...I realized that its me who needs u more...u have become purpose of my life...all my moments with u...all my love for u was true...but the only lie was my revenge ...my anger for u...but I failed in trying to hate u...I need u astha for my whole life...please forgive me once ...I love u ... ..I always truly loved u...this the way I m ...a bad person ...a bad husband...but please never leave me like swati...his eyes were filled with tears...will u leave me because I m a bad person???...
he questioned her with sooo much pain in his eyes...

"People build up walls, not to keep others out but to see who cares enough to break them down"...

Astha:was crying ...I m sorry shlok...I never wanted ur baba's insult ...that day all happened mistakenly but i never wanted that... and I will forgive u on just one condition...

Shlok...which condition astha???...

Astha:I want my old shlok back ...that shlok whom I loved a lot...whom I still love...and who still loves me...
she said looking into his eyes...

Shlok:I promise I will return u your old shlok...just say once that u forgive me astha...

"Sometimes we do have to be selfless and not selfish and think of what's going to be the best for the ones we love"...

Astha:only if u promise that u will never repeat ur mistake ...

Shlok :promise I will never ever repeat my mistakes...I dont want to lose u...I was just half dead when u fainted because of that snake bite

Astha...but u were there for me na...then how could anything happen to me ..she smiled ...

"Its not about who hurt you and broke u down.Its about who was always there and made u smile again"...

Shlok hugged her tightly...

They were hugging each other from minutes when astha gave a wet kiss on his bare chest and said ...I love u shlok...I m yours ...I will never leave u ...I know how much u loves me shlok...

Kabhi jo baadal barse
Main dekhoon tujhe aankhein bharke..
Tu lage mujhe pehli baarish ki duaa..

Some times, when rain clouds,
I (like clouds, water) hits my eyes, you see,
The first rain of the season you wish to look like

Tere pehloo mein reh loon..
Main khud ko paagal keh loon..
Tu gham de ya khushiyaan sah loon saathiyaa..

I will live in your shadow
I (you) want to be called crazy
Whether you give me the sadness or joy, my dear, I will bear..

Shlok rolled and now he was on her top...
he was watching her lovingly...I love u 2 saying this he kissed her forehead ... astha closed her eyes...

Her hands traveled from his back to his hair...
shlok kissed her eyes lightly... then he kissed her nose...sucked her earlobe... then he shifted to her throat...giving her wet kisses all over there...he caressed her milky white shoulders and gave her wet kisses there too...he left his love marks everywhere on her body...today he was completely claiming her as his ...

inn lamho ke daaman mein, pakija se riste hain

in the embrace of these moments, there are some neat/pure bonds

koyi kalma mohabbat ka dohrate farishtein hain

these messehngers/angels are reapeting the statement some statement of love

khaamosh si hai jamin, hairan sa phalak hai

earth is silent and the sky id disturbed/worried

ek noor hi noor sa abb aasmaan talak hai

there is light and only light upto the sky

(nagme hi nagme hai jaagati soti fijao mein

there is melody in every slept and awake environment

husn hai sari adao mein, ishq hai jaise hawao mein)

there is beauty in every style, its like there is love in the air

(kaisa yeh ishq hai, kaisa yeh khwab hai

what kind a love is this, what kind a dream is this

kaise jasbat ka umda sailaab hai) -

how the flood of feelings is overflowing

din badale raate badali, bate badali

days have changed, nights have changed, things are changed

jine ke andaaz hi badale hain

the style of living is changed

His sweet torture was making her to moan...
and her moans were making him more wild in his demands...

As he claimed her sweet soft pink lips ...astha hugged him tightly making her body to crush into his because of his torture...

After they became breathless they break their kiss...

inn lamho ke daaman mein, pakija se riste hain

in the embrace of these moments, there are some neat/pure bonds

koyi kalma mohabbat ka dohrate farishtein hain

these messehngers/angels are reapeting the statement some statement of love

samay ne yeh kya kiya, badal di hai kaaya

what's the time has dione, it has changed the whole thing

tumhe maine pa liya, mujhe tumne paaya

i got you, and you got me

mile dekho aise hai hum, ke do sur ho jaise madhdham

we have met like, two tunes of melody are met

koyi saadhana koyi kam kisi raag mein

some devotion was less

ke prem aag mein, jalte dono hi the

that we both were burning in the fire of love

tan bhi hai mann bhi, mann bhi hai tan bhi -

now there is heart as well as body

hmmm hmmm hmmm... mere khwaabo ke iss gulistaan mein, tumse hi tum bahaar chhayi hai

in the garden of my dreams there is blossom because of you

phulo mein rang mere the lekin, iname khusbu tumhi se aaye hain

the colors in the flower was mine, but it got fragrant because of you

(kyun hai yeh aarjoo, kyun hai yeh justju

why there is such desire, why there is such an quest

kyun dil bechain hai, kyun dil betaab hai)

why this heart is restless, why it is impatient

din badale raate badali, bate badali

days have changed, nights have changed, things are changed

jine ke andaaz hi badale hain

the style of living is changed

Today they were going mad for each other ...like they were united after millions of separation...like this was the first and last time they are together...

Astha placed wet kisses on his chest ...on his shoulders...on his neck and face...

the corner of his lips and finally she sucked his lips...

Shlok was really surprised to see her boldness...
he said...I don't know u love me sooo much...
she felt really shy...and hide her face in his chest...

Shlok's hands now moved to her back and he started unwrapping her white cloth giving her kisses all over her body...

this night was the night of union of two souls...the distances between these two make them realize how much they love each other...and how true is their love...

inn lamho ke daaman mein, pakija se riste hain

in the embrace of these moments, there are some neat/pure bonds

koyi kalma mohabbat ka dohrate farishtein hain

these messehngers/angels are reapeting the statement some statement of love

nagme hi nagme hai jaagati soti fijao mein

there is melody in every slept and awake environment

husn hai sari adao mein, ishq hai jaise hawao mein

there is beauty in every style, its like there is love in the air

ishq hai jaise hawao mein like there is love in the air

"You don't need to promise me the moon and the stars...just promise me u will stand under them with me forever."

Extremely sorry for mistakes😕 ...updated in a hurry🥱...

Edited by meerab... - 11 years ago

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pixi_nightingal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#112

Suberb
With the image it got more hotwa hotwa 😳 😳

Edited by fatima_FM - 11 years ago

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lechu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#113

loved it a lot dear

your most beautiful and romantic update till

fabulous...

well done dear

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Sg2013

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Posted: 11 years ago

#114

Lovely post meerab. What a beautiful OS.

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mmjjppss

@mmjjppss

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Posted: 11 years ago

#115

Awesome... apt pics... great work yaar...

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@rbb1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#116

Wow that was fab I love the last line, thank you do much for post it

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Anusha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#117

mushy mushy post... aww ... so lovely.

loved how shlok was all honest at the end...meerab dear ur wonderful🤗

thanks for the christmas treat...

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mariyam rifna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#118

awww that was a hawt update. ..I loved it, I loved it... very beautiful, awesome os thankuu for this OS..

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lechu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: Asharkibiwi
awww that was a hawt update. ..I loved it, I loved it... very beautiful, awesome os thankuu for this OS..

i know it mariyam

you will be now in shloky land😉 right?

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Roshani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#120

wow romantic

so hot

so lovely

so emotional

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