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Previously i felt sorry for DD. He was unfortunate to witness the death of his father, the destruction of his entire life in front of his eyes. He was that ill fated father who never knew he had such an adorable son. I was looking forward to that day when he would know his son. But he is flawed beyond redemption and to the level of mental derangement. What else can explain his ways of eliminating arnav's father and his attempt to kill khushi. But after anjali emptied three rounds of bullet into his head, after being dumbstruck for long unable to come to terms that the man was finally gone, i still felt sorry for him. What would have become of his life, had chaturvedis not played the takeover card on his father. He lived a life of lies, some of which he told and some of which, he was told. But how we live our life is ultimately how we are capable of handling it.

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Let's start with the note in the beginning. You said, "Recommendations, appreciation posts, etc. never fail to brighten the day of a writer and I'm no exception to that", well I can say there is no difference with a reader, if he gets a mention in the note of one of his favourite writer and then even a thank you from the writer. I must confess, this all brighten the day for me even before reading the last part. I'm glad and happy, that I (unknowingly 😊 ) was some kind of help for you. But then you have been wrong at one point. You said, sometime you think a thank you is too less for what I do, but your one thank you is more than needed. It's more the other way, no matter how many times I thank you for this wonderful and (add all available superlatives, that are available in a dictionary) story, it will be always less. I don't know, how much time you have invested in writing each of the 85 chapters (including the prologue and epilogue), you easily could have used that time for other things in your life. Thank you for taking out your time to make us happy and to enterain us. *bundle of your favourite flowers for you* 😊

Ehmm before I forget, after your note there was also the last part of the story. 😃

It was high drama, Dushyant had really gone insane, but my wish came true, he died through Anjali's hands, the one, he had thought, he could never hurt. What an irony. And I think, Anjali would have hesitated to shoot at Dushyant, if he hadn't threatened and tried to kill her also. This must have brought to her mind, that for Dushyant the desire for revenge has been greater than his love for her.

In my last comment I had mentioned, that Dushyant is due his revenge connected strongly with the past and that in his eyes his old house would have been a "good" place to kill the enemy's heir. I also had in my mind the old factory of his father, but thought, the place, where his father died, would have been much more "suitable" for the occasion. I guess his old house was occupied, so he had to shift to the factory. 😆

"a first stop to the place where the ice-cream factory was located; also the place where he had been directed by Anjali to come"

Nityanand is nearby Arnav's ice-cream factory or Arnav's ice-cream factory was fomer Nityanand? The second one would explain Khushi's reaction, when Arnav had shown the plot in the presentation.

The indian police really arrived after everything is was over and the villain death. I hope Anjali will be cleared of any charges due acting in self-defence.

Khushi's 25th b'day will no one never forget like we won't ever forget this story, IPK and our Arshi. 😳

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What an end. Wil, comment more later

felt bad for Dushyant though.. loved the update..

Omg what an ending Chaitu-ji!!!!! That was totally filmy with a twist, I loved it 😊

What a great finale to a great story. Hats off! For the first time Anjali had my admiration for being a role model for women. It takes strength to overcome so many tragedies in her life, the bad decisions she has taken and ultimately pull the trigger on the man who fathered her child - all this because she saw the light and wanted to do the right thing. Bravo! Finally Rudra comes through for the family, at least as a brother. You've put him on the right path to redemption.
As far as Dushyant is concerned - those who live by the sword die by the sword.

Congratulations for writing this lovely story. LLL is a magnum opus.

that was a very filmy climax !!!!!!!!!!!!! our Hero saved khushi courtesy Dushyanth's delay ... However we like this type of climax rather than sad ending... khudos Anjali 👏 poor Dushyanth he did not even know about Nakul ... i really appreciate khushi's guts , she surprised us with her calm behaviour , she did buy some time by indulging Dushyanth in conversation...

Anjali's ending reminds me Fanaa... Perfect Women's day blow. Loved it. I didn't totaly xpect Rudra wil accompany Arnav.. Waitin for happy epilogue...Stil, i gonna realy miss LLL a lot.

Such an exciting climax
I'm impressed on how Anjali composed herself and restored the balance
Rudra and Arnav were good and I'm glad helped each other
What a start to Khushi's birthday
Thank god they found Khushi and Anjali had to make an important choice