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Posted: 11 years ago
Rudra has a heart some where which made him come to help her rescue...I have to appreciate Humera for acting wisely...chaturvedis have done something grave which they are paying high time now...I am just surprised why did dhusyant kept khushi alive instead of eliminating her...may be there is some thing else to this plan of his...now Arnav too knows the address...can't wait for Friday...can't believe that this chapter is last but one...I do not want this story to end so soon...thanks for the PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow great update lot of things came out hope arnav finds his khushi soon...
cant beleive only 1 chap is left
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Posted: 11 years ago
Rudra walks in and offers info voluntarily . And how come Arnav is out of the loop..? Humera chose not to share it with Arnav..?
And Anjali is heading to confront D where..? In their new house..?

I feel terrible for Anjali...so hard to find love.

And finally Arnav is giving voice to his misgivings regarding the Chaturvedi involvement in nityanand .

Now...when is my hero riding in and sweep Kushi away from the evil man..?
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Posted: 11 years ago
i just finished reading your story till chapter 79. must say what a wonderful story. you must have done a lot of research to write such a story. the entire pot and all the characters are are very brilliantly portrayed. hats off to you for writing such a complex story. now eagerly waiting for the last chapter. h ope anjali doesn't do anything foolish. waiting eagerly for the last chapter
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Posted: 11 years ago
Unres on pg 127
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Posted: 11 years ago
For the Finale on Friday 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
I want ArHi reunion and happily ever after. Bas!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I have to give it to Khushi, if I were her I would have been hysterical

No Dushyant! You were grey for me. But to kill Khushi (who hasnt even ever wronged you) and to in fact take pleasure in it... That is inhumane and insane! Anjali and I have both been blind.

I feel for Anjali. Never got anything. And also ended up killing the man she loved after hating him completely. I hope Anjali isnt imprisoned. They can always pin it towards circumstantial actions, nahi?

That Rudra got 'onto the field' surprised me more. I am unclear the motive tho'. Khushi's well being, naahh? Seeing Dushyant, his foe, lose it all? Could be... Still I dont like Rudra. My hatred for him goes beyond a few acts of misplaced/ sudden kindness towards ArHi...

I dont know what more to say. I am over whelmed. Itna bhi mushkil se likha... I shouldnt have stalked for the first spot...

Arnav and Khushi are together. Bas! 😃

I am waiting for the epilogue for my happily ever after and only then I will bid good bye to LLL 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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So the answer to the question as to why Dushyanth did not kill Khushi instantly, he himself gave it that he wanted to enjoy the show kind of like a salvation for him. And Khushi knew about Nityanand!!! Does she know the role the senior Chaturvedhis had behind his death, may be not totally.

So Dushyanth is working alone here. This fact surprised me Chaitali, Usually in movies when such situations arise, you see so many of hired goons protecting the factory premises so that the hero does not enter the building etc. But here he is totally alone. Why?? Was he so overconfident that he could manage everything alone or was he so foolish to not be able to think through other possibilities like Arnav coming to rescue her either by himself or with police support. Why did he not think of having a back up??? (not that I am complaining)

Rudra accompanying Arnav to rescue his sister, I liked this. As I had mentioned earlier too, Rudra might be bad at many levels, but he is not a killer. And Arnav is all tensed up and you gave a good picture of it too.

Loved the ultimate fight between Arnav, Rudra on one side and Dushyanth on the other.

So ultimately it was Anjali who fired the shots at Dushyanth, the father of her child, the killer of her father. What an irony!!! Anjali was so correct, the person who wanted to avenge his father's death did not mind killing someone else's father. Finally Dushyanth never knew that he was the father of Nakul.

After the ending one question remains in my mind. Agreed that the Chaturvedis destroyed the Kotak's business and pushed Nityanand to commit suicide. It did affect Dushyanth as it was his family business and it was his father. Revenge was inevitable. But why did he chose this path of revenge?? Did he not have any sane methods to teach them a lesson? This is something which has been going on in my mind since Dushyanth's past has come out.
I wish Chaitali or someone help me with this dilemma.

So what next? Waiting to read the epilogue.
Edited by canapoem - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago



This is a lovely poem by Kaifi Azmi and it is dedicated to every woman who has a bit of Anjali in her. I know it is Woman's Day tomorrow and I hate the fact one day is earmarked for us, we have it all and we still give. So for every woman, celebrate being "you" always.

Aurat (Woman) - English in black and Urdu in red


uth merii jaan mere saath hii chalnaa hai tujhe
qalb-e-mahoul mein larzaan sharar-e-jang hain aaj
hausley waqt ke aur ziist ke yakrang hain aaj
aabgiinon mein tapaan walwale-e- sang hain aaj
husn aur ishq ham aawaaz-o-humaahang hain aaj
jis mein jaltaa huun usi aag mein jalnaa hai tujhe
uth merii jaan mere saath hii chalnaa hai tujhe

Arise, my love, for now you must march with me
Flames of war are ablaze in our world today
Time and fate have the same aspirations today
Our tears will flow like hot lava today
Beauty and love have one life and one soul today
You must burn in the fire of freedom with me
Arise, my love, for now you must march with me

zindagii jehad mein hai sabr ke qaabuu mein nahiin
nabz-e-hastii kaa lahuu kaamptii aansuu mein nahii
urne khulne mein hai nakhat kham-e-gesu mein nahiin
jannat aik aur hai jo mard ke pahluu mein nahiin
uskii aazaad ravish par bhii machalnaa hai tujhe
uth merii jaan mere saath hii chalnaa hai tujhe

Patience will not help you struggle through life
Blood, not tears, sustains the pulse of life
You will fly when you're free and not ensnared by love
Heaven is not just in the arms of the man you love
Walk unfettered on the path of freedom with me
Arise, my love, for now you must march with me

goshey goshey mein sulagtii hai chitaa tere liye
farz kaa bhes badaltii hai qazaa tere liye
qahar hai terii har narm adaa tere liye
zahar hii zahar hai duniyaa kii havaa tere liye
rut badal daal agar phuulnaa phalnaa hai tujhe
uth merii jaan mere saath hii chalnaa hai tujhe

Wherever you go sacrifice awaits you
To surrender is a way of life for you
All your charms condemn you
The ways of the world are poison for you
Change the seasons to flourish and be free
Arise, my love, for now you must march with me.

qadr ab tak terii tarriikh ne jaanii hii nahiin
tujh mein shole bhii hain bas ashkfishaanii hii nahiin
tu haqiiqat bhii hai dilchasp kahaanii hii nahiin
terii hastii bhii hai ik chiiz javaanii hii nahiin
apnii tarrikh kaa unvaan badalnaa hai tujhe
uth merii jaan mere saath hii chalnaa hai tujhe

History has not known your worth thus far
You have burning embers too, not merely tears
You're reality too, not a mere amusing anecdote
Your personality is something too, not just your youth
You've to change the title of your history
Arise, my love, for now you must march with me.

tod kar rasm ke but bare qadamat se nikal
zof-e-ishrat se nikal, vaham-e-nazaakat se nikal
nafs ke khiinche hue halq-e-azmal se nikal
yeh bhii ek qaid hii hai, qaid-e-muhabbat se nikal
raah kaa khaar hii kyaa gul bhii kuchalnaa hai tujhe
uth merii jaan mere saath hii chalnaa hai tujhe

Emerge out of ancient bondage, break the idols of tradition,
the weakness of pleasure, this mirage of fragility
these self-drawn boundaries of imagined greatness
the bondage of love, for this too is a bondage
Not merely the thorns on the path, you have to trample on flowers too
Arise, my love, for now you must march with me.

tod yeh azm-shikan dagdag-e-pand bhii tor
terii khaatir hai jo zanjiir vah saugandh bhii tor
tauq yeh bhii zammruud kaa gulband bhii tor
tod paimana-e-mardaan-e-khirdmand bhii tor
banke tuufaan chhalaknaa hai ubalnaa hai tujhe
uth merii jaan mere saath hii chalnaa hai tujhe

Shatter these resolve breaking suspicions of sermons
these vows that have become shackles
this too, this necklace of emeralds
these standards set by the wise men
You have to turn into a tempest, bubble and boil over
Arise, my love, for now you must march with me.

tuu falaatuno-arastuu haii tuu zohraa parviin
tere qabze mein hai garduun, terii thokar mein zamiin
haan, uthaa, jald uthaa paae-muqqadar se jabiin
main bhii rukne kaa nahii waqt bhii rukne kaa nahiin
larkharaayegii kahaan tak ki sambhalnaa hai tujhe
uth merii jaan mere saath hii chalnaa hai tujhe

You are Aristotle's philosophy, Venus, Pleiades
You control the sky, the earth at your feet
Yes, raise, fast, raise your forehead from the feet of fate
I too am not going to pause, nor will the time
How long would you falter, you have to be firm
Arise, my love, for now you must march with me.


Edited by Kalyaani - 11 years ago

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