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Posted: 11 years ago
Popcorn!

Coke!

Everything was set!

And my net went down to drain!

But tonight it shouldn't be me who should be having murderous intentions.. Meri Virtual family members are quite capable! ;)


Now i wonder, just like Anjali, if Dikki was always this loon.. This insane.. Maybe.

But i must say Khushi held the fort quite well. She didn't let the fear and despair settle in, especially in the beginning. But after what Dusht Dikki revealed, anyone would freeze beyond reason. That man is a bloody cold blooded murderer, who killed her father in law and was flaunting how easily he escaped it.

Anjali well.. She was commendable and in control. Thats what i like about her, she observes first and then reacts!what she did and why she did, is understandable. It needs courage to pull off something like this and Anjali here is no coward.

Arnav and jojo were well entertaining, jojo was. I mean seriously his reactions at times are so amusing! Bottom line is : He helped Arnav save his sister and he helped full. Thats what that matters.

Its end, and we are bound to collect the happy stuff. Only that i wish this end was umm... Some 20-25 chps away? ;)


p.S:: Khushi had her 'Mentos' moment. She guessed Nityanand part right, i guess she finally realised where had she heard his name befre!

P.P.S: i still dun understand why dikki killed Adi raizada?

P.P.P.S: did he date Anjali intially to get a close route to Adi raizada?
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome part..Brilliant writing Chaitalee.👏
Khushi was kidnapped and D was insane. So D was responsible for Arnav and Naina's hasty marriage??😲( sorry I am confused over there, so might be misunderstanding something). The bravery Khushi showed through out the time was just amazing.. The fight was awesome. Though I hate R but as I said earlier he was much better than D because he was not a killer and not at all insane like D😡. I have assumed that Anjali would kill D, the father of her only child but it was hard to read. She was right about D that though he lived his life to seek revenge of his father 's suicide but he didn't think twice while killing hers, indeed an irony. And he never knew that Nakul was his son, poor Anjali..

Waiting for the Epilogue.. It's bitter sweet moment for me . I am happy that this story turned out this good but sad that it is over 😕😊. I am hoping for another fantastic story from you Chaitalee very soon😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
i must confess i cried ..for anji for the helplessness she must have felt
what abt rudra ?? will he his wife go back to him ..think not she deserves better

will anji go to jail??
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Posted: 11 years ago
I've just read your entire story in 2 days.
Can't believe the timing - with you posting the last chapter today.
Luckily that means I haven't had to wait to find out what happens next.
My head is still spinning with all that information I'm trying to assimilate.
The attention to detail in fleshing out each character is amazing.
I can see the point of view of each one of them even when not agreeing with them.
Love your monicker SMJ - how perfect is that!
Arnav and Khushi are perfect - with each other and for each other.
Eagerly waiting for the epilogue.
I'm astounded how you were able to write Much ado about nothing with this one ongoing...talented much?




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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful! Hope u write more Arshi stories. Thanks for the email.
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG!!!!!!! 😒
What a way to end this
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Posted: 11 years ago
Brilliant chapter...Dushyant is insane...he got killed for his insanity...I was glad that Rudra too accompanied Arnav...feeling bad this story has come to an end...it was a wonderful journey...thanks for the PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
The last part was really dramatic . Poor Anjali - feeling sad for her. This was a wonderful story
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Posted: 11 years ago
a fabulous chapter...feel bad for anjali but it was very brave of her...looking forward to the epilogue
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Posted: 11 years ago
I'm not sure how to say this for the past two weeks i had been reading this FF right from the beginning and today i finished with chapter 80 i can't express how much i enjoyed reading this it took me out of boredom world into a world of love, ego, money and revenge being the ultimate reason to live for for Kothak's son Dush (sorry can't type the name in full incase i mis spell)
Each chapter was written so effortlessly that as a reader I enjoyed it but as a writer you wrote this FF for intelligent people whose English is better than mine 😭 confession time I seriously had to have a dictionary in my hand to understand words like: assuaged, requisites,exultant, dissonance, conniption for someone like me these words sounded like a foreign language. You're one hell of on an intelligent writer and its embarrassed me whilst reading this FF you mentioned you were at college i felt like crying thinking the way this writer is writing she can become the president for the country she lives in. 🤗 Im totally speechless with your English can i have some English writing lessons from you because if I stood in front of you i might want to quickly walk away 🤣

Rudra surprised me with coming to save his sister

Arnav's love for his wife is something to admire, loved how their love story developed right from the slap up until they went to their honeymoon

Anjali shooting her fiance was shocking

KK and SK realising who the culprit is - greed always comes with a price

Kushi taking the brunt of her elder's deeds was shocking because as a reader I did not believe that D would kidnap her for revenge

Humera being a loyal friend is not surprising and it was touching to read that her words to Rudra did have an affect

Indra... - was a fun loving character

Kushi's ex Shaan - loved how you portrayed his character, he was loved by everyone even Kushi loved him but having him as her husband was something a miss for because no woman would want to marry a guy if there's no spark in a relationship and they way you pointed this out was beautiful to read and understand

Thank u for writing so effortlessly a wonderful story 👏

I'm hoping you will will continue to write many more

Please PM me your next story and just like the other readers who have been following this FF I am looking forward to reading your epilogue


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