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unisha

@unishaz

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

nice one.. a little complicated.. anyway loved it..thanks for pm..

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Bhaadmejaa

@Bhaadmejaa

Navigator

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

That was too good 👏 , I was never into fiction based on actors but this sort of pulls you in 😊 I loved d way you have described her, her desire to be as free n have that unhinged passion that kria has is awesome! Thanx for d pm n pls continue soon

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Sonia

@princessSonia

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Well done...
Marvellous...

M jzz loss at words...

Ummm I cant find enough words to gve a detailed comment...
U r an exceptionally Amazing writer...

Beautifully written...
Her inner turmoil was described so well...

Do cont soon...
N thanks 4 d pm...

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Ankita

@anki_22

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

the inner self of Shakti, I don't think any one can portray them better..😊 the way you play with words and settle them into an amazing creation, WOW...😊 am in love with your work..❤️

another FATAFATI creation...😊

and fatafati doesn't have an exact english or hindi translation..😛 awesome, amazing, fantastic, fabulous, sab milake you can say fatafati..😃

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Mruganka and Anushka

@Arshalicious

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Simply mind-blowing update...as usual 👏

I loved the way u have described Shakti's character

The Shakti which we all know about from the interviews is the cheerful, ever-smiling, immensely talented, teasing, hard-working, fun-loving gal...but no person is ever as simple as that...there is always something insanely complicated hidden deep within them

I've always tried to imagine how Shakti must have felt like after her accident...and you have just described everything so perfectly

You must have done thorough analysis on this gal!!
You have reasoned out every single tiny detail...her diet, nyctophobia, straight hair

And lastly, the part about Kunwar...W-O-W

I always feel that both of them seem to bring out the best in each other

Eagerly waiting for ur next update

Keep writing...always!!

Lots of love, Anushka 🤗

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Diya Sengupta

@SrkDiya

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Wow wow wow!!

The way you have visualized Shakti is extremely interesting. You added so many dimensions to her matured and seemingly sorted self. It was beautiful. The jealousy that she had formed towards Kriya was very uncalled for, from her point of view, but this was the truth. And the best part was that it was he, who made her realize that. It was he who made her feel what she actually wanted to be.

Beautifully written. Waiting for the next part anxiously. :)

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Ankita

@_SenbonZakura_

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

This is out and out brilliant!

You know, if there existed a dark angsty world, you'd be the god there!

I mean, never does one think of her like this, but after reading what you wrote, I don't think of her in any other way anymore.

Amazing it is!

You know, I now don't understand why you'd doubt your abilities as a writer..!

You are gifted!

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Asma

@-FrozenRain-

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Hun this is great..
You depict Shakti so well..
Wow its always a treat to read your works..
Great take on ArSha...:)

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Akanksha

@Effacious

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

OMG.. m reading something over Arsha after ages . ..

woahhh ...

i must say CP u r awesome...

u write stories with such deep meanings..and thats wat makes ur stories different..

i loved how u showed all d disasterous atmosphere suffocating kunwar..

and that last line.. woahh..simply awesomeee...

u r amazinggg

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Akanksha

@Effacious

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Shakti Mohan envies Kriya Ghai..this line really caught my attention..

I just loved how u portrayed Her... how u shwed everything since d time she was small to everything..

and honestly.. in iv's whenever we see her. she looks all straightforward... icy at times..which she just not in real...

but but..ahaa.. Things seem different when we see her giving iv's with Kunwar..

i mean she is always like..in some other avatar when she is with him...

*sigh ...nywaz.. i loved it CP..

brilliantly written..