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medha

@SavageMissMe

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

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Okay, so the first time I realized that this was on charmar, to wanted to forget I saw this, backtrack my way to the AT and spam like a mad woman. I gave ever since it came about, never wanted charmar as a couple because somewhere I've always hoped for arsha as one. However I cannot deny that this was beautiful. You seem to have a way with words that makes everything look so surreal it's nearly impossible
Keep writing
Medha
Ps anks you are one lucky girl

Edited by medha_is_me - 11 years ago

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moumita

@sumimita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

beautiful... though it is about chamar.. then also..nyc one...

loved it

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NephilimByHeart

@NephilimByHeart

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

what r u writing .. i dont know .. but its like seeing their world by shakti n amar's opinion ..

its awesome yar ..

" From the corner of his eye, he thought he caught her looking at him. Notices her sip her drink silently while Punit gestured wildly at her, too caught up in the story he was recounting to notice how rigid she'd gone suddenly.

here HER is shakti right ??

aweosme update .. plz pm me nxt time

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Ankita

@_SenbonZakura_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

People, please don't misunderstand. Its not on CharMar.

Yeah, Charlie is important. But then, this was about the silent strength that Shakti is. Wasn't it??

I am still a little taken aback by this one. You know, if Amarjeet was half as deep as you show in this fic, I might even have liked him. But you know me.

The way you wrote CharMar first meet. And how, Shakti was stiff just to see how he was reacting to everything. Aaah bliss.

I still don't understand why me for the dedication? What did I say?

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Mruganka and Anushka

@Arshalicious

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

I badly wanted to press the backspace button when I realized this was about Charlie but I love ur writings and so I read the whole thing *patting myself on the back*
Sorry but I can never relate to Charlie Chauhan, don't know why...I just can't

S0 I tried to imagine some neutral third person in her place and that worked thankfully

Your description was beautiful as always

I focused on Kunwar...I loved the part about the words

He always seems so bindaas and outspoken in all IVs that it's hard to imagine him in this way...but your descriptions are so perfect that I loved it

xoxoxoxoxo

Anushka 😃

Okay so I read it again on Anky di's request 😆

I focused on the small details about Shakti this time

And yeah I loved the way u have indirectly implied how Shakti is like a strong silent pillar in his life

" That's why he watches the show now, because he's finally acting again."

I can't tell u how much I loved this line

Waiting for next update 😛

Edited by Arshalicious - 11 years ago

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Ankita

@_SenbonZakura_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Anuuu!! Most of this is about Shakti! Ek baar aaram se padh fir se!

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Bhaadmejaa

@Bhaadmejaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

I admire ur writing skills a lot, I like d angst n d inner turmoil potrayed by ur characters! I was excited when I read Charlie's name because Rey n Shakti are admired by all , writing a fiction on a not very favoured actor is d real test, n I enjoyed reading dis a lot! Thanx for d pm n pls continue soon 😊

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unisha

@unishaz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

aqwesome.. loved it.. thanks for pm..

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akanksha

@sharif_lafungi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Well..i will sum up evrything nd say...wow... M surprised how come u r handling it..? Ur work is always on edgeline...a lil mistake wid words nd tada..evrythng wil go wrong..bt no..its nt possible here...u exactly know wat word to use where...as of dis part..ofcrse evry arshaian wants them 2gether bt i prefer their frndship..charlie a real person is amazing..as per d part..charlie's picturisation by kunwar's pov is worth appreciation...the description of 1st meet..brilliant...although throughout d update i felt the feelings rnt mutual b/w amar nd charlie...punch line was amar acting while seeing rey romancing other gal sitting wid charlie...m highly excited 4 nxt...nd yes u r one of the amazing writer..i ve ever seen

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Diya Sengupta

@SrkDiya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#50

Brilliant.

Charlie is indeed an integral part of Amar's life and well, it was justified to introduce her character in the series. Beautifully written, you have very nicely explained the easy going bond that they have been sharing. And the part in the end was the best one. It explained everything just so subtly. He was comfortable watching his show after Shakti left because he was acting again. It was no more something else, a certain emotion that he does not wish to explain or be explained. I am absolutely loving this. Keep up the great work. :D