ASYA (KABHI) FF- Given and Denied- Thread 3- Chapter 24 to Chapter 32

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Sadia Sharmeen Swapno

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1041

Originally posted by: sammy4u
awesome part dear
it was so beautiful

Thank you so much🤗

Glad that you loved it😃

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Sadia Sharmeen Swapno

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1042

Originally posted by: sweetnandu
beautiful

Thank you so much🤗

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Sadia Sharmeen Swapno

@swapno

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1043

Originally posted by: Ramlath
Awesome part...
loved it finally both confess their love...
Pls continue soon

Thank you so much🤗

Glad that you loved it😃

I will try to update soon😊

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1044

Beautiful update dear. Finally asya confessed. Please update soon
Thanks for the pm n pm me for the next part too.

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Rosered1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1045

Zoya confessesed 🥳😃

First kiss in a boat with lanterns all around 😳

Continue soon

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-Prinky-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1046

hey hiii Sadia...

Its really refreshing to read ur updates after stressfull days...Thank u sooo much dear...🤗🤗

lots of happened there in last three updates...i like the way their relationship progress...

first i want to write about the two incidents...i think that incidents played a major role...

first when they r going to the party...that moment both loose their sense...but phone call ruined that moment...Zoya felt new feelings in his touch...that she never felt before...& she was feeling happy...she feel easy...

but the another incident in party changed whole scenario...again she gone to her shell...its hurt Asad...he was broken actually...& this pain in his eyes made zoya to think about...& at that point she realize how she become so special to him & now she needs to take that step towards him...

I like the way u potrayed Asad state...he was so happy with the change in her...but the next moment all hopes r shattered...he was hurt but still he valued her feelings...he is a man & its to hard for him to ignore his desires but he respected her...i just loved this Asad...

then i loved Dilshad as always...loved her convo with zoya...she is really a cool mom...

Ohhh dear what i say about the date...it was just beautiful surprise for zoya & for readers also...the way asad arranged it...just love it...

their dinner & unsaid convo...both r thinking about start the convo...but its ended only with grazing each others face... & zoya was upset...but she don't know the most beautiful surprise is ahead...enjoyed all angry zoya...& asad enjoyed her frustration...

u know i can imagine Asad in black shirt...leaning against car door & his arms folded in front of his chest...ohhh my...

That boat he arranged...with flowers...sky lanterns in the sky...sooo beautiful...

ohhh their first kiss...in boat...thousands of sky lanterns in the sky...so beautiful moment...

that moment when she said...I love u Mr. khan...her real confession...& then they lost in their own world...

after so much happenings in life they deserve this wonderful moments...

I just loved the every bit of it...gr8 job dear...👏👏

ohhh dear i just realize its getting too long...i think i am lost in their world also...

again just one word...BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!

love u dear...❤️

Thank u so much for pm 😊😊

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anopama

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1047

amazing the last 3 chapters
glad thatzoya is working they are
spending more time together the
hugs the goodnight peck the dance
the kiss on the cheeks she give him blew
his mind away the date was very romantic
glad she made a step forward and let him know
she loves him and kiss him too.
continue soon