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kriapatel

@kriapatel

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Such a lovely os beautifully written

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moumita

@sumimita

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

i just want to say... that i loved it to the core..

awsome

with lots of love

moumita

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Reserved
Unreserved

Amazing OS
I am speechless. It was so well written.
The song was perfect. And the OS was wel thought
Beautiful
Thanks for the PM
Do write more

PS. Can't like as online from mobile.

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d3_rox

@d3_rox

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Amazing Os...

U described everything sooo nicely..

Everything was perfect...

Loved it!!!!:):)

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ash

@CrazyGirl.21

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

One of the best OS on Kr I have read on KR so far.. I have been searching for such kind of OS for days u know !! I simply love it. Great Work Medha.. :D Do write more and yeah never forget to PM me. :P I am in your buddy list ! 😉

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Abhilasha

@Cieli.Santi

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

awsum os medha

loved it alot

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-VJ.ReyManiac-

@-VJ.ReyManiac-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Awesome os dea...! Luved it

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@Black_Stone

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Just Amazing !!!!

Too touching.

Loved the way he confronted Kria.

Loved to read it

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Himani

@Infinities

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

That was beautiful
Would love to see such a patch up in D3...
I was glad rey realized his mistake and apologized ...!
Enjoyed reading it
Keep writing

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VAISHNAVI MURALI

@-vaishnavimural

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

wow..

awesome os.. in love with it..

u showed rey's feelings n his POV very well.. loved d way u showed him thinking abt past n d way things changed.. he s feeling guilty for not being with her n doubted her..

d convo of rey with kria n d way he expressed his feelings n turned around to leave was awesome.. kria stopped him from going n agreed to give them a chance n start over again..

emotions were maintained brilliantly n beautifully penned os ful of emotions love pain of separation n guilt..

finally they r together.. loved d line where u said rey held her tight thinking if he leaves her she may disappear it showed d love n how much he missed her n didn't want to b away from her...

awesome work..