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celinawalter

@celinawalter

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#81

wow!!!
i am mesmerized by this awesome love story that you wove here.
Khushi as you can say was a true Kshatrani who would do anything to have her loved one safe and would cross all barriers.
i loved her spirit. she was the true hero in this entire story.
Arnav, oved him too, but he is overshadowed in front of Khushi's bravery.
Shyam and payal's role--- well, i loved it too. never expected to see them as couple, was a surprise there and liked it.

Beautiful OS Chaitali.
Keep writing.
Thanks VandanaSagar for the reference.

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Arshi67

@Arshi67

Sparkler

+ 13

Posted: 11 years ago

#82

Beautifully written.

Their intensity leapt out at you.

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PhoenixTears

@PhoenixTears

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#83

Thank you Vandana.Sagar for letting me know this masterpiece. Fantastic OS, all history, that beautiful era of royals, Arnav and Khushi's feeling for each other, their attraction, everything was written so beautifully.. Payal and Shyam were great help too.. Overall a fabulous read and a much deserved awardee. Superb work 👏👏👏

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Niya

@niya55

Navigator

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#84

Awesome os

Loved it .

A very different from the other stories.

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JesiC

@JesiC

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#85

Fabulous and unique story.. loved it

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Mints23

@mints23

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#86

What a splendid beauty this story was... It was definately not an OS... It was much more. Encompassing an era... full of love and hope, moving beyond the differenciation between classes and masses. I loved the entire saga of how a princess fell in love with a warrior, just before she was to be married. Loved how you have etched the character of Arnav, who is fierce in the battlefield, yet warm as a human. I was so thrilled that Khushi, the brave princess took the initiative to be one with her true love. As the rode away in the dark night... my mind mumbled a "Happily ever after" for the lovebirds. 😳

I am simply amazed by your versatile writing and the way you build a picture in front of the readers so they not only read a story... they actually picturize it! And I am yet to even venture in your other genres of thriller and drama. In a mood for romance at the moment... so will get there soonish! 👏

P.S.: I love the existing banner... but could not stop myself from making another one for this lovely story!

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suri2610

@suri2610

Explorer

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#87

Beautifully written...flows like a poetry... And thanks for putting Shyam and Payal in such a good light... Loved it all in all

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ZAIDI

@Miss.Zaidi

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#88

that was beautiful ! You write so so so good ! 👏 ( arey hmare cc p ajao na yar 😳 😆 )

It was amazing you know ... one of the best OS es i have read on arshi ..
frankly i avoid the stories that don t have an ipk-ish arshi in it as i fail to picture the scenes in my mind .. but I really loved this one .. 😳 it was so beutiful and i could actually see a warior arnav and a kumari khushi :) you really write awesome ! ⭐️

and now to the story it was so different and new for me .. warrior weds rajkumari sounds so exciting ! ⭐️ and must say this khushi was brave han .. also i liked how you symbolized the situations of story with weather conditions ( ee i duck at explaining ..i kno :P ) i mean i liked it when the cold breeze & arnav s word simultaneously shivered khushi .. when the lantern and her heart flickered .. when there was half darkness and half light .. loved it all ! so brilliant han 😳

one more thing i really liked that scene where khushi gave chain award to arnav ! 😃 best hai ..

and ya .. the name kumari .. i never liked it in show .. but liked it here 😳

shayam and payal .. thank you to both :* .. when i was reading the OS i was thinking k i ll write in comment that khushi was very rude to payal and should nt have said that .. it was bothering alot yu kno .. :P
and han ... wo line .. ''But she had to build new bridges and burning old ones was an eventuality '' was epic ! 👏 that was also symbolic na 😳 .. see i m so smart 😆

what else .. ermm .. banners both of them were superb !

P.S dee_j thank yu very very much for suggesting me this OS ⭐️ muah

P.P.S sorry for a late unres 😳

P.P.P.S congratulations for the award ! 👏 well deserved ..and ya congo for completing an year 😃

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aysemLDG

@aysemLDG

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#89

That was such a great story with a historical background. Khushi's determination to elope with Arnav was so beautiful. With the help of Payal and Shyam Khushi saved Arnav's life and started a new life.

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Iqra

@Iqraimran

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#90

Like historical background...nice piece of writing

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