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Sidda

@Sidda8

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Happy Anniversary. This is one of your masterpieces. It's absolutely brilliant. I loved the fierce and brave Khushi who sacrificed her life so that she can be with her love. I loved how Arnav promised always to be loyal to her and keep her close to his heart.

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Chandana

@chandana.s

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Wonderful... Very beautifully written,took me to an another world...

Loved it

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kiran1992

@kiran1992

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Very nice...
I loved it...
Good job dear... 👏

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praj.shrish

@praj.shrish

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#64

COPY CAT COPY CAT

Yes I won't stop calling you that

You know it boosts my EGO to know that you are inspired by my style of writing.😉

Well to start with the OS, you definitely transferred me to the era of raje-rajwade with the beautiful description of magnificent palaces, dresses and suitable language of the characters.

The two moments impressed me thoroughly ...1st is when Arnav ties payal around Khushi's ankle. That reminded me the same scene from show.

And second when Khushi splashed water of her damp hairs on his face. That was a marvelous example of artistic imagination

But somehow I could not imagine Sanaya in the Khushi's character. Dipika has imbibed her face in my mind for that song permanently. Chap GAya Hai 😃

And the most important thing to tell you

COPY CAT COPY CAT 😃

P.S: waiting for your unres now

Edited by praj.shrish - 11 years ago

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IPK007

@IPK007

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#65

I love historical dramas...and this is the best I've come across on IF.

Brilliant OS:)

Edited by IPK007 - 11 years ago

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Deepa jha

@Dee_J

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#66

I've always said this, and mentioning it again, that you my girl write beautifully.

Every time I read something written by you, it leaves me mesmerized, really.

This OS did the same.

Frankly, after reading the first line - 1615 wala, I thought If I should read it or not? Because I don't like historical drama...story...etc..

But then trusting your story writing skills, I read it and am happy to have not missed it.

It was not only khushi who was affected, but arnav was going through the same thing throughout. Shyaam and payal were kind enough to help them, risking their own lives in the process.

And khushi...kya kahun main uske baare mei? She did every possible thing to be with the one she loves..

And arnav...he didn't wanted this to be explored earlier for he thought she deserved better, his queen deserved better!

As the saying goes, love conquers all!😊

(I know picture doesn't suits the era, but anyways.)

And off course, the payal scene, something which has been etched in my mind forever. You used the scene perfectly..

You seriously googled?😲😲

Thumbs up for writing this one !😃

P.S. I had asked you to inform me whenever you write something, but you didn't. I chanced upon your Index, and found this. You are bad, very bad

Edited by dj_arshifan - 11 years ago

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Paridhi

@kparidhi

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#67

superb os..thanks alot for the emAIL

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Hot_Chocolate

@Hot_Chocolate

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#68

it was beautiful. .. so unique and written in a fabulous way...the song lines in between were perfectly in sync with the situation. ... I loved it...khushi being a Rajkumari and arnav as servant..aisa padne mein bohot kam milta ha,, actually mene pada hi nahi kabhi pehle... abd you write it beautifully. .easy for me to imagine
whole story. .. 👏 ...

tu acha likhti hai...

sorry mene bohot time laga diya padne mein par main... 😔

please keep me informing about your future works... 😊