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Kalyaani B Rao

@Kalyaani

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

It is easy to love and to be loved, far easier to give up on that love once obstacles come in the way. Khushi for me is the true hero of the story, she loved and ensured her love was with her always. Giving up the comforts she was used to and taking on a life of hardship, living in fear for the rest of their life. It is worth it in the end, when one's love is worth it. Arnav is blessed and the 'punya' is immeasurable indeed.

Note - it is wonderful to have people like Shyam and Payal in the world, they put love over everything else, risking their lives even.

Imp point - You complete a year writing and this is a fine example of that. I wish your pen/laptop never tires. Good luck and god bless.

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aashi12

@aashi12

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Posted: 11 years ago

Res

--unres--
'ye ishq nahi aasan bas itna samajh lijiye, ek aag ka dariya hai or doog ke jaana hai' - this was one thought in my mind after i Read this OS!

Written beautifully with the whole rajput background! Infact i never really liked this song 'Aang laga de' but reading this OS along with that song going was magic!

A strong and decisive Khushi, the princess while a loyal warrior Arnav. Two people from different world, stumbled across each other!

But Mohabaat door jaane na de, no matter how prominent the nafrat of Dhruv was!
❤️

Beautiful OS di!

Happy 1 year Anniversary! 😃

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

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Posted: 11 years ago

What a lovely piece if writing.
The historic backdrop gave it an edge.
You've beautifully captured their emotions and feelings.
Very well written.

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Shikhayugal

@Shikhayugal

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Posted: 11 years ago

It was such a wonderful story 😛

loved the historical background.it imparted a new charm to the story.loved the way you described their love for each.

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javeria

@Javeria3991

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Posted: 11 years ago

Three words

I LOVE IT.

The story line was so unique and very interesting. Khushi an elegant princess and Arnav the bravest soldier, wow love their characters.

A very classical tale which was brilliantly described in just one shot.

I like Shyam and Payal, they were very helpful.

I love the ending.

CONGRATULATIONS for completing a year on india forums. This OS is the best gift for celebrations.

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avika_ShArMa

@avika_ShArMa

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Posted: 11 years ago

That was so beautiful.❤️

quite an interesting history and a lovely storyline. I already read it twice.😃
Princess Khushi and a valiant Arnav, perfect yet imperfect for each other.
Who could have imagined they would end up together and run away on a horse!

Hopefully its a Happily Ever After. Noone could find them ever and arnav ahem...offered himself to khushi throughout his life. *tongue in cheek* 😛

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

wonderful os

loved it

thanks for the mail

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ara_000

@ara_000

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

beautiful shot

i loved it to bits ❤️

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

Aha!! Chai...Looks like you are taking us back in time. Way way back. :) Res. Hope to un-Res by tomorrow morning :)

Oh and Happy Anniversary - yes I read the A/Ns before I read the piece :P

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Every bit of this was exquisite. I love writings that are set in royalty and there is something incredibly romantic about the story of the princess and the warrior, isn't there? It is what makes Robinhood's story exciting and so so worthy of multiple viewing / reading.

And you wrote with such beauty. I loved how wonderfully smitten but strong and fiercely determined Khushi was; just how feral this all-man Arnav was. But it was the love, forbidden, intensely passionate, silent but so so powerful, that held them together and gave them the courage to make that escape.

I loved every bit of this tale, Chai and so glad you wrote something so wonderful and well, short so that I could read and comment (AD is a killer and leaves with little or not time to do much reading!)

Happy Anniversary and hope such occasions come more frequently so that you can bring us more such jewels

PS: A helpful Shyam - always a BIG plus with me :D

Edited by meera30 - 11 years ago