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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanks for Angellic_doll ,latha 72,sushmitha 75,arshino1fan, IDatIF, smat, shalinikanagu, ifsaal044, zariya123, tinsel, Arshi.Sugi.IPK, ASR6262, Shafoo, IsleOfCapri, for their comments,suggestions,likes
ur all doubts will get clean after4-5 updates about why they told to khushi lie about her parents and more

PART 11:

arnav:this is my ma's writing why?

nani:read it arnav u will know all.

arnav was no more shakingly began to read the letter

dear chotte,

now ur reading this letter means now u already married my princess and it's her 21st birthday.fristly tell my wishes to her

it was shocking to arnav now he know his mother know khushi and more over how she knows he will marry khushi with that thought he decided to ask his nani how his ma knows khushi but decided to know his answers from his mother it self ,so he again started reading

don't be shock chotte how i know her and now i am going to tell u a truth u never know please listen to it in attention.

first of all i will tell my child hood chotte,i ratna singh raizada was a blind girl from birth{pls continue reading} but u know i never felt like iam blind girl because of the love i got from my brother aryan singh agnihothri who always consider me first than him ,that day i know remember chotte blood relation was not important if u love some one ,yes chotte he is all i and manohar {mamaji} have .he never made us feel outsiders though he was a son of king suryan bhan who had 300 villages 12 towns under him .he was a brother any sister wants chotte like this our child chood was going on but when iam studying 5th class we met arshad mailk ur father who is at 7th class with aryan bhai and arshad's sister anu malik who was my class mate from that day we 4 became best friends that will never get seperate ,me being blind can get all i want before i ask from them .with the help of aryan bhai,anu i completed my studies and became doctor along with them while arshad studied MBA .but our friend ship gotten strongest as we realised i and u father in love,aryan bhai and anu love each other and more we got sruthi who is ur chachi as our best friend and she is our juniour while we are doing MBBS though her brothers and family is not good she is a good soul and became little sister for aryan bhai and arshad.all is god our parents excepted it but not ur dadi excepted me she always threaten me to live his son as iam blind but ur father's love and aryan bhai's promise to help me it didn't care for ur dadi's threats an ill behaviour .all is god untill the day of marriage of aryan bhai &anu 's that day bhai didn't turn up to marriage hall we all searched for him and found out his letter saying that he didn't want to marry anu as he lost interest in her now.with that so much had happened anu is living her life as a souless creature,arshad was still finding difficult to help his life less sister ,ur dadi's hate towards me increased and she daily torturing me i too same as my aryan bhai ,aryan's bhai diswoned him as they felt ashamed of what their son did to a girl.but inspite of all this i know my bhai chotte i never believed what he written in that damm letter but i know he wont tell so i waited for the opurtunity to get him in my web,because u know as we were working in same hospital i saw how my bhai turning into though i didn't see but i can sense him very well how can't i spend most of my 25 years in his lap chotte .more over along with me sruthi also belived in bhai and update me of his behaviour daily .it's rakhi chotte i now the day i am waiting had arrived thinking this day all will be well i along with sruthi went to aryan bhai house who is living in a small house as his parents disowned him,to suprise him but i got suprised and shocked when shocked sruthi saw aryan bhai is splitting blood and she told me what she saw that made my ground shift up and down i immediately runned to him and suprised and panisked bhai received into his arms,as from marriage day i too never talked to him so he hugged me longingly then after few minutes i and sruthi tied rakhi to him to which he asked the question i want him to ask he asked me and sruthi to tell him what we want as a gift .taking that oppurtunity i asked bhai i know u love anu but why are u framing ur self as bad tell me if u love me and give us that as a gift to know why our lovable bhai is framing as bad to which he cried hugging me asking why are u till had belief in me ratna while my parents who gave me birth ,the lady who loved me,the man who is my best friend and whole world who knows me believed i was a cheater and used a girl for my pleasure but why u and sruthi is not at all like them.i said how can i bhai, ur my father,mother,brother and best friend to me that enough for me to trust u bhai tell me the reason please ,he hugged me as tight as possible but again he was spillting blood this time i don't listened his excuses and made him swear on me to tell what he is hidding from others after a lot he told me that he had cancer and he is in last stage and he will die with in few days and this is why i didn't came to marry anu and i also know on that day only i have cancer and it is last stage to cure tell me ratna did i done wrong because it matters to me to know how u feel ,but iam happy because when i die i can give my eyes to you so that u didn't have to suffer from arshad's mom.what can say chotte to that man at that time u know he was happy and already made procedures to give me his eyes.from that day i and sruthi daily visit him i can do what ever i can for my bhai i also consulted with my professors about his case but they too lost the hope.but i know only one person can cure it but my bhai was not at all allowing me to consult her and tell this to his parents and others.after some weeks bhai health becoming worse so on that day like as usual i gone to meet him but sruthi spooted bhai with more blood than as usual and his eyes were closing so we both rushed to him he said to me to keep him in my lap i have done it shakingly as my bhai always placed me in his lap never asked me to do that so i placed his head in my lap while sruthi was gone toget his medicines. but he told me that he is happy that he is go na die in my lap and it's last wish to die in my lap.with that he closed his eyes ignoring my pleads .listening my screams sruthi came running to us but she found her aryan bhai life less in my lap we both immediately taken him to our hospital as we found his heart still beating.

Edited by kb.mounika - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
Mounika nuvvu na friend katha. So, don't thank me. I loved the update especially the flashback. I am more curious to know the story. Continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks for the pm
lovely
loving how the story is being unravel bit by bit.
Loved the flashback at showed how their past is linked with them.
Update soon 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 12:

unknowingly reader this all from his mother letter few tear drops came from arnav's eyes with others .he know that he was sure indeed depth for his ma's bhai not knowing that he is feeling sad and affectionate to his own mama.

now he continued as he stopped to take a breath then again started

letter:

i and sruthi took him fast as long as we could to our hospital but only to see there is no anu there.yes ur anu mami is cancer specialist chotte at the minute i thought if she knows this she will be rooted how can she operate on him ,she loved him so much but circumstances didn't let her to understood my bhai.putting this all a side to protect my bhai

we made call to her saying some urgent case is there for her pls come soon and i added telling her to bring arshad as we know we can't deal with ourselves and we will breaked my bhai's promise by calling his family to hospital too.

after 10 minutes all came running not knowing why we called them only to see lifeless bhai with oxyzen mask ,it took for anu for 3 min to know the expressions she give to bhai chotte i rembered it till now

she immediately took him to theature out side all r looking to us to answer them so we both said all things about bhai all were hurt as they were not know,they hurted as they all misunderstood him thanked us for helping him

after 8 hours chotte our life 's just in our hand to know how is my bhai and then came anu with nullify expersions but she said operation is successful

after 2 months bhai became all right and we also have tough time to bring anu-bhai to gether now we all all is nice but bhai's dadi died due to stroke giving me her eyes to me .that's how ur maa gotten eyes chotte.all were teased me that i wish to see arshad first when i have my eyes but i wished and saw my bhai as i always dream .now after 2 months passed the strom came to our lives chotte untill now we didn't gotten out from it.hope ur generation will over come it.

anu had gotten marriage proposal from malhotra's and ur dadi take it upto the wedding irrespective of all other pleadings to marry her to my bhai.but wedding day i ,arshad,sruthi with lot off struggle made anu 's marriage to my bhai though sruthi is malhotra she never had a hobby from them.but they loved her unconditionally to say any thing to her but they planned to destroy our lifes and started their evil things which they stopped due to sruthi

now they are back with more evil they started doing harm to me also but bhai always protect me ur dadi now become more friends to them and were saying somany things about me and bhai she believed all she from the anu marriage she did n't allow any thing of anu in our house she burned all anu's identity saying her daughter died ,though she didn't like me due to arshad 's warning she allowed as her daughter in law she always accuse me when we were alone

things were changed after few days now my bhai became king and protecting all from malhotras giving them heavy doses to their evil activities.i and anu were pregnants that malhotras tried so much to kill our kids in our wombs but bhai didn't let go i always went to hospital daily so that i can meet anu and bhai ,sruthi also join us i,sruthi were gynchologists,bhai is nuerologist,anu is cancer specialist.anjali,arjun both born on same day suprising us as i and anu have 20 days different.both were taken out in this world by proud sruthi.

arjun born 2 hours before anjali ,though ur dadi constant warnings i didn't at all taken and meet arjun u know he has same pair of eyes u have if u see u can get some similarities bet ween u too

life is going on smooth for us and we also became pregnents after 5 years again at the same time all teased us sense less and the main twist is u and maan both at the same time suprising all of us ,u know what u r just like ur dadaji chotte ,anjali has alot of her bua's{anu's } features in her.anu loved u so much chotte as like her own son she always tells me she don't know why but u always atrracted her more .but due to ur dadi i,arshad cannot make u and anjali close to bhai and anu.she didn't allow us to even join u and anjali in same school as arjun and maan studying so u don't know them but they always liked and treated u and anjali as their own kids always from toys to dresses they always buy for u and anjali if they buy for arjun and maan .i always feel bad to say u we buyed u them for u and anjali. i always meet maan and arjun they always loved me too chotte if i were there they both cling in to me.i and arshad felt bad for u and bhai and anu as we can't make them meet u.u know arjun,and maan some time sneak in to our house just to see u and anjali as they always loved u both .we always admire chotte if ur dad said some thing against u arjun will not at all agree with him maan and arjun both were always there to defend u and anjali.like this another 5 years too passed in those days sruthi is married to ur chacha and given birth to geet.always we meet at hospital chotte ur dad also take a leasure in a day just to meet ,malhotras evill is becoming more so bhai had both responsibilities as a doctor and as a king to protect pooor people from those malhotras.ur chacha was also joined with malhotras,

after 2 years from these we get to know anu is pregnant so i ,sruthi pampered her alot chotee as always she cry for her mother but that dadi of urs through her out not even have thought she is pregnant how sick right u know .i only attended her pregnancy being her doctor.u know what this time a beautiful aangel was born.u know who ur khushi chotte .yes the moment she landed in my arms i know she is urs ,u know i asked bhai to promise me that he will give khushi to my chotte with even letting him see khushi ,all were laughed at me and teased me for reserving daughter in law.my bhai promised me at the day to give his khushi.i only named khushi for her as per her name she brought so much luck to all .more over she is very special to agnihothri's as after 5 generations they had baby .

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks for the pm mounika. Its really superb. Even though i got confused in between, by reading it again my confusion got cleared. Is dadi you are referring subhadra? I hate malhotaras. Continue soon. Waiting for the mystery to reveal.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thnx for d pm
Awesome.
Tho confusing initially it however is interesting later on.
Waiting for the history to unfold.


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great update
loved it
the story is becoming more clear by each update.
Thanks 4 pm 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 11 - Gr8 update
Edited by Arshi.Sugi.IPK - 11 years ago
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Part 12 - Superb update...Lots of ppl (chars)na I got confused
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Posted: 11 years ago
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this story is co exciting and awesome.👏
i got to know about this story only when Angellic_doll send me a PM about it,and it must thanks Angellic_doll for that🤗; how could a miss such a interesting story.
once again its a interesting ,do continue and also do more works on arshi. pleeease.👍🏼
pleeease PM me.😊

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