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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 9:

out side the room,

Arjun is planing to go out but it is not in his fate as he is going away Maan screamed his name making all others to come out of their thoughts and see him

Arjun thought:dammn u maan i know ur antics

maan:bhai where are u going?

Arjun:i have some work Maan u take care all if any thing goes wrong ring me i will come

maan thought i know what knid of work u have bhai that's why i am stopping u ,sorry bhai i had to do this for u:no bhai u won't go i u have to then take pari with u

arjun:what are u crazy maan?why i have to take pari ,no i won't i will go alone

maan:can u elaborate the work u have

Arjun:why should i? stop being childish?

Maan: i am not behaving childish bhai,it's final u will not leaving this place

payal:what is this maan why are u not letting arjun to go out ,unless it's very important he won't go out in this situation so let him go.

tighting his hold in arjun's hand maan said:no payal i won't let him do what he will do it won't happen from now

Arjun:maan stop it and leave me or else

maan in anger :what u will do Arjun singh agnihotri remember i too have same blood which u have so their is no fear to me also ,and also not for my own bhai.

arjun under standing it's not at all working:please maan let me

maan was fully raged:go to hell with my promise to u bhai ,i have enough i won't let u suffer from now ,now we were with our angels so u stop that.

arjun in rage:why maan ?didn't i have to suffer that atleast that let me in some minute peace maan,the one who is a bad son now i think bad brother too will also add in to account will have to suffer hell maan .

maan:do u even know what ur speaking bhai i am telling u i won't repeat it there is nothing wrong u have done infact we are proud to have u bhai ur best son,best brother in this world.so stop it

payal: maan what he is telling?

maan closing his eyes :he is blaming for the past and now for princess remember it and suffering for it so seeing that now he is blaming himself for it too

payal:how dare u arjun to think like that if i ever listen it u will face not ur pari any more ,maan what will he do to suffer

arjun:nothing he is out of mind by turns of events so pls excuse me

maan: now also u didn't listen me then right now let me make all here to see the hell of Arjun singh agnihotri

arjun:no maan

maan:no bhai i have enough

with that he teared arjun shirt shocking others but what they saw shocked them more

jaya dadi was crying and asking him how this happen to which he bent his head down .payal instantly started crying and just seeing in his eyes and caressing the marks and wounds which were fully covered his whole body , now all were asking him how that happen

payal to arjun :why bhai?how

maan: i will tell pari now all the hell of his suffering

maan:every night this damn bhai of us will have dream of past pari,every night so u know what he do then?he will go to go a room and spread the fully glasses on the floor and sleep on them in such away that all glasses prick in to his body.{every one grasped listening it and seeing marks in arjun body}and he didn't care to dress it add to it he will pour chilli on them pari

when i came to know one night u know what he told

he said his one help less moment in his life is responsible for all are suffering,he demanded me promise to not tell others especially to u pari i in that position seeing him like that i gave a word to him to which he is blackmailing me not to say .now we have come to u all and i have enough of seeing him suffer

payal with hurt and pain with anger to arjun:how can it cure ur pain arjun singh agnihothri care to explain.

arjun: i know i have to bear more but i don't feel from these wounds any pain because my pain which i get from them is not greater than my amma's pain,not my mami's,mama's pain who have to give their lifes and making their children thinking so wrong of their deadth and suffering ,not the pain u under go in past , out of all not my princess pari she lost her memory ,parents,brothers too though they were their but she don't know it ,u know how she looks at bond of Arnav and anjali it hurts me to death pari because she had it all but she don't know no she is at fault for it ,i thought she is blessed to lost her memory for good unlike me but see dammit she regained it damm well no she will also suffer like hell like me with those images ,now what will i answer to her questions pari that how her parents died ,how her ma,dada ,choti ma died sacrifring their lifes for our good,why his brother's leave her ? tell me pari, i even now didn't save her and anjali from that **** shyam,bdid't i responsible for all this.today is her birth day for god sake but all she have is pain today ,tell me i didn't show u how bad brother i was


with that he broke down to ground crying his heart out now before payal and maan could console him and tell him he is best khushi enveloped arjun in her arms crying along with him.

all were shocked seeing her and turned to crying arnav,why don't he, he too a brother he knows how much it will break brother but he know the man infront of him has very dark past and felt right of listening to khushi to come out side to meet her brothers.yes arnav and khushi also listened to whole conversation

.flash back:

after some time khushi find she cann't act now so she opened her eyes.

arnaV:khushi who r u ? is there any pain? can i call doctor?is still u have memories?

khushi: Arnavji i am fine but i want to meet my brothers please help me to reach them

arnav:but khushi i will call them wait

khushi: no arnavji i didn't feel like sittting here so please

arnav cupping her face :ok but u don't have to say me please u can order me and don't dare to do like this ever again khushi i know my mistakes are un forgiveable but pls don't punish me like this

khushi ,i can't live with out u khushi.

khushi kissed his fore headand said :i won't do i promise can u take me to them

arnav :yes come

with that they both were at the door and seen and listen to all conversation

flash back ends

now to arjun,khushi,maan,payal also joined and cried their hearts out like never before,no one their gone to disturb them and felt they need it.



note :guys story is now progressing still i have less response from u,did u didn't like this story pls atleast tell me that so that i can with stop trobuling u with my work


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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
Hi thanks for the pm. What a twist? I was expecting khushi's brother to shout at them and be angry. They didn't do it because they feel they are responsible for arnav's parents death. What a twist? I loved it. Khushi and arnav are together. Continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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loving your tale... wondering what the story is very well written!!!


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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
Hi thnx for d pm
Nice updt
The past is terrifyin
Arnav n khushi's past is connected thts why the grandma's r worried of Arnav's reaction to the truth.
I guess Arnav's parents r mama and mami Arjun is referrin to thts means Arshi r cousins in tht case how can they get married.

Lots of questions in this updt bt will wait for the story 2 develop.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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thats amazing

loving it too much

cant wait to read more!

loving the way the story is shaping up!-
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 10:

now it's been 4 hours since they all returned to RM no one speak a word after arjun's outburst and their sibling's hug .

Arnav thought seeing a brooken Arjun:this man relly suffered a lot the pain in his eyes are unbearable if some one know it then no one in the bussiness world will believe that the great ASA is shedding tears .he know this man loved his siblings like hell then why they were seperated what is this man pain he felt sorry for his only favourite then he saw maan slightly seeing arjun as he was some theif this made him amuse of this man so he called him maan

maan: shhh {while keeping his finger on his lips}come out from his hide what arnav ?

arnav:maan what is going on in my room do u have any idea all ladies were there with closed door from past 4 hours?khushi just came from hospital but she is behaving like she won't rest in peace untill she knows every thing ?can't she wait?more over no one is telling me any thing is this fair?

maan:Arnav to night after khushi's birth day blast u will know every thing i know u were worried of khushi but trust me we are allowing it because it's time she have to put in action or else many lives will be at stake .u know even if she is not hospitalised surely we had came and do what there to do?

arnav:ok but u surely inform me right listening all these i was bit exicted andnervous i don't know

maan:it's ok hey see they all were coming

they all came and gone to arjun ignoring this poor fellows so they too with akash,NK followed to see what now

their khushi ,maan,payal was trying their best to make arjun him under stand but he is adamant telling it's all his fault why won't it's 10 years hurt it cannot reduce by listening to some one

so the other three just eye contacted with each other

that's when they hard the sweet voice of the maan

maan: kanilake kanilu voche,kastalake kastamvasey,kanaila ninae chudaga[for tears tears came,for sufferrings suffers came[wipping arjun tears maan nodded him no],seeing u crying like a small child]

ooh ohh ani nuvvae baram moyaga ,e baruvae ne chaduvae edigina pasikuna [ooh ooh..small boy all u beared ,from that bearing u studied and lead ur life]

oohh oohh ,oohhh oohh ...

repeat of 1st stanzas

amma loni lalana,nana loni palana,ani andipuchukuna e anna needa lo[in the nest of brothers love who had mother's love,dad's effection in him]


komma chatu puvulae ,kanchi chatu pirulae ,chinni papalandaru eduguvellalo[ like flowers behind branches, crops behind fields,we all were raised behind u]

musirae nishalo ,nadichey dasalo ,neethuru tho nilipavae arani deepani[though we have to come across many obstacles in our path u with shed ur blood to make it up to us]

ohhh ohhh...[ he was crying remembering how his brother rise them]so

payal while sleeping in arjun's leg sang : darichupu suriyuda [pls show us path sun], khushi also occupied another side sang :jola padu chandruda[ sing me lulubae to me moon ], both payal and khushi wipping arjun's tears : nivvu kanta niru pedithae nilava lemu ra[we can't see u crying ]

arjun hugged both of them , seeing them like that first time he spoke or rather say sang after coming from hospital : niru kadae amulu eninala badalani karugutunavae[this are not water babies they were result of my whole pain melting in the form of tears]

khushi again sleeping in his lap: oodilo vodigi[i was raised in ur lap], payal:runamae migili[ we were so much debt for u]

both payal ,khushi: maru janmaniki ninu kani penchey ammav tamaya[in next birth we will be ur mothers and rise u]

arjun smiled listening them and cupped their faces: mi navvae vennela vellugamma,na yadalo kanthala kolluvamma[sisters ur both smile is like a bright light that will make my heart bright]

maan,payal,khushi together sang:edivamo digi vinchadu ma anna la diggichadu,e janmalo runamo thirchaga[some god came like as our brother and blessed us ,as if he taken his debt to us from before births]

ohhh ohhh...makosame pranam panchaga,e punyam ma kosam divena ichindo[ u give ur life for us ,we don't what fortunate blessed us]

arjun with pride hugged them all :mi navvae vennela vellugamma,na yadalo kanthala kolluvamma[ urs smile is like a bright light that will make my heart bright].

all who witnessed this all have tears in their eyes akash,arnav,geet,anjali were also hugging and crying remembering what arnav did to them.

arjun:arnav i will now tell u all i don't want u to wait any more.but please be brave

arnav confused said :ok

arjun :nani can u please get the letter

now maan,payal,khushi were stiffened as they know what will come now

arjun:princess please sit here we have alot to discuss, u in this condition it is not right to say all this but u know their is no other way.

khushi:i know arjun don't worry.

now all were anxious to know but they don't know is that their whole world is going to shatter with this one truth.

nani came with a golden wooden box and took out 2 envelops but she trusted 1 in khushi saying it's for u read after ur alone.then turn to her chotte this for u, u have to read all loud for others here too.

arnav don't know why but his hands shakingly took the envelop and open the letter but shocked seeing the handwritting in it

arnav :nani this is





note:thanks for all who comment me but can u please comment me to know u really want this story to continue or not.please comment for once so that i can think u like it to read further friends please.


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks for the pm. Yar yentha suspense? Pls thondaraga update cheyi. I am imagining worst things. Pls.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
Loved the song... beautifully written ... please update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
Thanks for the pm
just finished reading both of the updates it was superb and interesting.
Loving how the story is prograssing ❤️
sorry for the late reply
looking forward to reading the next update 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thnx for d pm
Its getin interesting.
Pls continue.
I m little confused u said khushi lost her parents when she ws 16 nt 8 n she lost her memory.
So why did they tell her she lost her parents at 8 and then ws in coma for 8 yrs wht's d logic in tht.
Secondly if this happnd when khushi ws 16 then Khushi as per d show is only 18 so only 2 yrs since tht incident.
Then how again is Arjun sufferin frm 10yrs it shud be only 2yrs.
Most of all Khushi remembers the past n now Armav too bt hs forgotten wht Arnav said n why she tryin commitin suicide n why dint she ask why they tld her a lie.

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