ARSHI FF: TALE - Page 24

Thanks for the pm. I love the song so much its one of my favourites nice update. Continue soon

Superb chapter...thanks for the PM

Nice one
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amazing part

awesome update
i loved it
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Chapter 22 was awesome... end part was so touching
Gotta say way to go anjali I hope that slap really REALLY stung n has leff a hand mark
Loved how u wrote all the girls in as stopping Shyam from slapping Anjali was nice touch made a point to Shyam that the girls weren't afraid of him
Still the evil swi*es think they can still win n escape our 5 very angry heros I cant wait for their smirks to be wiped of their faces especially shyam n his grandfather looking forward to them trying to hide in fear
Glad that now Arjun has his sisters back he will be more distracted n be able to suppress his nightmares
Really liked chapter 23
Felt so sorry for khushi missing her parents n remembering the past how she shared her birthday with her father
Glad Arnav could cheer her up n loved the attention to detail u gave whilst Arnav was singing to khushi
awe how sweet was chapter 24
Loved thd pictures of the outfits n bedrooms u definately did lots of research
Was so funny when Arnav n Akaash were complaining about their crowns being too heavy n their poor worried faces when they were told they would have to weaf for hours later
Had a tear in my eye seeing the love between the brothers n sisters
Attention to detail again with songs
Wonder whats Arnavs last surprise is????
chapter 25 ...wow Arnav proposed & played guitar how romantic
Loved how all were teasing Arnav he would have to sleep away from khushi
Poor Arnav taking them serious n running away with khushi in his arms like a wee boy hiding his favourite toy from his parents after being scolded
Wondet what kinda storm comin hoping its not that Shyam already
chapter 26 shocker
Khushis beautiful dream turned into nightmare just hoping it wasnt a possible preminition
N if it is i hope they can change it by defeating ths evil scum
Looking forward to seeing whats gonna happen next
Thanks for pm plz keep em comin n continue soon

thnx for d scrap dear

Poor Khushi as always who is suffering. Amazing updates

Please update soon looking forward to next part thank you.