KR FF:(Obscure Concoctions)A Million Mistakes(Chapter 2-page 16) - Page 3

Hey Mahi!

I really enjoyed the synopsis and your interesting choice of words. It was a fun read. These lines really stood out for me:

Oh how they fail to understand that the foundation of the one is impossible without the existence of the other .

and

When two contradictions as uncharacteristic as antonyms synchronize ?

Oh and go about it however you prefer, with character synopsis or without. Also I completely relate to your pain about finding that perfect title. It's such a task! Anyways, I found your title intriguing so good job!

Looking forward to reading more! Do update soon! 😊

Originally posted by: Kaheesha

Amazing amazing concept mahii sweety
I loved the synopsis ...so very well written :*
and the title is awesome mastt hai
you write it your way .. tujhe jaisa accha laga waisa likh
update soon baby

Thank u kaheeshaaa 🤗
I am super glad that u liked the plot
I was nervous while posting this 😆
Yesh pakka

Originally posted by: kriapatel

Nice convept
continu doon

Thanks 😊

Originally posted by: Couch_Potato

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Hey Mahi!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">I really enjoyed the synopsis and your interesting choice of words. It was a fun read. These lines really stood out for me:</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#0000ff">Oh how they fail to understand that the foundation of the one is impossible without the existence of the other .</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">and</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#0000ff">When two contradictions as uncharacteristic as antonyms synchronize ?</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Oh and go about it however you prefer, with character synopsis or without. Also I completely relate to your pain about finding that perfect title. It's such a task! Anyways, I found your title intriguing so good job! </font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Looking forward to reading more! Do update soon!😊</font>

Thank you fin 🤗
Glad to know that you understood the story behind the words , Ican decipher that very well from ur comment ^_^
Hahhaha it is really a pain in the a** 😆

amazing and a great concept... do continue soon and pm me

Superb Synopsis...
Nyc title...
Seems interesting

Do cont soon..
N thnks 4 d pm...

Originally posted by: kriyansh_Alisha

loved the synopsis...

update soon...

Thanks😃
yes will update asap 😊

Ohhh teriii...
Mahi aap writter ho ? :o :o
awsmmm haa...
Mast synopsis mast tha...
I had to sit with dictionary.. Ufff...
Hmm.. Interesting lagging mujhe..
Chalo jaldi se iska 1st chappy deke udghatan kero...
Aur haan... Mujhe bhi pm ker dena.. Badi meherbaani hogi aapki...
N yusshhh... Me waiting for d updte :D

It's amazing can't wait to read on and plz give character sketch