Arshi FF: Zindagi of Arshi THREAD 2: FINAL EPILOGUE - Pg: 114

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archmink

@archmink

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#701

I had to step out and take a lung full of fresh air ... it just made me so much sad ... and then I told myself 'iss pyar ko kya naam doon?' ... in all reality 'aisa pyaar kahaa?'

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Nutcase

@dreamymaya

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#702

Ravanaprabu reference when Mohanlal realises that Revathi is no more...his stunned expression and then how he kisses her forehead...I mean that part was touching in that movie...those subtle expressions on Mohanlal's face and his recap of how Revathi came in his life and that final kiss on her forehead paints how much he loved her...that was deep!

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srmirji

@srmirji

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#703

Daljeet, how could u write something so epic...u had to touch our hearts...bring imbalance to the mind...I read it 4 times...hv it open in the phone browser from 3 days...Will read it many more times ...I had to cry...especially when arnavs eyes watered after her death...n when arnav himself gave up on.life ...no khushi no arnav...

Arnav as a character is seen in many men...they expect everything from their wives...end to end...and some men like arnav get lucky to get it all...so i have nothing againt the arnav in your story...accepted n.loved...but he shone in the end...made up for everything...he took care of khushi like a true lover...

Thanks daljeet...pls publish this story...

Take care

Sri

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lechuarshi

@lechuarshi

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#704

Originally posted by: dreamymaya
Ravanaprabu reference when Mohanlal realises that Revathi is no more...his stunned expression and then how he kisses her forehead...I mean that part was touching in that movie...those subtle expressions on Mohanlal's face and his recap of how Revathi came in his life and that final kiss on her forehead paints how much he loved her...that was deep!

And the song dat follows aftr heart wrenching scene.."Akasha deepangal sakshi.."...
And this story's ending made me remind of Mohan lal's performance in Thanmaathra as an Alzheimer patient.. 😭 👏

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ship13

@ship13

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#705

You wrote a beautiful story and I am so glad that I got the chance to read it. The way you build the characters along with the storyline was absolutely magnificent. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it from start to finish. Thank you so much. While Khushi getting Alzheimer's was heart breaking but the way you wrote about arnav taking care of her clearly showed that they both were soul mates who needed each other and whose love transcended even death. Awesome writing. A classic tale of arnav and Khushi indeed !! 👏

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ritika

@ritikaagrawal

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#706

was waiting for grand finale of yours daljeet...
and must light,camera,action...everything was perfect...

indeed perfect👏👏👏
this story had took another place in my heart😊

superbly written😉

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priya260187

@priya260187

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#707

Fabulous update
I'm literally crying but I am satisfied that they will be together forever in heaven.
You are a fabulous writer.
Love you
God bless you.

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pup_2

@pup_2

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#708

Even though im angry on u for making them go through so much in there life
I should agree to the fact that u made there love more intense and respectful .
OMG u r so bad im not able to stop my tears

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riafna

@riafna

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#709

I didn't read fully just last epilogue . I'm crying. I missed them. They went lots of trouble. I can't see them suffering but somewhere I don't want to read a story of husband falling love with another woman. Even it's khushi . Something my conscious not approving what if I were Lavanya... argh I can't imagine that...

All the best dear...