Arshi FF: Zindagi of Arshi THREAD 2: FINAL EPILOGUE - Pg: 114 - Page 68

I'm very happy seeing the love arnav has for khushi and not wanting to leave her in her bad times and khushi wanting to leave him for she is not going to get any better and arnav has a life ahead of him... but the whole situation made me sooo much sad... they didn't deserve that in their life after everything they had went thru together ... it was them against the whole world and they had defeated every single thing everyone and their love came out as a winner ... and life is a bitch I tell you cuz if they weren't meant to be then aman wuldnt had died in an accident and their destiny wouldn't have bring them together ... yes I feel sad for lavnya but she making her self measurable and that sigh that came from the bottom of her heart saying that other person had ruined her life ... like they say in old hindi movies -----tumhe meri haye lagegi------ like that say that be very carefull of what you wish for or what ask for when you are pryaing ... cuz I believe I dose have a power to change ones life ... and current condition came from her stresss and immense guilt for thinking that she had ruined lavnyas happily married life ... lavnya blaming arnav and khushi for her depressed life ... the person who lavnya needed to blame was whomever had pushed her in to an arranged marriage ... that is the problem of arrange marriage ---make it work---- it'll happen---- give it a try or sometime ----- this world in arrange marriages are very common and that is lavnyas destruction cuz her said husband never did fall in to love with her even after spending almost a decade with her ... he never found that home in her ... he found love out of his wed lock and waited for almost 10 yrs before moving on with her ... even when khushi wasn't in the picture for those ten yrs he couldn't move on in his marriage with lavnya ... the air was becoming suffocating for him and the first chance he gat he grabed to survive and moved on with the one he loved ... and after his marriage to khushi some how in my opinion lavnya became a charity case to me for her own self ..she did that to her self ... her ability to not let go and move on or be happy of what you have and be depressed or hurl accusation to others make them feel guilty for her state in life had I believe had pressed wrong buttons in to khushi's mind ... lavnya was good person but khushi was too good for her ownself ... she even decided that she wouldn't have more kids with the person she loves because his exwife might feel bad or she didn't want to rub her happiness on to lavnya's face ... PART of the reason for her illness is her constant thinking and stressing about lavnya ... ... and I don't blame lavnya here she is intitle to her own thinking ... and what she felt toward arnav or khushi was all natural feeling of a divorcee who felt a rejection from the one person she was CLOSE to...

I seriously thought that arnav might convience khushi to have a child ... and I believe they deserved it tooo... I believed in arnav an khushi's happily ever after in to their life --der se hi sahi--- ...
but the problems just have began for them ... I know one's medical condition doesn't have anything to do with what others wish or thinks to happen to them but like they say---karma is a bitch--- and if lavnya never felt at peace then arnav wouldn't either with khushi ... that's a sigh that might have unconsously escaped her heart

I am just too shocked after reading the update.

Life is a struggle. We fight our demons, we face the challenges life throws at us everyday in a hope that there is light at the end of the tunnel and this is true either its a story or real people.

But what if the light turned out to be an illusion and there is just darkness all around you ultimately, then life is not worth fighting for at all.

I dont know what else to say at this point.

awesome. ...superb...loved it to core...
can't wait for the next...

Amnesia??? Seriously? That was over do...you gave symptoms of Alzehmers here...If it was beginning stage of Alzhimers then it would have been fine...Have you seen Ok Kanmani- Ganpathy-wife relationship...somewhat this epilogue Khushi's situation reminded me of that...But something was missing in your writing...Though Arnav's question held a valid point and the whole scene demanded emotions...I didn't feel that emotions...

Ok Pearl-Arnav relationship felt realistic...tragedy brought them together...good..So Lavanaya and Anil...hmmm...I liked Anil's perspective of Lavanya and his understanding of their differences...He is a strong guiding light for La...In a way good...Even though I don't totally agree to Anil's point of La being never in love with Arnav, I agree that La's current issue was she couldn't let go of the feeling of loosing love...

Below part reminded me strongly of the discussion we had in our personal lives - even though situations were slightly different - Anil sounded like you - too logical - most of the dialogues I felt familiar because you have spoken them to me...

Loved this part of Ayaan's conversation..it was touching...a sincere effort from him to see him mom happy: Try mum, try to live your life. It is too short to mop around. If you want to be happy, that is in your hands alone. My father cheated on you, betrayed you and left you alone. I won't deny that. But your life after that is your choice. If you sit and cry over him or be stuck with him or move on without him is your choice. What you make of that situation in your life is your decision. It's difficult yes, but so much time has gone by Mum and you are still there where my father left you...

You see it's not necessary that love should be a two way thing, a one way love can give you a bittersweet feeling too. And I thought I was enjoying it, while actually it was poisoning my life slowly. --- very true..once I too had the same notion but felt it was a poison...

Life will never remain constant. Pain and pleasure are twin sisters and there is always a sunrise after a sunset!--- nice line!

Lavanya: But I would like to disagree with you on one thing. I did love him. Maybe not now, maybe I did not see the real Arnav, but I did accept him and loved him with all my heart. What I needed was only little love, and what I had to offer was also love and I did that sincerely with him. Please don't say I never loved him.---yeah! That's true...she did love him once sincerely with her whole heart...

Anil's proposal was out of blue to La and I am not sure whether it was right time...it reminded me of Grandmaster movie where Anoop proposes Priyamani...Honestly you could have polished this epilogue...

I was never a fan of this story n had stopped reading it after initial few chapters but later read last two chapters.. In your pursuit to make the story realistic you couldn't bring out the passion and love between arshi. (I guess this is an arshi story right?) ... Hope nobody in real life should get such twists n turns in their life 😕Guess I will erase from memory about the epilogues..

such a heart wrenching thing to happen to khushi n Arnav they finally start to live their lives together n this happens

Daljeet, you wanted to give a sad ending, thats fine but I wish you would have gradually taken the readers towards that instead of showing us happy times and a hope for a happily ever after situation and suddenly giving us a tragic ending.

Superb
I just czme across this story
Its amazing i reD all in one go
Loved it alot
Update soon and pm me

Originally posted by: canapoem

Daljeet, you wanted to give a sad ending, thats fine but I wish you would have gradually taken the readers towards that instead of showing us happy times and a hope for a happily ever after situation and suddenly giving us a tragic ending.

Please do not get offended with my comments.

Since we all are emotional beings and, afterall we come to IF to spend some stress free time here, I wish you would have prepared us earlier for this ending.

Originally posted by: roopathomas

I was never a fan of this story n had stopped reading it after initial few chapters but later read last two chapters.. In your pursuit to make the story realistic you couldn't bring out the passion and love between arshi. (I guess this is an arshi story right?) ... Hope nobody in real life should get such twists n turns in their life 😕Guess I will erase from memory about the epilogues..