SwaRon SS: It's about time||Epilogue Updated|| - Page 13

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Posted: 11 years ago

i loved this part a lot

"Don't you dare say that Sharon. Don't you dare talk of me falling out of love with you." He said slowly. He wiped the tears off her eyes as she continued looking at him, unable to believe what he had actually said. Sharon was struck by reality, but she couldn't speak out of shock. She was crying, she was too numb to feel anything. She was equally helpless as Swayam was, a few moments back.

it was an awesome ss mihi thanx for the PM.i wish patch up of swaron could be our new year gift by D3.and i liked the scenes of this week.

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome n amazing update..

emotions of sharon n swayam was penned brilliantly..

their helplessness was beautifully penned..

sharon thinking swayam has fallen out of love n swayam taken aback coz of it n said he can never fall out of love for her n gave her a chance indirectly was awesome..

their hug said it al which can't b expressed by words... awesome.. finally they r together..

waiting for epilogue.. awesome part..

Edited by vaishu88 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice ending..
sharon tried her best to make swayam realise her guilt as well as her true love...
but after constanly hearing that ur love is fake,it is temporary nonsense,u ll start thinking that u r not trustworthy and doesnt deserve 2nd chance...thats what happened with sharon...
i liked hw swayam reacted when sharon called he doesnt love her...at that time swayam must hv realised hw it hurts when the one u love so much calls ur love fake...
i think ending will become more perfect with swayam's apology and swayam speaking about his side story also..
but i liked swaron hug at ending.. full of passion,pain,desperateness,longing 4 each other..☺️
u r fab in writing emotional stuffs i must say..👏
Edited by shruti_vrushan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey I was looking forward of what will really be at the end of the conversation and you have really done Fab job with that. It seemed to be perfect ending to me but still my heart wants that it should go on and on so basically i am addicted to this story and i don't want to end but anyways it has come to end.

It was just beautiful the way you built up the story and the way you took them to confront each other was extremely pleasing to me.

Thank you for coming up such beautiful work and it will sound normal to you but still this fan of yours always wants such works coming from you.. all the best for future works Mihi...

Pratik...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Epilogue.

Silence surrounded them as they sat with each other on one of the steps in the abandoned corridor. They did not utter a word. Sharon was periodically stealing glances at Swayam, and Swayam at Sharon, unsure of what to say.

"Swayam..." She said after some time, breaking the silence.

"Yes?" Swayam looked at her.

"Thanks. For, understanding my point of view. "

"Hmm..." He managed to blurter. He wasn't sure of what to say.

"I know after whatever I did, I didn't deserve anything.. Not your love..neither respect..only hatred.. I know. I know I'm a bad person, but I promise I'll never, never ever do any such thing in future, I can't.. Let's just go and tell everyone about us..." She said with a wavering head as Swayam looked on.

"Why are you quiet?" She asked.

"Sharon..." He cupped her face, with utmost care in his eyes. "I love you. You need not provide any justification. Let's just forget this matter as a bad experience?"

"Swayam but.."

"Please Sharon... You have absolutely no idea through what I've been through...after you did that...so let's just forget it?"

She felt a bit insulted as he said that. A bit angry too.

Sharon's brow corrugated. "I have no idea? You are saying I've no idea when I was in a worse situation all that time. Not only my boyfriend, but even my best friend was not talking to me. I know you weren't even trying to come close to me then, but I felt so hurt...for the first time ever Sharon Rai Prakash who is a pro at hurting people went through a phase of denial and rejection, all because of you" She slowed down. "But still I had no worries, maybe I deserved that..."

"Sharon...Now we are not here to cry due to the past are we? Even I doubted, for a long time...whether you actually love me or no?" He giggled.

"Swayam don't laugh. You are making a joke out of my feelings.. Obviously I love you. I am not mad Swayam. Had I not loved you, I wouldn't have done everything to win you back."

"Sharon..." He placed a pacifying hand over her shoulder. She was giving justifications for everything... "Stop getting hyper okay?"

Sharon calmed down a bit.

"You know something?"

"What?" She asked.

"You are the first person who made me feel so loved all this while."

Sharon blushed.

"You always do that." She said. "For a change, I did. What's the big deal?"

"The big deal is that I've accomplished." He said authoritatively.

"In?"

He smiled. He took her hands in his and said. "In making your love as intense as mine."

Sharon smiled and for a second got lost in his eyes. Finally, the emotions which she could see in his eyes were visible in her eyes. So deep, so intense, so full of love.

She nodded.

"Thanks Sharon." He said.

"You shouldn't say thanks Swayam..." She said. "Whatever happened, and why we are sitting next to each other like this is only and only because of our trust in each other. I know you must have already stopped trusting me..."

"Shhh.." He placed his finger on her lips. "I still trust you Sharon. Trust is the base of every relationship."

"You do?" She asked him apprehensively.

"Yes I do. I love you Sharon." He said. "I love you a lot." He smiled.

Her face broke into a smile like never before as she heard those three magical words from him. She was so happy, to have him back in her life. She couldn't ask for anything more.

She engulfed him in a tight hug. She didn't know what to do... how to react...but she wanted to stay in those arms like forever... She just wanted to be with him. She loved him. And she was so lucky to be loved by someone like him. It was probably the best day of her life...a new beginning to something beautiful.


Edited by Mihi4VruShan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Author's note.

Hey all. I know the epilogue didn't turn out as expected, but this is probably the way I'd like the story of SwaRon to move. Now of course, they have been starved to death.

Thanks to everyone who read the story on a daily basis and supported it. It means a lot. I couldn't update because of time issues, and the problem is that I'm always logged in from phone because of which people think that I'm online and super lazy. 😳

Hope you all liked the chapter.

P.S I'm not going to update Unchained Hearts/ Incomplete Love in the near future i.e in the coming two-three months because of less time. In fact i'm going completely inactive after 7th Jan probably , so I won't be able to update anything or write any OS. So kindly bear with me, I'm posting this note hear itself, I know I'm cruel but I've no other option. You might have even lost interest, it's all because of me. Sorry for that. I'm a horrible updater so I'm not even going to write any other short stories after completing them. 😳

Thanks for bearing with me all this while. Happy New Year to all of you. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
I loved the epilogue mihi beautifully written by you..😊. Your works are always something different to read something out of the box with a different touch to them and I appreciate that about you..😃.
Sharon Raiprakash was officially back to being the Boss in this epilogue and I quite liked it but she was also the shy and demure who is in love with Swayam so thumbs up for that..👍🏼.
I liked seeing the Swayam we Swaron fans relate to coming back in your epilogue so it was a treat to read lover boy Swayam again kudos to you for expressing their emotions and feelings in the correct manner and in the proper quotient well written mihi keep up the good work and update you other works soon I look forward to reading them..😊.
Love,
Kashmi..
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Posted: 11 years ago
well mihi d epilogue was very nicely written. .
It served as a perfect ending. .
D convo was well justified. .
I liked sharon giving justifications n swayam listening to her. .
Finally dey r back atleast in our stories. .
Loved d ss. . Keep it up
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet16cash

I loved the epilogue mihi beautifully written by you..😊. Your works are always something different to read something out of the box with a different touch to them and I appreciate that about you..😃.
Sharon Raiprakash was officially back to being the Boss in this epilogue and I quite liked it but she was also the shy and demure who is in love with Swayam so thumbs up for that..👍🏼.
I liked seeing the Swayam we Swaron fans relate to coming back in your epilogue so it was a treat to read lover boy Swayam again kudos to you for expressing their emotions and feelings in the correct manner and in the proper quotient well written mihi keep up the good work and update you other works soon I look forward to reading them..😊.
Love,
Kashmi..


Thank you for such a sweet comment kashmi. Your comments are always so sweet and really overwhelming. Glad you could connect to it. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Shilpa_SwaRon

well mihi d epilogue was very nicely written. .
It served as a perfect ending. .
D convo was well justified. .
I liked sharon giving justifications n swayam listening to her. .
Finally dey r back atleast in our stories. .
Loved d ss. . Keep it up


Thank you so much Shilpa di 🤗

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