SwaRon SS: It's about time||Epilogue Updated||

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rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#111

res

unres

as a writer yu definitely struck a chord for me

the whole series was emotional n heart-touching

i really luved tat sharon anticipated n took control of the situation

when swayam was leaving n the emotional outburst between the two

sply sharon's outburst in the end her confussion her helplessness

to reach out to swayam n not losing hope was clearly visible

yu gave a perfect end wit tat dailog tat swayam said in the end

all in all very beautifully penned

do write more 😊

Edited by rosyrkohli - 11 years ago

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Nishi

@.nerfherder

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#112

res
(i know i havnt unres-d my comment on the previous update..i will do soon..promise..please dnt kill me :P)
unres

aha! i loved it!!
at last swaron are back!
the way you wrote about the tiredness of sharon and swayam
trust me i felt exhausted myself too..
sharon "realising" that maybe swayam didnt love her
and swayam's reaction

"Don't you dare say that Sharon. Don't you dare talk of me falling out of love with you.

personally this marked the return of THE loverboy for me..
i LOVED this line of swayam..
superb update in short..

Edited by Nishi.Kss - 11 years ago

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Ananya

@ExpectoPatronus

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#113

ohhh gosh... just awesome... 👏

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-TanHaVruShan-

@-TanHaVruShan-

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#114

Ah finally finally finally dey r back together. .
Dis was one update full of emotions. .
Loved how u penned both their emotions, feelings n thoughts. .
U kept d end simple n i liked dat. .
Sometimes silence says it all n dat final hug said it all for them. .
Beautifully update n brilliant end to d ss. .
Loved it completely reading dis whole ss. .
Superb work mihi

Edited by Shilpa_SwaRon - 11 years ago

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zk456789

@zk456789

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#115

Amazing updates emotional drama everything in one ss love it
Awesome from start till end
Thanks for the pm
Waiting for the epilogue
Do update soon

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paro1311

@paro1311

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#116

Honestly, last chapter wasnt one of ur bests😛 but this one made up for it and had the depth the last one lacked.. throughout the SS, Sharon's undying determination to win him back was the highlight for me.. nd wen i say win him back, u wrote it the most sensible, practical nd matured way to do it unlike what was shown in the show!! their issued had to be sorted out by talking abt it than any other strategy sharon could come up with.. nd i loved the way u wrote it! this was a beatiful chapter especially towards the end

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nancynnv

@nancynnv

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#117

res ! ❤️

hey mihi if i forget to unres it pls pm me 😛

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Muskan Verma

@Muskan_SwaRon

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#118

It was amazing
You described it so well
Amazing chapter
Finally swaron are together
Good work dear!!!

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medha

@ToujoursPur

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#119

just about brilliant.

an ending worth waiting for.

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#120

the chapter was awesome... finally after take their control of emotions out
from heart and said to know each other and their confession of love was superb...
do continue soon and pm me