Arshi OS - Mrs. Raizada - Part 3 (Part 4 link added)

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sigrid

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

beautiful...loved it.👏👏👏 Well written. Loved Arshi and their love and nokjoks!

Edited by sigrid - 11 years ago

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zohakhan7

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

this is an amazing series
loving it

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Cynthia Abruzzo DeSiena

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Durga, Bravo. That was was quite entertaining! 👏 Love the title and ongoing stories. I am also glad that Liza got her due. Karma huh?

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

read once, laughed and sniggered, must read when i am less sleepy... will be back to comment.

thanks so much, durga.

adding on.

read again... giggled and laughed loudly. sorry i am a mean one. that liza needed fixing.

i loved khushi hugging asr and asr laughing.

also her glare felt by him right at the beginning.

very nice series developing. who's next?

Edited by indi52 - 11 years ago

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Anjani Patel

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

I'm loving this! They make up for all the times Arnav never truly established Khushi as Mrs. Raizada!

This part was amazing! Can't wait for the next one!

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teja21

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

awesome os dear

thanx fr d pm

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RizArshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

You know you should find out each one of the people who has hurt or humiliated Khushi and write an OS on them. I just love to read them. This one was no different. Loved it so much. I didn't think you will write a third part. So it was a pleasant surprise. This one was fantastic. Well done :)

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Such a beautiful OS 👏

Loved every bit of it.I was thinking someone should do something for Lizza...and here is our Durga ...

So Arnie sensed the tension in his queen while hugging Liz...awww shoo shweet...

Khushi wants ti pull her hair and Natasha is helping her to do so...🤣 its a wig ...what a touch here.muahhh for that

He brought Khushi closer and Lizz is getting heart attack and finally kissed the floor.😆 without those hair.Durga Daad daini pade gi tere dimaag ki...👏

Finally you brought my dream on this page ...she and him together on the stage , hands in hands and closer for the world to see if she can fall from that stage she can make others fall for her from the stage too.I wanna hug you...

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PSharada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Nice story. Loved reading this one. Liza was completely confused to know what had happened to Arnav and Khushi - Beautiful

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DurgaS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: lippo253
Wow that was a wondeful part.liza deserves thz for insulting our khushi.lol just imagng liza standing with a broom r a mop.hehe.thnks 4 da pm dr

Thanks. 😆 Ya Liza with a broom and mop, quite a sight, right?

Edited by DurgaS - 11 years ago