ASYA (KABHI) FF- Given and Denied- Thread 2- Chapter 15 to Chapter 23

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Sadia Sharmeen Swapno

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Posted: 11 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: shreya11mehra
Congrats fr new thread
Lovely update

thank you so much🤗

Glad that you loved it😃

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Sadia Sharmeen Swapno

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Posted: 11 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: sasir
nice.loved it.

Thank you so much🤗

glad that you loved it😃

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Sadia Sharmeen Swapno

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Posted: 11 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: manognasai
Nice update..so AsYa are realising their feelings slowly!Loved the way Zoya is waiting for his good night without sleeping!

Thank you so much..🤗

i am really happy...that you liked it😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

#114

Hey dear sorry for late comment...

update was like superb !!!!!!!

very nicely written asya's state...

Asad...ohh god he badly missed her...his staring job...zoya by his side...

he was so tensed when she didn't come...his care is so visible...

he want to know what is love ???...good going...

at the same time zoya is also missed him...she can't understand her own feelings...

both r so confused with this new feelings...

Dilshad's explanation about love so beautiful dear...to love & being in love...its so true..that void created by absence of that person can't fulfilled with anything...loved it...

last part was so beautiful...just one Good night from each other make them happy...

lovely update...just feel like being in love with ur story...

continue soon...

Thank u so much for pm 😊😊

Edited by skavya - 11 years ago

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Hoor

@HooriAsadMalik

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Posted: 11 years ago

#115

Waiting for the next update! !!

update soon!

Thanks😊

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pinkugarg

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Posted: 11 years ago

#116

Beautiful update

Finally asya are falling for each other

Continue soon😊

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akaswan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: swapno

Aww...don't be...it is not good for health..😃

I can't do anything about it 😆

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akaswan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: akaswan

I can't do anything about it 😆

Hey bubby how are you ?😃

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Sadia Sharmeen Swapno

@swapno

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Posted: 11 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: skavya
Hey dear sorry for late comment...
update was like superb !!!!!!!

very nicely written asya's state...
Asad...ohh god he badly missed her...his staring job...zoya by his side...
he was so tensed when she didn't come...his care is so visible...
he want to know what is love ???...good going...
at the same time zoya is also missed him...she can't understand her own feelings...
both r so confused with this new feelings...

Dilshad's explanation about love so beautiful dear...to love & being in love...its so true..that void created by absence of that person can't fulfilled with anything...loved it...

last part was so beautiful...just one Good night from each other make them happy...

lovely update...just feel like being in love with ur story...

continue soon...
Thank u so much for pm 😊😊

Hey 🤗

It is okay...

Thank you so much🤗

So happy that you like my writing style😃

Like I always said I love to read your comment❤️

You point out every notch of each chapter so clear that I have to read it again because I think really I write it in this way?😆 😆

Aww... that's really a huge complement. This forum has so many beautiful writers. With their story if you are in love with the story of an amateur writer like mine then I am the luckiest.😎

Thank you so so so so much🤗

I will try to update soon😊

and you keep commenting😳 😊