#2 My Heart whispers, but i Can't hear...Part-20 to Part-32(pg-136) - Page 93

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mmjjppss

Wat to say... a smooth update... the way shlok recognises astha felt nice... but jeenia i think it would b great if u jump months directly... felt lik its movin slow nd pleasent as breeze...would lik som crazzines as before ...!




Yaar i can't jump months... if yo remember, shlok has just few months... if i jump months, he will be directly on death bed.don't you want to see them together once before he is ...
i will say just wait for few updates till they will be together...

Edited by jeenia123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jeenia123



Thanks a lot dear...



you are welcome😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: niki795



you are welcome😊



but you know, i never re read my stories, not even updates once after editing... silly me...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jeenia123


yaar i was thinking to ed as t that time, i had not thought of present track moreover my break was for fifteen days initially.but now my hubby didn't get so much leaves, so have to cut short trip...will be back in five days only...

this is the best news i got today...this story is not goin to end soon...
now m sooo happpyyy... i wish this goes to 3rd n even 4th thread...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: naina..

this is the best news i got today...this story is not goin to end soon...
now m sooo happpyyy... i wish this goes to 3rd n even 4th thread...




I to wish the same
hope JEENIA listens to us😆😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: naina..

this is the best news i got today...this story is not goin to end soon...
now m sooo happpyyy... i wish this goes to 3rd n even 4th thread...



Third to, we are definitely going by Monday...about fourth...agar ap logon ki kripya drishti bani rhi to...
Omg.i am day dreaming...

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Posted: 11 years ago


Thanks a lot dear
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: niki795




I to wish the same
hope JEENIA listens to us😆😉



Jeenia is always there to listen to her loved ones... thanks a lot guys.i am here just because of you people... Love you all...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: niki795

awesome update
loved it
superb
loved varun and gauri teasing astha about shlok
loved astha and shlok part
mostly their friendship and their talks in their mind about each other
and their love for each other


Shlok, what is all this? You skipped medicines today? Varun and Gauri shouted as soon as they reached home...
I am sorry yaar... all Shlok said...
But you had promised...what id Aashka was not here? Gauri shouted looking at Astha...
I am saying na sorry sweetie...I will take care next time...
No, not like this, saying Varun took his phone and started dialing...
Whom are you calling now? Shlok sked...
Astha...i am going to tell her everything, only she can handle you...Varun spoke dialing number,
But Shlok immediately pulled phone from him... I am sorry baba...I promise, now onwards , I will never miss my medicine...
Astha ki kasam? Varun asked...
Ok baba, Astha ki Kasam... from now onwards I will never miss my medicine, take care of myself properly...He sighed...
Office bhi jaoge? Gauri too got chance...
Ok, from tomorrow onwards, I am joining baba's office... Happy now?
Shlok, we are asking for you stupid...Varun spoke, if you will go out of home, meet new people, your mind will change a bit,. You will forget your problems...
Ya, I understand Varun, Shlok smiled...i will forget everything for few moments...except...
Except? Gauri asked...
Astha... Shlok spoke from nowhere... It's just one day and I am feeling... He left incomplete going to his room leaving Varun Gauri and Astha there all sad...



liked the above part...
varun and gauri blackmailing shlok about telling to astha and make him do all things
totally superb update
continue soon



Thnaks a lot dear... yes, shlok needs to move a bit in is life except to mourn over what he is losing...he needs to change his thinking a bit.and aashka will help him till he can listen...

Thnaks a lot for liking blackmailing art, this was meera's suggestion and i liked it , so used it..my favorite one is their conversation about each other..whne they speak about their love and their loved ones...

Yes they two are in front of each other yet too apart...just wait what next...

Edited by jeenia123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jeenia123



Jeenia is always there to listen to her loved ones... thanks a lot guys.i am here just because of you people... Love you all...




we love you to🤗

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