#2 My Heart whispers, but i Can't hear...Part-20 to Part-32(pg-136) - Page 92

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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update ,made me cry a bit
dont know what exactly to feel at dis moment...
should i feel sad for shlok n astha ,they are going through very tough circumstances n in the coming time things might get even worse...😭
or
I should feel happy that they are together he has astha beside him n astha gets to take care of him though he is unaware... i loved astha n shlok's conversation so much emotions but still trying to control... Ya, he is not here but my love is still same for him...Out of sight doesn't mean out of life...does it for you?

What? Shlok stammered for a moment...

I mean, if Astha is not here with you, means she is out of your life?

No, not at all...she is my life and will be till my last breath, saying Shlok finished his food..



Ummm... she smiled... have a loving husband, who loves me more than my life. She spoke looking into Shlok's eyes... Who can do anything for my happiness...even staying away from me just for my happiness...

Away from you for your happiness? Shlok was surprised...

Yes, Astha spoke...yes, actually I m pregnant and can't go to him for two months...she paused... due to some complications...and ...he is handling everything alone...but I love him so much, I love him more than anything in my life... Astha spoke holding her broken voice...

I wish you and your husband be soon together...Shlok smiled...

i wish his wish comes true...




I will try to talk.. Astha spoke...

In his dreams? Varun winked at her with smirk...

Shut up... Astha spoke shyly...he spoke something?

Ya, he told you were with him in his dreams... Varun smiled naughtily...

And both Varun and Gauri were teasing her...

n

I will cook his favorite rice for him. Astha smiled...

And at the next moment you will be out ...Gauri tapped her head...you know, he recognizes your cooking out of thousands...

liked these fun elements...

will be waiting for ur next update...

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jeenia123



First of all, this is not going to end yaar...
I will be on break of four to five days and will continue... because, its getting long enough...to give proper shape... abhi to unko miln hai, ladn ahai, pyar karn ahai, shdi krni hai...a lt to go yet...it will not end so soon...i think so...
Secondly beautiful poem...
Loved it...
Thirdly...thanks...yes, they talked to each other about each other and spoke so much, he is feeling she is around yet unknown to truth...
Lets see what next...

welcome dearšŸ¤—
thank god!🄳
i read it somewhere where you
wrote its going to end...
now am happyšŸ˜›šŸ˜›
so lot of things on our way...
hmm waiting...waiting
"aur koi option nahi he hamare pas"šŸ˜‰
Edited by -LECHU- - 11 years ago
niki795 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -LECHU-

this first place always brings me the memories of
jeenia's old ff
is it love...
bcoz,i always reserved...
first place most often there😊
hmm..will read it again tonight...



that's nice lechu
yes is it love is one of the best story I read on IF
😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jeenia123



I know, you reserve place an dread later...don;t worry i will be waiting...
😊



thanks dear
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jeenia123



Ya i already read that thread and comment too...
Meerab is a sweetheart.i had never thought, i will ever add banners as truly speaking i don;t know much about Photoshop.actually i never tried yet...




ya I too read that thread...
and comment some times
meerab and her creations are always superb...love them
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wat to say... a smooth update... the way shlok recognises astha felt nice... but jeenia i think it would b great if u jump months directly... felt lik its movin slow nd pleasent as breeze...would lik som crazzines as before ...!
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Posted: 11 years ago


Kuch na kaho..kuch bhi na kaho...
kya kehna hai, kya sunna hia...
tumko pta hai...humko pta hai...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: naina..

nice update ,made me cry a bit

dont know what exactly to feel at dis moment...
should i feel sad for shlok n astha ,they are going through very tough circumstances n in the coming time things might get even worse...😭
or
I should feel happy that they are together he has astha beside him n astha gets to take care of him though he is unaware... i loved astha n shlok's conversation so much emotions but still trying to control... Ya, he is not here but my love is still same for him...Out of sight doesn't mean out of life...does it for you?

What? Shlok stammered for a moment...

I mean, if Astha is not here with you, means she is out of your life?

No, not at all...she is my life and will be till my last breath, saying Shlok finished his food..



Ummm... she smiled... have a loving husband, who loves me more than my life. She spoke looking into Shlok's eyes... Who can do anything for my happiness...even staying away from me just for my happiness...

Away from you for your happiness? Shlok was surprised...

Yes, Astha spoke...yes, actually I m pregnant and can't go to him for two months...she paused... due to some complications...and ...he is handling everything alone...but I love him so much, I love him more than anything in my life... Astha spoke holding her broken voice...

I wish you and your husband be soon together...Shlok smiled...

i wish his wish comes true...




I will try to talk.. Astha spoke...

In his dreams? Varun winked at her with smirk...

Shut up... Astha spoke shyly...he spoke something?

Ya, he told you were with him in his dreams... Varun smiled naughtily...

And both Varun and Gauri were teasing her...

n

I will cook his favorite rice for him. Astha smiled...

And at the next moment you will be out ...Gauri tapped her head...you know, he recognizes your cooking out of thousands...

liked these fun elements...

will be waiting for ur next update...



Thanks a lot dear...yes they are beside each other always and forever whether he knows or not...but she will stand by him...
don;t be sad for them..i will say, juts be happy for them, no matter what circumstances are, they can stand for each other...
I had already told, next ones will be funny as well as emotional..no more tears.
Happy moments will be on the way...

thanks for liking the parts...
may update tomorrow...

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -LECHU-

welcome dearšŸ¤—
thank god!🄳
i read it somewhere where you
wrote its going to end...
now am happyšŸ˜›šŸ˜›
so lot of things on our way...
hmm waiting...waiting
"aur koi option nahi he hamare pas"šŸ˜‰


yaar i was thinking to ed as t that time, i had not thought of present track moreover my break was for fifteen days initially.but now my hubby didn't get so much leaves, so have to cut short trip...will be back in five days only...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: niki795



that's nice lechu
yes is it love is one of the best story I read on IF
😊



Thanks a lot dear...

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