#2 My Heart whispers, but i Can't hear...Part-20 to Part-32(pg-136) - Page 82

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jeenia123



awee..don't cry please... just imagine, if she will change eye's color now, will not that create doubt in shlok's mind?




ohk on one condition
well u will start ur new ff on ashlok make sure u will make her apply every sortt of khol
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Posted: 11 years ago
i just loved it... what made u think u il get negative feedback... !!! it was awsome , i felt the lightheaded aspect of story coming back again...
oh i cant stop myself from quoting again...

Ya, has Astha left? Shlok asked...

Ya, she left in afternoon...Varun spoke...

Didn't she... Ask about me or thought to meet me for once? Shlok spoke halfheartedly...

She wanted to Shlok, but we stopped her as we know, you can't see het going and she will not be able to leave...so it was better for both of you...you took medicine today?

What is the need to take medicine now Varun? I don't have any reason to live now... Shlok had a tear in his eye...

that was heart touching... later again he asks gauri about the same...😔 n i liked the frnz convo

The lady forwarded hand towards Shlok for hand shake...Hi... I am. Aashka... Aashka Siddiqui...

Shlok held the hand politely but as he touched her hand, a sensation flew in his body...(Astha...he felt immediately... no...she is not, then why did I feel as if... May be because I am missing her so much)

You...you stay here alone? Shlok asked hesitatingly...

n then regarding the ring...i was smiling at his confused state😊

the night scenes was so cute,very beautifully written...


After sometime Shlok too got up with a smile on his face...

Ahaan...very happy today? Varun smiled when their servant brought tea for them...

Ya, really I am very happy today...Shlok smiled...last night Astha was with me...

What? Varun was a bit shocked...

I mean, in my dream... But it was so real... just like she is here with me only just next to me...you know Varun, I am really feeling too much fresh, too happy today...

awww , finally he has a smile on his face..😊.felt happy for him...

il be waiting for ur next update eagerly...

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pt311288




grt passion and time pass tooo
i too love writing...
keep it up



Ya i know, you too write, when are you going to update yours?
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pt311288




ohk on one condition
well u will start ur new ff on ashlok make sure u will make her apply every sortt of khol


Ok dear...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jeenia123



Is it just reserved? i didn't get what you want to say in second line...

actually i typed the reply once n tried to post it,but in vain n it got deleted too,n dis happened again,silly me ... hav posted my views
,in IF way -unres my views😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: naina..

i just loved it... what made u think u il get negative feedback... !!! it was awsome , i felt the lightheaded aspect of story coming back again...

oh i cant stop myself from quoting again...

Ya, has Astha left? Shlok asked...

Ya, she left in afternoon...Varun spoke...

Didn't she... Ask about me or thought to meet me for once? Shlok spoke halfheartedly...

She wanted to Shlok, but we stopped her as we know, you can't see het going and she will not be able to leave...so it was better for both of you...you took medicine today?

What is the need to take medicine now Varun? I don't have any reason to live now... Shlok had a tear in his eye...

that was heart touching... later again he asks gauri about the same...😔 n i liked the frnz convo

The lady forwarded hand towards Shlok for hand shake...Hi... I am. Aashka... Aashka Siddiqui...

Shlok held the hand politely but as he touched her hand, a sensation flew in his body...(Astha...he felt immediately... no...she is not, then why did I feel as if... May be because I am missing her so much)

You...you stay here alone? Shlok asked hesitatingly...

n then regarding the ring...i was smiling at his confused state😊

the night scenes was so cute,very beautifully written...


After sometime Shlok too got up with a smile on his face...

Ahaan...very happy today? Varun smiled when their servant brought tea for them...

Ya, really I am very happy today...Shlok smiled...last night Astha was with me...

What? Varun was a bit shocked...

I mean, in my dream... But it was so real... just like she is here with me only just next to me...you know Varun, I am really feeling too much fresh, too happy today...

awww , finally he has a smile on his face..😊.felt happy for him...

il be waiting for ur next update eagerly...



actually i felt a sort of...it was like something unexpected...didn't know, people will like it or not...but its a matter of few days...since she comes back to his life fully with full command...
Let's see how they handle this time...
and yes, it was necessary to make shlock happy , to feel him better for his treatment...as only medicines don't work if the person don't have any hope...we all know... and he is happy only when Astha is there for him...

thnaks a lot dear for liking...


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: naina..

actually i typed the reply once n tried to post it,but in vain n it got deleted too,n dis happened again,silly me ... hav posted my views
,in IF way -unres my views😊



Ya i got... thanks a lot dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jeenia123



Ya i know, you too write, when are you going to update yours?



dont seems to know yaaar
i get bored very soon
whn my mood wil give me favour then i will ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful update
its nothing wrong in this trick😊
readers should understand that its fiction
when looked through that angle
its beautifully penned
the strong bond of friendship well
portrayed here...👏 👏 👏
varun and gauri captured my mind today...😛
the way shlok sensed astha's presnce by mere touch...
its so true na...from a million scents...we can sense our
beloved scent..from million touches,we can identify
our beloved touch...

lechu become little romantic😉 😉
now what's next


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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update ! oh ho this was tha plan ! lovely ! and aastha should be really carefull now ! she can't take risk ! varun gauri are lovely not allowing aastha to work !

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