#2 My Heart whispers, but i Can't hear...Part-20 to Part-32(pg-136)

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#441

Originally posted by: .Siham.
Supeeer updateee

Thnaks a lot dear

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#442

Originally posted by: Hema_gupta
gr8 update!!!!! little bit emotional tooo... but very very lovely...

Thnaks a lt dear...

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#443

Originally posted by: naina..
awsome update... loved it, made me cry...
loved the flashback part
liked shlok n varun's convo .. he caresses astha's pic n wishes to spend the last days of his life in his dream house, he wanted a happy complete family but life had something else in store for him...😔it touched my heart...
i felt bad for him n astha too ...😔 she loves him so much n feels something is not right,is restless what will happen when she comes to know about all this...
waiting for the next update... very nice story

thnaks a lot dear...
He has been a true friend, true lover... but life has really something else in store for him...
ya, his love makes astha feel something is not at place...lets see how she finds out...

Next update tomorrow...

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naina..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#444

Originally posted by: jeenia123

thnaks a lot dear...
He has been a true friend, true lover... but life has really something else in store for him...
ya, his love makes astha feel something is not at place...lets see how she finds out...

Next update tomorrow...

will be waiting...😊

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sireesha76

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Posted: 11 years ago

#445

Awesome update yaar

Beach house part superb

Waiting for the next part

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#446

Originally posted by: naina..

will be waiting...😊

😊

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#447

Originally posted by: sireesha76
Awesome update yaar
Beach house part superb
Waiting for the next part

Thanks a lot dear...
Next part tomorrow...

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Anusha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#448

my eyes are really leaky ...😭

well done superb...blah blah blah ...all the words to appreciate you...😆

you do too well that I am running out of words to appreciate your knack and talent...😕

Ah... this is so going to be good to read...

waiting ...

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#449

Originally posted by: Anusha16
my eyes are really leaky ...😭
well done superb...blah blah blah ...all the words to appreciate you...😆

you do too well that I am running out of words to appreciate your knack and talent...😕

Ah... this is so going to be good to read...

waiting ...

Thnaks for the Blah Blah blah...
This is the best comment,. i have ever get, just loved it..if this one is making your eyes leaky, what about next?😭

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Riddhima

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Posted: 11 years ago

#450

awww shlok...poor boy...
beautiful update jeenia...love that beach house part...perfectly described...kash meri life me bhi koi shlok jaisa hota...hmmm...unka dream home was so beautiful...shlok decorate this home with his love only for his aastha...and his future planning was superb...kuch aisa jaha hum banaye jaha pehla ho har wo nazara...lovely...
and ASTHA'S REQUEST TO FORGIVE HIS PARENTS was too good only she can do it...varun this man what can i say about him...usne muje emotional kar dia i always say shlok is very lucky to have this kind of frdsss...and aastha... shlok and aastha they are soulmates...aastha ki baichani zayas hai...aastha will find the reason about shlok's weird behavior...and i think she will call anjali or swati...for this...i can't see shlok in pain...and aastha She is suffering for all this...

Ek tujhko hi bas dekh kar
Bhooli mujhko hi meri nazar
Tujhko shayad nahi hai khabar
Tujhko jeete hain hum kis kadar

Jude jo tere khawab se
Toh toote hum neend se
Yeh kaisa tera ishq hai Saajna
Tu haathon mein toh hai mere
Hai kyun nahi laqeeron mein
Yeh kaisa tera ishq hai Saajna