#2 My Heart whispers, but i Can't hear...Part-20 to Part-32(pg-136) - Page 46

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jeenia123



Thnaks for the Blah Blah blah...
This is the best comment,. i have ever get, just loved it..if this one is making your eyes leaky, what about next?😭

y thankyou...🤗

so u wanna see my cry huh???

it's not that difficult at all... I'm a very intense person...

seeing your comment as a teaser... i believe the next update is also gonna be mushy...😲

i thought astha would play sherlock holmes tomorrow...

but no... I guess I'll have to wait...huh???🥺

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: riddzykhanmalik

awww shlok...poor boy...
beautiful update jeenia...love that beach house part...perfectly described...kash meri life me bhi koi shlok jaisa hota...hmmm...unka dream home was so beautiful...shlok decorate this home with his love only for his aastha...and his
future planning was superb...kuch aisa jaha hum banaye jaha pehla ho har wo nazara...lovely...
and
ASTHA'S REQUEST TO FORGIVE HIS PARENTS was too good only she can do it...varun this man what can i say about him...usne muje emotional kar dia i always say shlok is very lucky to have this kind of frdsss...and aastha... shlok and aastha they are soulmates...aastha ki baichani zayas hai...aastha will find the reason about shlok's weird behavior...and i think she will call anjali or swati...for this...i can't see shlok in pain...and aastha She is suffering for all this...

Ek tujhko hi bas dekh kar
Bhooli mujhko hi meri nazar
Tujhko shayad nahi hai khabar
Tujhko jeete hain hum kis kadar

Jude jo tere khawab se
Toh toote hum neend se
Yeh kaisa tera ishq hai Saajna
Tu haathon mein toh hai mere
Hai kyun nahi laqeeron mein
Yeh kaisa tera ishq hai Saajna





Ye tera Ghar ye mera ghar,
Hmara hai ye pyara ghra,
Lage kisi ki na nazar,
Ye ghar bhut haseen hai...

Thnaks a lot dear...for liking the update...thanks for liking beach house part...
Ya they had planned too much for future but har spana apna nahi hota...unki taqdeer mein kuch aur likha hai...
Ho sakta hai , they change their fate ,by fighting against time...
Lets see what they do... ya there is no villian , all are happy except their fate...
even i can't see them in pain but kehte hain na, aag mein sona nikharta hai aur dard mein pyaar...
Lets see how they come out... is they will be able too...

Edited by jeenia123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Anusha16

y thankyou...🤗

so u wanna see my cry huh???

it's not that difficult at all... I'm a very intense person...

seeing your comment as a teaser... i believe the next update is also gonna be mushy...😲

i thought astha would play sherlock holmes tomorrow...

but no... I guess I'll have to wait...huh???🥺



Yaar i am also quite emotional fool..
I am myself crying writing update...and thinking whats gonna next with me...
about tomorrow, good guess... just wait...

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Posted: 12 years ago
really nice update , especially loved shlocks valentines gift and the talk about babies and all..it was so sweet...you know even without this twist of shlocks cancer i still enjoyed reading your story, good that aastha has some doubts now
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: latha_555

really nice update , especially loved shlocks valentines gift and the talk about babies and all..it was so sweet...you know even without this twist of shlocks cancer i still enjoyed reading your story, good that aastha has some doubts now




Ya, but when i was giving just romantic updates, i hadquite mixed reviews... some good, some nice and some bad...
even i was not liking just romance...actually i am not of romantic type, i am more of emotional kind..
This twist was bound to happen by Friday...but when i was getting so so views, i changed it a bit and brought twist in advance making remaining romantic part in flashbacks...

but you know, we all need twists and turns in stories in stories, simple love stories never work just like they met, became friends, fell in love and get married...
moreover i just changed shape of story but the concept and my words are still same which were bound as original in my mind and will be till end...

Thanks a lot dear for liking the update...

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Posted: 12 years ago
very well written as usual
even though flashback was so romantic,
it made me so emotional...
the way shlok recalls their momemts...
you penned it so beautifully👏👏
shlok tells anjali"she is always with me"😊
i loved those lines a lot...
what an intense love...❤️

The shining sun dawned on me

But its light I could not see

I just wandered here and there

But could not find you anywhere

Destiny has played a game with me

There is nobody, would you be?

My eyes are glistened; my soul throbs

My heart bleeds and my voice sobs

The ocean of tears lies deep within me

From your memories, I cannot flee

The pain of separation cannot be rendered

The wounds still fresh have left me shattered

Each moment of time wriggles my soul

Bruised is my heart, I am lost in the whorl

I feel your presence though you are not

But deep within me, forever you are caught

A void in my world never to be filled

The pearl' left the oyster' and left it throttled

there is no me without you


and iam here with a request...please

please dont end it on a sad note...😭

Edited by -LECHU- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -LECHU-

very well written as usual

even though flashback was so romantic,
it made me so emotional...
the way shlok recalls their momemts...
you penned it so beautifully
shlok tells anjali"she is always with me"
i loved those lines a lot...
what an intense love...

The shining sun dawned on me

But its light I could not see

I just wandered here and there

But could not find you anywhere

Destiny has played a game with me

There is nobody, would you be?

My eyes are glistened; my soul throbs

My heart bleeds and my voice sobs

The ocean of tears lies deep within me

From your memories, I cannot flee

The pain of separation cannot be rendered

The wounds still fresh have left me shattered

Each moment of time wriggles my soul

Bruised is my heart, I am lost in the whorl

I feel your presence though you are not

But deep within me, forever you are caught

A void in my world never to be filled

The pearl' left the oyster' and left it throttled

there is no me without you


and iam here with a request...please

please dont end it on a sad note...😭



OMG... i am in tears reading your poem, from where did you get it or you yourself composed?
Ultimate...
For ending, yet a lot to go...just wait... whats in store...
no matter it will be sad or happy but i assure its going to touch your heart...

Thnaks a lot dear...

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Posted: 12 years ago
@jeenia
its from my ff dear...
i wrote it for astha's missing track...
glad you loved it...
i dont want this story to end soon..no ..no
ya i know you are upto something big on monday...😕😆
and you are planning to leave us insane by friday's teaser
anyway waiting with batting lashes...😛
this story has already touched my heart...😊
as i told u earlier am in love with this story...🤗



Edited by -LECHU- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks a lot dear
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -LECHU-

@jeenia

its from my ff dear...
i wrote it for astha's missing track...
glad you loved it...
i dont want this story to end soon..no ..no
ya i know you are upto something big on monday...😕😆
and you are planning to leave us insane by friday's teaser
anyway waiting with batting lashes...😛
this story has already touched my heart...😊
as i told u earlier am in love with this story...🤗




I really loved that poem...it touched my heart
Thanks a lot dear...for Monday. .you will get teaser of course...

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