#2 My Heart whispers, but i Can't hear...Part-20 to Part-32(pg-136)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#421

Originally posted by: jeenia123

Take your own time...

thanks..

going to unres

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Posted: 11 years ago

#422

Wow another great update thank you

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Posted: 11 years ago

#423

Originally posted by: niki795

i expected that😉

Thnaks for keeping your expectations from me...will try to fulfill your expectations...😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#424

Originally posted by: niki795

thanks..
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waiting eagerly...😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#425

Originally posted by: rbb1
Wow another great update thank you

Thanks a lot dear...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#426

Originally posted by: jeenia123

waiting eagerly...😊

UNRESED IT

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Posted: 11 years ago

#427

Originally posted by: jeenia123

Thnaks for keeping your expectations from me...will try to fulfill your expectations...😊

U WILL😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

#428

Originally posted by: niki795
AWESOME UPDATE ASUSUAL
LOVED IT...
THE START WAS SUPERB... SHLOK REMEMBERING AND CALLING FOR ASTHA.. IS NICE
SHLOK AND ANJALI CONVO IS NICE.,..
BEACH HOUSE PART IS SUPERB...
U DESCRIBED IT SUPERB
LOVED THE HOUSE AND THE SEA VIEW
THE EMPTY WALL IN THE HOUSE... I EXPECTED THE SAME AS U SAID FOR THEIR MARRIAGE PHOTO AND THEIR CHILDRENS PHOTO... SEE U AND ME THINK THE SAME😆
AND THEN ASTHA'S REQUEST TO FORGIVE HIS PARENTS IS SUPERB...
AND HE FORGAVE THEM AAND TOOK PERMISSION FOR THEIR MARRIAGE ALSO
AND THEN SHLOK AND VARUN PART IS SUPERB AND EMOTIONAL... U MADE ME ALMOST CRY FOR THEIR CONVO
EMOTIONAL...

When Shlok caressed Astha's pics in the room...Varun I am planning to shift here once Astha goes back to Pune, I know, this place will never let me feel her absence in my life... I will live here only till last day of my life... Shlok smiled...

When Shlok held his hand... Varun, I will pray god, I get you and Gauri as my best friends in each and every birth... Listening Varun hugged Shlok... And left from there...

LOVED THE ABOVE PARTSS THE MOST
THEN COMES ASTHA... HER RESTLESSNESS FOR SHLOK
LOVED HOW SHE ENQUIRED ABOUT HIM TO EVERYONE...
AND SHE CAUGHT IT THAT THEY R HIDING SOMETHING FROM HER...
NOW EAGERLY WAITING FOR HER TO KNOW THE TRUTH AND HER REACTION TO IT...
THATS YOUR MAJOR TWIST...
WAITING FOR IT
CONTINUE SOON...😊

Thnaks a lot dear for such a beautiful feedback...
Yes, i had said no villain, just fate...and wanted Astha to unite shlok with his family...didn't go in more detail as that would have dragged it more...
Varun and gauri are sweetheart...this story is not just about love...this is about true friendship t.o and will be,,,, yet you will see their limit for their friendship...
IF shlok is in pain, how astha will not feel?
She is feeling and will find out soon...
Thnaks for liking beach house scene... it was astha's dream, remember their first night out at beach when she had told him, she wants to have beautiful house from where she can see sea...
about pics... thanks for liking...the empty wall even...
Face of truth, her reaction and twist ...wait dear for next update...😉