ArHi SS: Seduction *Thread Four* (COMPLETED)

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Onlooker

@Onlooker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#911

Seduction..it is ..Juhi, you continue seducing us with your tales..

This seduction is not carnal, it is earthly and soulful..I loved your interpretation of love -- and i agree with it..Love is love only when they continue to love facing the challenges and insecurities and shortcomings of each other's situations..

They way you framed the curse and made the story twist in the story is mind blowing..You truly enthralled us with your magical words fertile imagination..take a bow my friend..

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rith123

@rith123

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#912

I finally read part 2 and unressed on page 106!

So much happiness!

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annieK

@annieK

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#913

I am glad that they built a life inspite of the curse . That takes some doing . And the ending ...fitting . Children bring their own happiness into one's life , by their hand or just by being .

Great story .

Looking forward to the next.

Thanks as always for your infinite patience in sending pms .

Have a HAppy New Year dear.

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amimus

@amimus

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#914

Juhi what a beautiful and innocent story. At the end love always triumphs.

Loved the entire story , very different and so damn intiguing

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Jahnvi Mehra

@jahnvi.luvs.ASR

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#915

A beautiful n totally unexpected n awesome story...love has no bounds...n this story just showed it...ah-mazing...

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sahada

@sahada

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#916

=DD That was so incredibly awe inspiring E!! Aadrita!!! Her being in the story (X So heartwarming wht that toddler was able to pull off and the love n will n strength tht little one carries soo sooo touching!!

I'm so sorryyy I madly and unexplainably so and just so crazily adore these little human beings that I can't get past your Aadrita to be able to comment on the other as beautiful parts of ths marvelous Epilogue... the way you progressed and unfolded the events n thoughts n struggles of each of your characters in ths Epilogue was wonderful!

Love love LOVE!!!

Beautiful story E!! Loved ths alluring journey with you ;P

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A_BA

@A_BA

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#917

The ending was truly out of a fairy tale and I absolutely loved it😊

The last line of the curse was such a mystery and this pure, loving child was finally able to figure it out, albeit unintentionally ( which makes it all the more wonderful). Reading about aadrita was an absolute delight, she was too sweet and the perfect combination of Arnav and khushi!

Loved the addition of lakshmiji! What a creative way to incorporate her into the story!

As usual, I loved every part of Arnav and khushi's story all the way through the epilogue, which makes me realize how much I will miss this story.

I'm really looking forward to your new story, but I can't imagine one of your stories without cliffhangers! Lol half the fun is guessing what's going to happen next, but I have a feeling that even without he mysterious pasts and cliffhangers, your new story will be awesome ( and I will definitely be making some wrong guesses though out the way)!

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FeistyDewdrop

@FeistyDewdrop

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#918

An enthralling tale through out... after a long time , i have enjoyed a story of this sort... i guess i would never read a genre of this kind... the only driving force was my love for Juhi , Arnav n Khushi... :) :D

My gift for welcoming the new year was just perfect! :) :D

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Cute6

@Cute6

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#919

this epilouge mede up for the delay in posting..this was really worth the vait..im falling short of words to even explain how m feeling now..this is some asum piece of work..

and vaiting for next from you