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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

She is nuts

And she is cute too Arnie

God that was funny

She got caught well he always knew for sure

Awww he liked her too

Her inner thoughts were so funny

They cracked me up

Cheers for pm

Happy birthday to your friend

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badfaith4u

@badfaith4u

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Khushi's thoughts are hilarious 😆

very cute story

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

That was so cute.

Love the song, but loved your take on it even more.

Loved how she watches him taking off his t shirt.

I bet he does it on purpose.

And him coming to see her.

Then Khushi rushing upstairs to see him again.

And the song and the dance.

Adorable story.

I loved it.

You made my day.

Take a bow, Madam, tussi great ho.👏

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Param

@pup03

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

nice OS !!!

thanks for pm 😊

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Jahnvi Mehra

@jahnvi.luvs.ASR

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Aww that was cute n lovely OS

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Ayesha Farha

@oOChaiBiskutOo

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Aawww...that was sooo cute!!!

Will u write a two/three shot on this??? I sooo wanna read more!!!

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palaayan

@palaayan

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

an incredibly sweet story of innocent love, that was perfection!! Truly :)

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Awww.. That was a cute OS.. Arnav caught her and then she telling that its not her and then the date .. 😆 Very cute.. loved it..

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KrishVeer

@KrishVeer

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Awe, that was a pretty cute OS☺️

First of all, a very Happy B'Day to your friend🥳 May all her dreams come true on this wonderful day and throughout her lifetime!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Secondly, this was a really awesome surprise. Awe, Khushi has been stalking on Arnav almost everyday. God, and Arnav had said nothing, but has been enjoying her stalking. These two are pretty cute. The way Khushi tried to deny her feelings was really funny. She really is a nut case. But as usual Arnav was smart. He somehow managed to get the truth out of Khushi. The song is also one of my favourites😊

It was like a different version of a Cinderella story😳 I hope there are many more of your friends birthdays coming up. Because we will get to read such wonderful OSs in that way😉

Thanks for sharing such a wonderful piece of work with us🤗

Thanks for the pm😃

Do keep on writing more and more such wonderful one shots, SSs and FFs😊