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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: zebbie0504

*unres*
yay... I commented and liked the update without a pm.. Yahooo... The update was fantastic,full of lovely moments and beautiful. I really loved it a lot... Finally,with all the rituals,Arjun and Riya are married now. Hehe... ChoRee ke dialogues were funny... Akash missing his bestie Arjun... Loved the re-union of Arjun and Ankita.. Everyone shocked after knowing that Arjun and Ankita are brother and sister... Wow.. Riya is looking so pretty and beautiful,Ma Sha Allah... Aww... Arjun lost in Riya's beauty... Finally,they are married... Everybody really very happy. Girls' giving tips to Riya for the SR... Teasing sessions going on in both sides... Akash lost in Sakshi's beauty... Same condition with Sameer bhai,Shree and Chotu... It was emotional,as well... Akash hugged Arjun.. Hope,their friendship is revived.. Finally,Arjun meets Riya,but he doesnt find her there... Wow... Sameer bhai going to drop Ayesha... Ayesha happily agrees and feeling shy... Loved the scene between Akash and Sakshi... So,they r also falling for each other... Akash offered a ride to Sakshi,which she happily agreed... Loved their little nokjhok... Ankita left with Liza,same with Shree and Chotu... Precap is interesting... What the???? Riya kahaan chali gayi? Chotu's unpredictable dream... Continue sooonish... :) thanks for the pm... :) update sooonish... :)


Thx dr 4 ur swt response 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
It is little bit emotional ,amazing jhikass part
Thanx 4 pm me

Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow!
Bahat maza aya...
Awsm updt..
Yeh ria kaha gayi?
Cont soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
it was awesome and lovely update dear...
just loved it.
loved the teasing session.
loved samjun hugg.
where is riya?
do continue soon.
and thanx for the pm.
sorry for short main busy ho gaye
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Posted: 11 years ago
Super awesome update. ..
Loved their arrangement to surprise Ariya...
So sweet. .
But where is Riya???
Plzz update soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey guyz ,as i promised i have come up with the nxt part .hope aj ka wala part tum logo ko bore nehi karegi .😉



PART-36

Arjun (worriedly):ye riya kaha chali gayi ???😕

He scanned all the room but she is not there .so arjun going 2 check the house .but suddenly he heard a door opening sound 4m the balcony .

He turned & found riya is standing there wearing a beautiful red colored saree .bangles in her hands ,the jwelleries ,the bindi all r increasing her beauty .the most charming sight her partion filled with sindoor & mangalsutra on her neck showing the symbol of arjun's identity .


arjun couldn't take off his eyes 4m her .every time riya brings a new beauty infront of him .

Riya found him gazing at her lostly .it is enough 2 make her blash .

Riya (shyly):arjun ,ap mujhe aise kyu dekh rahe hai ???

Arjun came out 4m his dream world when he heard riya's voice .

Arjun :ha ???

Riya :ap mujhe aise kyu dekh rahe the ???😳

Arjun (smiled):riya ,ye tum puch rahi ho ...tumhe pata hai na jab v mein apni biwi ko aise khubsurat avatar me dekhti hu to bas usme kho jati hu ...

Riya just blashed & lower her gaze .she couldn't meet his eyes 4 shyness .

Arjun smiled at her antic & walked 2 her .he held her hand & gave a kiss on her palm .

Arjun :riya ,2day u r looking the most beautiful girl in the world .

Riya blashing more .

Arjun :waise riya aj tum mujhe har ek second me heart attack de rahi ho .pehle to mandap me dulhan ki roop me aur ab iss sari me aur v beautiful lag rahi ho .aise mujhe heart attack deti rahi to mein to maar hi jaungi

Riya keep her palm on his mouth

Riya :ye ap kya keh rahe ho ...khabardar jo marne ka naam v li to !!!

Arjun (holding her more closely):arre ...mein to mazak kar rahi thi .

Riya :aisa mazak dubara maat karna .nehi to mein apse kav baat nehi karungi ...bol deti hu !!!!

Arjun (holding his ears):achsa baba ...mujhse galti ho gayi .dubara aisa kavvv nehi karungi .ab thoda muskura v do ...

Riya gave her dimple smile & hugged him .

Arjun :waise riya tumhe nehi lagta humne already bohot time waste karli hai .ab humari mission suru kardeni chahiye 😉

Riya hit on his chest

Riya :ap na bilkul besharam ho ...😳

Riya wanted 2 move but arjun hold her wrist & pulled her 2 himself .

Arjun(in his husky voice) :aj mein tumhe kahi nehi jane dungi ...

He turned riya & make her back facing 2 him .

BG MUSIC
Dhaage Tod Laao Chandani Se Noor Ke
Ghoonghat Hi Banalo Roshini Se Noor Ke


Arjun pushed her hairs aside & started kissing on her nape .Riya just closed her eyes .her heart beat is getting faster n faster .

Sharma Gai To Aagosh Mein Lo
Ho Saaaso Se Uljhi Rahi Meri Saasein
Bol Na Halke Halke
Hooth Se Halke Halke
Bol Na Halke


Arjun turned her facing 2 him .

Aa Neend Ka Sauda Karein
Ek Khwaab De Ek Khwaab Le
Ek Khwaab To Aankhon Mein Hai
Ek Chand Ke Takiye Tale


Arjun (looking into her eyes):riya ,mein tumhe kuch dena chahti hu .

Riya :kya ???

Arjun brought out a box 4m his pocket .he opened it & brought out a chain-locket .

Arjun :ye chain-locket roshni ki thi .usne mujhe di thi .uska ye manna tha ki ye chain-locket hamesha mujhe bure cheezo se dur rakhkhega .hamesha ye mera rakhsha karega .sach me iss chain-locket mera raksha ki .issiliye hi to aj mein yaha hu aur roshni ...(his eyes filled with tears).aj ye chain me tumhe gift karna chahta hu .

Riya :par arjun ye to roshni ji ki nishani hai ...

Arjun :issiliye hi to mein tumhe de rahi hu .mein hamesha tum me apna roshni ko paya hai .agar ye tumare gale me rahegi to hamesha mujhe uski hone ka ehsas dilayegi .plz riya mana maat karo ...

Riya just gave a light smile & nodded her head .

Arjun tied the chain on riya's neck .riya touched it .

Riya :mein apse wada karti hu ki mein isse apna jaan se v jyada samhaalkar rakhungi .😊

Arjun just starring her so lovingly .he still couldn't believe his luck that a girl like riya is 2day with him .riya always luvs him unconditionally .sometimes he fall in a puzzle that "why she luv him so much ???"
Kitne Dino Se Yeh Asmaan Bhi
Soya Nahi Hai
Isko Sula De...
Bol Na Halke Halke
Hooth Se Halke Halke
Bol Na Halke


he kissed on her 4head .riya closed her eyes .arjun kissed on her eyes .then her cheeks .

on the other side -arjun one hand is caressing her waist lovingly & other on her back .she shivered at his touch .

Umrein Lagi Kehte Hue
Do Lafaj The Ek Baat Thi
Woh Ek Din Sau Saal Ka
Sau Saal Ki Woh Raat Thi
Kaise Lage Jo Chupchap Dono
Palpal Mein Puri Sadiyan Beetadein


Arjun finally peaked her lips .he kissing her so lovingly & gently .but the kiss is burning her 4m inside .she couldn't hold herself .she slid her hand 2 his neck & pulled him 2 her & started 2 kiss him back .both drifted into the moment .kissing each other passionately .they don't know how much time they r kissing .but finally they broke the kiss when they felt the need of air .they both breathing havily .

Now arjun started 2 kiss her near her collar bone .his hand was busy 2 disclose her saree plate .

Bol Na Halke Halke
Hooth Se Halke Halke
Bol Na Halke halke


Finally he succeed 2 move her saree .he lifted her in his arms .but they didn't break the eye lock till they reached at the bed .He made her lie on the bed .he also lied down bside her .they both drown into each other eyes .

Arjun started kissing her at the neck .riya totally lost in his intimate touch .unknowingly her hand slids 2 his sherwani buttons .she started 2 unbutton them .

Suddenly arjun gave a luv bit at her pulse point .

Riya (screamed):arjun !!!

But in the mean time arjun soothing her pain by giving open mouth kisses .

Riya (mouning):arjun ...arjun ...

Arjun slowly open her blouse .& now her all body curve showing .arjun lost in her beauty again .

Arjun(lovingly) :riya ,u r so beautiful ...

Riya started blashing .her face already turn into tomato .😳

Arjun & riya continue their luv session like that until they get tired .after getting tired arjun rested his head on pillow & riya rested her head on his chest .

Riya :arjun ,aj ka raat meri zindegi ka sabse haseen raat hai .aj hum dono ek ho gaye ...[a tear drop fall 4m her eye]

Arjun realised that riya is crying .she looked at her .

Arjun :riya ,tum ro rahi ho ??? Is everything ok ???😕

Riya :hmm .

Arjun :fir tum kyu ro rahi ho ???

Riya :offo arjun ,ap ye v nehi samajte ye khushi ki asoon hai .

Arjun :ha .to aisa bolo na ...

They laughed at each other comments & slowly drifted into sleep in each others arms .

Dhaage Tod Aalo Chandani Se Noor Ke
Ghoonghat Hi Banalo Roshini Se Noor Ke
Sharma Gai To Aagosh Mein Lo
Ho Saaaso Se Uljhi Rahi Meri Saasein
Bol Na Halke Halke
Hooth Se Halke Halke
Bol Na Halke


On the other side -

It was late .so chotu stay at shree's home .chotu was sleeping peacefully .but shree couldn't bcoz of chotu's snoring .

Shree (blubbering):dhat !!! meri maat mari gayi thi ki meine isse aj raat apni ghar me rehne ka permission di .meri hi ghar me so rahi hai ,meri hi bistar (bed) par .aur meri hi neend kharab kar rahi hai !!!!😡

Shree took his pillow & kept it on his ear 2 prevent the sound .🤣

In the midnight chotu started dreaming -

"In etf office ...

Chotu standing with red roses in his hand .he looking at ankita who was sitting at her desk .

Chotu (MV):aj to mein ankita ko apna dil k baat batake hi rahungi .

He was walking 2wards her .but suddenly arjun came in mid .chotu bcom afraid bcoz arjun is staring him so angrily .😡

Chotu :sss ..sir ...ap ???

Arjun (yelled):tumari itni himmat tum arjun suryakant rawte ki behen ko propose karnewale the !!!

Chotu :sss ...sss ...sir ...wo ..mein ...

Arjun (shouted):khamosh !!!!😡(in shatrungha sinha style).tumhe to tumari iss gustakhi ki saza jarur milegi .

Arjun bring out his gun & put in chotu's mouth .

Arjun :aj mein tera khane se nehi goli se pet varwa dungi ...😡

Chotu (panicly):ne ..ne ..hi ..sir ...i shapath ...mein aisa kav nehi karungi ...sir chod dijiye ...aaa !!!!!
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chotu started screaming in his sleepy state .shree woke up hearing his shouting .

Shree (jerking him):chotu ...chotu ...arre tu chilla kyu raha hai ??? arre uth kamine !!!!

Chotu jerked on the bed & woke up .he still shouting"mujhe chod dijiye sir .arjun sir ,mujhe chod dijiye ..."

Shree firstly shocked 2 hear arjun's name . then he tried 2 bring chotu in reality .but chotu is chotu .he shouting more loudly .so shree gave a tight slap on chotu's face .

Finally chotu's trance broke .he stop shouting .he looked here & there .then he looked at shree .

Chotu (popping his eyes):shree ,arjun sir kaha hai ???

Shree :arjun sir ???arjun sir yaha kaise ayegi .tu vul gaya ...aj riya k sath unka saadi hue hai .aj wo riya k sath hai naki tere sath ...

Chotu (realised it is a dream):haila !!! ye to sapna tha !!!😲

Shree :sapna ??? kaisa sapna ???

Chotu silent 4 a minute .then spoke up -

Chotu :nehi kuch nehi .chal so jate hai ...

Saying this he rested his head on pillow .shree just starring him confusingly .

In a few minutes chotu again drifted into sleep & started snoring .

Shree (muttering):kamine !!!! kitni mushkil se neend ayi thi .wo sone to nehi diya .ulta uthakar firse chen se so raha hai ...😡


PRECAP :ariya swt moments .akash entry in etf .tension among the three acp .which past bothering them ???


CHALO KAR DIYA UPDATE .AB JALDI SE COMMENT AUR LIKES THOK DO .LUV U DEARIES❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
*unres*
it was a super duper awesme update...
Loved it a lot.
Bwahahahahaha... 🤣
chotu's dream sequence was indeed very funny...
Laughed out loud...
Sapne mein bhi Arjun sir dikhta hai usse SYS milte huye...
Aww...
Loved every single bit of this update.
Sorry for my late comments.
Precap is really very interesting...
Continue sooonish.. :)
thanks for the pm...
Edited by zebbie0504 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
yee today part just for ariya
i'm so happy
ariya romance was awesome me blush☺️
poor shree cnt sleep bcoz of chuto snoring🤣
omg poor chuto cnt confess his feeling for ankita
even in dream poor guy arjun ne to dream me vi chuto ko dara diya😆
plz update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow beautiful update..

Ariya r so romantic..

Chotu dream..lol..

I m laughing like manic..

Precap is intresting..

Thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Pinkerbell's comment -

wooow hunny luv competition
let me blush first hayeee kya ariya sr thi sone se pehle esa update dogi toh raat mein ariya ke dreams ayenge..

and the chotu wala dream best best best.. kya tarif karun mein bohot bohot achcha..
thanks for the updte n pm...loved it to bits..
abhi bhi hasi aa rahe hia aur blushing bhi ho rahe hia

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