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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anukat

A fabulous start I must say!

Well I shall wait for the story to unfold as I can see so many shades to it!... and well our ASR and KKGSR at the helm of affairs how better( worse it can get)...

The concern and the conflict were brought out very well, promising at a very entangled and intense plot! All the best to you in writing this work of yours...

Have a wonderful vacation my dear!


Awww what a pleasant surprise. Am I dreaming? It means alot hearing positive comments from you who kept the readers glued to your work. Thanks Anu, I will have to see how this will shape up.
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsm Prologue.
lovd it .

plz update soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG dis is indeed something which is very much dufferent from ur stories which u have written till date..!

Khushi is pregnant wit arnav's child but he is not accepting dis fact,oh heck nd d way he is behaving wit her or should i say both r beahaving wit each other shows how much they both hate each other..!

Damn arnav was behaving so ruthlessly nd khushi was all calm nd d way she reacted nd taunted him saying dat dis child growing in her womb is his nly was perfct..!

Khushi's character is damn bold nd me already loving it..!

Prolouge s damn interesting nd while reading is was thinking all d while dat wat d heck is happening nd why both r all ready to rip each other apart,oh god they r married nd behaving like dis,dis gonna b intersting for sure..!

Cant wait for d story to begin now 😳

lovely prolouge,i am still thinking abt d concpt,ahhh its sumthng very unique nd d jiska shuruyat itna acha ho woh story ko toh hit hona hi hai..! 👍🏼

enjoy ur holiday di nd cum back soon nd give updates 😛

take care 🤗

love ya ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
huh di.. what was that?😕😕😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
I won't try to decode anything now!
I'm gonna enjoy the story!
I can feel that I'm might start hating Arnav later ;)
this story seems really awesome..
I won't mind if u turn it lil dark!
this is completely different fro what u have written till now!
so yes! I'm excited ;)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Interesting am still confused though cuz in the trailer it implied that Khushi slept with someone else but the child actually belongs to Arnav so then what did Arnav see????!!
I really can't wait to read the next update but I hope u have an amazing vacation
Edited by Arshifan4life - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: deepthiya


Awww what a pleasant surprise. Am I dreaming? It means alot hearing positive comments from you who kept the readers glued to your work. Thanks Anu, I will have to see how this will shape up.



Oye! Deeps issey patha chaltha hain my kitni buri hun!!! Hey Devi Mayya!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Quite intresting prolog waiting for start
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Posted: 11 years ago
well this was really unexpected from you at this moment coz you told that you would be updateing in jan 2014 ...
but it was great i loved it the way you wrote it
it was really very nice
okay you have italicised the word"khushi singh raizada" well m not so good in breaking the mystries i will wait for the story to unfold so go on when you get tiime i will be waiting for it ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow that was a dhamaka update!!!!!
i have quite doubts but i knw eventually in d coming story our doubts vil b cleared!!!!
n yup waiting eagerly for ur next update in next year!!!!
wish u a very happy new year in advance dear :)!!!!

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