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shubhi15

@shubhi15

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#91

OMG... 😲
Awesome prologue...
Concept is damn interesting...
Can't wait till Jan to read more... 😭

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lala rukh

@lalarukh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#92

omg very intense indeed...beautifully written prologue...showing strong grip of urs writing skill...

hmmm so he is the father but he denies...but offcourse who else can know whose the father of

child more than a mother herself...mr arrogant aggressive and rude raizada...in pain khushi saying

the father of my child is already dead...great going khushi...awesome

deepu...misunderstanding...confusion...ruthlessness ...same night if he remembers those

hurtful 45 sec.. he also drilled her whole night ...damn very very interesting ...

thought provoking : "His once Her"...

loved the prologue

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smat

@smat

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#93

Interesting prolougue

Wow!
❤️

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.ButterCup.

@.ButterCup.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#94

wow

what a fantastic start..

amazing prologue..⭐️

very different from ur previous stories..

arshi r married and khushi is pregnant..

and what the..why arnav is denying that..😲

looking forward to it..

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indhuza

@indhuza

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Posted: 11 years ago

#95

heyyy seriously its awesome yaar...fantastic...happy vactions deepthi...welcome to INDIA

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Jyothi Rockzy

@jyothirockz

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#96

That's intense..

Arnav and Khishi hating each other to core...

Clearly there is a big misunderstanding on Arnavs part...n looks like he will repent it ...may be when it will be too late...

Can't wait to know the reason for MU...

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raws

@raws

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#97

this is vert diff. track...loved it

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Anuradha

@lovebarun...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#98

Oh!! what a fantastic start.. get the story going girl... early waiting...😊

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rkapoor1382

@rkapoor1382

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#99

like not working

fabulous update

arnav thinks the child is someone else

super he is sooo rude

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Dr. Anupama Ramakrishna

@anukat

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Posted: 11 years ago

#100

A fabulous start I must say!

Well I shall wait for the story to unfold as I can see so many shades to it!... and well our ASR and KKGSR at the helm of affairs how better( worse it can get)...

The concern and the conflict were brought out very well, promising at a very entangled and intense plot! All the best to you in writing this work of yours...

Have a wonderful vacation my dear!