tere liye- updated chapter-12 page 42 date 25/01/2014 - Page 3

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chapter 1 link-

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/96393046

Character sketch (current scenario)-

Shlok Agnihotri - Best friend of Aastha kirloskar , 16 year old class 11 student dazzler of school, head boy of blue house and captain of school basketball team well built and in one term dream boy of every girl in school rich but not a spoilt brat adore his parents and Aastha mean world to him though he consider her as his best friend only but he can't tolerate even a single tear in her eye ...

Aastha kirloskar- best friend of shlok agnihotri 15 yr old a normal girl known for unique innocent deed in school. her parent died in an car accident she lives in Agnihotri mansion only , for her shlok's parents are her parents. She is beautiful but she has a tom boy look, she never bother about her looks . lot many girls don't like her because of her closeness with shlok while some use her to get in touch of shlok so her life is weaved around shlok, starting from shlok ends their only...

Raghav kapoor - he is only friend of shlok other than Aastha in fact we can call him, best friend of shlok . he is 16 yr old and he is richest boy in school not only rich but also star player of school's cricket team. Girls go crazy for him but to utmost surprise he is not having any girl friend. He calls Aastha his sautan and teases her a lot...

Anjali agnihotri - Shlok;s mother and loves Aastha a lot treat her like her own child she is very nice and and very good house wife .

Niranjan agnihotri - father of Shlok and he too loves Aastha like his own daughter and he has a big name in education filled he has lot many academic institution under his name unlike tv show he loves anjali a lot and respect her also they share a very good happily married couples bonding.

Past of Aastha -

Aastha was only daughter of Avdhoot and kalindi kirloskar and they met an car accident when she was 10 only, both her parent died in that accident and now only she survived ...

Niranjan and Kalindi studied in same college Niranjan liked kalindi but she never had any feeling for him and latter on was married to Avdhoot . Anjlali studied in the same college where Avdhoot studied they both were in love but could not marry each other latter on she was married to Niranjan and accepted him whole heartedly ...

Kalindi and avdhoot used to live in delhi when suddenly Avdhoot was transferred to pune they shifted to pune and accidentally they both come across Agnihotri family form there started there cordial relationship as everyone was happy to see each other...When avdhoot and kirloskar died in that car accident it was their mutual consent to keep Aastha with them as they wanted to keep the last memory of their beautiful past...

From that time Aastha is living with Agnihotri family initially Shlok hated Aastha as he had to share his parental love because of her, he even asked his parent to send her to her house but then NIranjan told him about about her past and he felt very bad for her, as time passed he started liking Aastha's antics and her choppiness. 5 yr passed Aastha and shlok are now best friend unaware of the pure love blooming in between them...

Chapter -3

Shlok called up Raghav the same evening during dinner time as he wanted to discuss this issue with him ... Everyone was there leaving Aastha she was still in her room she didn't come out Anjali noticed that asked Shlok about Aastha . he moved to get her for dinner when Anjali told him to sit and she will give a check on herss with this she left from there and went to her room Aastha's was sitting on her study table looking at her books with teary eyes Anjali moved near to her and sat just beside her gave her a peck on her cheek and said " I am sorry mere bte now let's go I promise will never slap you again" Aastha with teary eyes said "and promise that u will not scold me either and will take me to fun city tomorrow then only I will come for dinner" Anjali had no but so say yes she nodded with a smile pecked on her cheek ok now let's go other baba will get angry...

At dining table-

On seeing Raghav there she made a weird face and sat on her chair . Raghav gave her a play full smile and she gave hin a stern look and with that she said " raghav why are you here in my home ?? aaj kahna nahi bna kya ghar me tumhare??? with a jiggle" Raghav - listen kiddo ( raghav always called her kiddo) this is my house also and more over shlok invited me for the dinner now don't poke your nose in between me and shlok he said with a smirk ...

Aastha- I told you don't call me kiddo I am not kiddo now I am grown up I am in your class only see Aai he is teasing

Anjali - U only started it Aastha now keep quiet and have your dinner first.

Aastha and Raghav exchanged a I will kill u look and shlok was engrossed in his own thought thinking about what to do? And how to teach that Ria a lesson?.

Next morning-

Aastha got up from bed she found blood stain in her bed and all she was shocked she saw same stain on her night dress and she started shouting , Aai come soon where are u she screamed with all her strength and started crying

Shlok and Anjali were hell shocked on hearing her shout and they rushed to her sound they saw Aastha sitting on her bed crying Anjali quickly rushed to her and asked her about the matter she pointed towards her bed sheet and then said I am bleeding Aai this is my blood I am going to die now I don't want to leave you all she said between her continuous sobs . Anjali was relived a bit after contemplating and suddenly became a bit conscious as Shlok was also there listening to all this she said shlok go from here I am here with her shlok left from there as though he is only 16 but boys knows better facts about girls then girls know about themselves.

Anjali- sat beside Aatha stop crying mere bacche nothing happened to you u are all right it's just normal thing with girls and with this explained her about told her that that now she is not a kid any more she is grown up now she should feel happy.. Aastha literally got very happy on hearing all this and smiled now thought ( finally I can also make boy friend as shloky always says that I am too young for all this but now Aai herself told me I am grown up yiepee I m happy )

Chapter - 4 ( Ria's ka the end part 1 )-

Shlok and Raghav in paly ground-

Shlok - Raghav we have to teach her she made my kiddo cry I am not going to spare her what the hell she thinks about herself??

Raghav- shlok I never liked this girl though she was your girl friend she always tried to cling on me also and I thought of telling u but I didn't want to hurt u so never told u about this, but what she did to Aastha its not done we need to teach that b**** some lesson ( with furry in his eyes for Ria) ohk tell me about the likes of Ria and whatever she ask from u to get for her??

Shlok - she is very demanding girl she has problem with everyone around whether it may be any one student faculty her parents her friends any one she is so adamant to hear anyone and she consider herself as the most beautiful girl of school I am always pestered by her to appreciate her publicly

Raghav- and u did that too gauche!!! Such a clumsy girl how u have dealt with her in these 2 month I mean I know u don't like her even then what was the need of her being your girl friend ?

Shlok - to be honest I did it for Aastha I want her to be a little lady stuff, I mean she so innocent she is a tom boy sort girl, I wanted her to learn from other girls about the way carry themselves and Ria sounded a good option she is style diva of school though she is creep but I thought her friendship can make Aastha more sensible and may she can change herself on good nodes that's why I made her to stay with Ria I even asked Ria to make her understand that but that filthy b****( Ria) made my doll cry and more over instead of teaching her good deeds she taught her slang things ... my girl is already fulfilled with all such her nave antics and she (Ria) is making it worse by making her learn shitty stuffs ...

Raghav - shlok u should have taken that responsibly instead of relying on others look what happened

Shlok - I know Raghav but I am not a girl and I can never make her understand the things like a girl can make her understand you know girly things are best known by girls themselves...

Raghav - oh really shlok I thought u have Phd on GK ( girls knowledge ) with a smirk on his face ( shlok gave him an irritated look ) ok leave it what we need is a full proof plan to insult Ria publicly because for her, her repo means allot so let's do something to make her feel ashamed of her all deeds publicly what say?????

Shlok - sounds good but how is that possible any plan?????

Raghav- Yeah I have one with me???? He started ...that's all

Shlok - hey it seems nice so let's go for mission "Ria ka the end"

chapter-5

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/98110036

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Originally posted by: LazyLad

haye cont na!

yipppie!
reso resso!
okay unres!

the update was super cute... lil astha is so damn cute...lovely!

Just read the 2 last chapters. Nice updates. Looking forward to more! 😃

Originally posted by: LazyLad

yipppie!
reso resso!
okay unres!

the update was super cute... lil astha is so damn cute...lovely!

yeah just wait and read more antics of cute aastha