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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: crazygul

loved it... update next part soon





thnx alot will update soon
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thnx alot dear will update soon
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wow lovely update
cont soon



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supeeer dooo continueee sooon :D
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Originally posted by: .Siham.

supeeer dooo continueee sooon :D




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chapter-3/4 charater sketch

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Chapter - 5 ( Ria's ka the end part 2 )-

Next morning at School-

Shlok - ok Raghav its time for action you go and find Neha till then I will be with that b****

Raghav - Yeah you go enjoy and let me look for that specky Neha .

With that they both went to their way separately -

Raghav went to Neha , she is beat friend of Ria or u can say the one who knows her all deeds. It would be easy for Raghav to find loop holes of Ria by getting in touch with her besty after all its was not that much tedious he just needed was to give her little focus and Raghav was very clear that a girl like Neha can never resist his charm.

Raghav- hi Neha would you mind if I sit by ur side for some time...

Neha- (was completely bewildered) What! are u sure u want to sit beside me, I mean u are Raghav kapoor ...

Raghav - I may be Raghav for the world but for u I am Rk only please call me Rk only...

Neha- (thought in her mind "something fishy is happening but who cares I mean stud of our school wants my company I cannot take risk of offending him moreover if Ria would have been here she might have realized that not only she can make boys drool over her but I also have the spark that can make lad go mad for me ) what u are asking me? to call u Rk though your dear ones can only call u Rk how come I m supposed to call u by that nick name? I mean why u are giving me such importance?

Raghav- oh please Neha u are such a pretty girl I mean prettiest among all in school what's wrong if I want a beautiful girl to be my side calling me Rk I mean you are fabulous just super I wonder why u consider yourself as petty stuff?

Neha- thank you so much Raghav but no one ever praised me like this, u are the first one who said like this even Ria always says that I m a piece of a sh** and no boy can like me I mean she is my besty and she tells only true things about me...

Raghav- are u mad or what how can u listen to such dork, she is actually clumsiest gal I ever come across in fact u are a sweet girls and these specs enhance your looks 10 times (with a grin he was actually feeling bad because Neha was definitely a nice gal though she is friend of Ria but far much better than her in her deeds, Ria was actually using Neha for her purpose and Neha needed a diva by her side to get into lime light)

They sat there for almost an hour interacted about different issue and Raghav really found Neha an intelligent girl on different grounds but when it came to her friend selection list she only have a friend that is Ria and she too treats her like her pet.

Raghav pitied on her and he extended his hand for friendship. it took almost a week to convince Neha that Ria is actually using her for her benefits and she stands nowhere in her life, and this became possible when accidentally she heard Ria bitching about her in her back and Shlok was the one who made it possible. He then switched to his plan that was to gather all information's about Ria and he came to know that apart from Shlok Ria is having two more bf one working in some MNC and other one studying in Management college and she is also having 1 more bf in abroad. Raghav now felt like thrashing that Ria but he controlled his anger and went to Shlok he told him about her and they decided to confront Ria but with all evidences, Neha helped them by providing them the contact info of Ria's bf.

School canteen-

Ria- shlok you called me today at canteen is something special I mean it's been almost a week u didn't talk to me properly so now u realized my importance.

Shlok- yeah Ria I know how special you are too me that's why I called you here, you know I want two of my friends to meet, u will be glad to meet them .

Astha along with Raghav and Neha also came too canteen on seeing Ria with shlok she frowned at him but getting no response for him made her even more madder she grabbed Raghav hand and said lets go and sit somewhere else I don't want to see shloky with that snotty duckling more over he didn't even looked at me once I hate him.

Raghav looked at Astha and then at his hand he could actually feel the squeezing pressure she was applying on his hand because of unknown annoyance, She gritted her teeth and muttered "shloky ghr pahuch batati hu". Raghav looked at her with a grin at her " please kiddo at least mera hath to chod" ok we won't sit with them we will take other table ok lets go, 3 of them sat but Astha was continuously staring at shlok, Shlok noticed her gaze on him and tried to stay calm...

Ria- where are your friends? When they will show up?

Shlok- of wait honey they are here look they came and he directed his hand towards the two guy coming towards them.

Ria went pale on seeing them she thought as if she is going to puke out all that she has munched in her breakfast, she was hell scared on seeing the two friends of shlok which were actually her boy friend's she straightened herself to go from there when shlok held her hand and said oh please Ria wait where are you going? They are just here

Hi Sanjay, hello Vibhor meet my girl friend Ria ...

Ria looked at both, she was hell scared on seeing them anger was oozing from the faces of all the 3 boys with whom she played around, Tears started rolling down her cheeks and her nosy too... in between her hiccups she was telling all the 3 boys to pardon her as she was very clear that no excuse can save her from wrath of the 3.

Sanjay- you filthy b**** I trusted u like hell and you ditched me, what you told me that you study management and what u are exactly? a 16 yr old crap thing, if u were not girl I would have ripped you apart and he was soon joined by Vibhor they yelled on her for nearly 15 minutes. Then they moved toward Shlok and said "thanks bro it's because of you we came to know about her"

Sanjay- I was planning to marry her she lied on everything such a prat she is.

Vibhor - yeah even she told me that she is in college otherwise I would have never dated a school going girl on my expanses, little snotty.

Ria was now looking at Shlok in utter disbelief shlok u did it in front of everyone u ruined my repo? Why u did this to me? U loved me and u made everything hard for me?

Astha was looking all this in utter disbelief was it real or reel they are actually humiliating Ria publicly and more over Shlok is also involved in all this, a playful glee appeared on her face but at the same time she felt pity on Ria's condition.

Shlok- snorted at her at the highest pitch of his voice "u dork how can u imagine I loved u? You are a spoilt brat and after what you did to Astha u deserved something more revengeful than this got that u good for nothing piece of s***

Ria- what u did this all for that small little chick that bloody b**** astha that...

Thap-----

before she could go any further she received a strong slap on her right cheek from Neha who looked at her and said " No Astha is not a bloody chick its actually u. you are a spineless girl who is actually befriends people for her use, you used me Sholk , Sanjay , Vibhor and Ankit as well don't worry we have a recording of this and we will make sure that Ankit too gets to know about your deeds now go from here before I forget that u used to be my friend"

Ria looked at all of them - then while gritting her teeth she said to everyone around her I will see u all and then she gave a look to astha to which astha replied by making a face.

Astha looked at Shlok she came running to him almost jumped on him and hugged him so tightly that shlok was almost choking he felt awkward for a while but unknowing his hand encircled her waist and he hugged her back. She said Shloky u are best love u shloky love you a lot! and then Raghav and Neha came near to them. On seeing them hugging Raghav made a face and said I too need a hug I was also involved in all and with that Neha also added I need one too

They all shared a group hug and then Neha thanked everyone for letting her know the true face of Ria, every one welcomed her in unison.

Astha- Raghav thank u

Raghav- looked at Astha amazed by the word she uttered and said m I dreaming shlok or kiddo is really thanking me.

Astha- (pouted ) look Shloky your friend started it again I swear I will beat him so badly one day that he will dare not to call me kiddo again...


chapter-6

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/98277380


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Edited by pt311288 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
what a lovable and adorable update...
u beat the ass out of that bloody b**** RIA!!!!😆

really cute... now wat's gona happen??

we'll soon know...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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A very cute update thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anusha16

what a lovable and adorable update...

u beat the ass out of that bloody b**** RIA!!!!😆

really cute... now wat's gona happen??

we'll soon know...



oh wow sweety thnks a lot
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: anjipankaj

A very cute update thanks for pm




ur welcome dear 🤗

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