tere liye- updated chapter-12 page 42 date 25/01/2014

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SHLOK's POV

How can some be so innocent so nave and so childish ???????? some time I wonder what will happen to her if
I will not be there, I don't want her to
see even the tiniest pain in her life. all I want her to live a life filled with all
the leisure of life all I wish is to god to even bestow her
with my side of blessing. Her smile her
eyes her antics made me crazy and I never want to see her beautiful doe eye
crying. She is blissful cheerful and pure
like a lotus in mud... but I can't help it I love to tease her, irritate
her, and more to that I love to care her...


AASTHA's POV


I can never understand him we always makes fun of me but hates when someone else do the
same always makes he do his work and scold me for my deeds calls me kiddo all the time all I want to show him that I am not nave I know everything or in short I can act smart I am like other girls only... Why he treats me like as if I am his baby. He tease me all the time and more to
that fight to others on my behalf even if fault is mine he will defend me only but in front of others only he give me teaching all the time as if I am a girl who does not go to school. Moral lecturers are more than sufficient in school I guess but I have to hear it in school and than from him... 😊


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chapter-2 page 1

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chapter-4 page 5

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chapter-5 page 9
chapter-6 page13


chapter-7 page 19


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Chapter-1

Boy - hey what r u doing in my laptop ?

Girl- nothing much I am trying to protect your laptop from virus( with a smile)

Boy- oh really but how come? Hope u are not downloading fairy tales...( with a smirk)

Girl- naaah nothing like that I am just downloaded something that will protect your laptop from all the virus and threats ...

Boy- ok so what u did to protect my laptop from virus and threats?

Girl- with a grin see yourself I have only changed your wallpaper u know what Chotta bheem will now protect your laptop from viruses.

Boy- with a astonished look what oh no not again Aastha you silly girl u changed Selana Gomez wall paper with your stupid chota bheem wall paper...

Girl - look shlok I m telling don't say anything against my chota bheem he is so sweet he always protect every1 around him and never teases any1 unlike u ( with a agitated look )

Shlok - ohk kiddo now remove this wallpaper rite now got that u silly girl (making faces)

Aastha- bas shut up u akdu I don't like u bcoz u don't like my bheem( with tears ) and don't call me kiddo got that.

Shlok- (in his mind when will this girl grow up she is 15 and she still likes to watch cartoon god how can I make her understand she need to grow up ) ohk I am sorry baby your bheem is best now get up u need to go for your physics classes with that he placed a peck on crying aastha's cheek and cupped her face ( my god she is so cute I can't see her crying like this . )

Aastha - with a smile u sure na my Bheem is good na .

Yeah I sure my baccha now go and get up and don't dare to come alone I will pick u up said shlok .

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Chapter -2

At (Agnihotri Mansion)

Aastha - shlok I want tv remote-

Shlok - no I am watching cricket I cant give u remote for u stupid cartoon show.

Aastha- listen u jerk don't try to act smart other wise I will kick your butt out .

Shlok- (completely shocked he had never seen aastha using such slang language) are you out of your mind look at the way u are talking from where the hell u learnt such words u stupid doe...

Aastha- just f*** off from here and give me the bloody remote otherwise I will make you piss here...

Shlok - tell he who taught u all this tell me right now with a glare in his black intense eyes ( he was really worried for her as she is so nave that she never cares about her acts and often get things messed up for her )

Aatha - u make fun of me every now and also scold me for watching cartoons so i have started watching roadies and other Mtv show just to become look like your girl friend Ria . she told me that I am stupid dork and girls of my age love watching Mtv shows from yesterday I have started watching roadies now, some day I will also become cool like u and I have learnt all these slang words for here only u filthy dog...

Thak ( 1 tight slap on Aastha' cheek )

Anjali- Aastha what king of words you are using ? that is what u are learning in school

Aastha- aai wo mai

Anjali - shut up and now no tv for today go do your room and complete your home work and come out only during dinner time got that! now go ( pointing towards room)

Aastha left with a nod while shlok was in shock for the very first time he found anjali slapped Aastha because his mother loved Aastha more than him , he was in utter shock and was completely convinced that she (anjali ) was really annoyed by Aastha's this behavior next to his surprise shlok to got one tight slap

Anjali- shlok what u do in school I told u so many times to take care of her she so innocent why you tease her infront of your friend it's because of you only she used such words now u to go to your room and come during dinner time only now go right now

shlok too left with a nod and tears in his eye it was not because his mother slapped him it was because he was the reason for Aastha's behavior he mentally condemned himself for teasing Aastha in front of his friends and finally decided to never to do that thing again he went to Aastha's room instead of his room and found her lying on her bed covering her face with a pillow and weeping he went near to her and said Aastha - Aastha look at me she didn't look at him and said go from here in a meek voice

shlok- mere bacche look here , she jerked his hand and said no go way it's because of u only that aai slapped me its because of your stupid Ria she told me by using such words I will sound cool and look aai slapped me for the same u never care for me always leave me with that Ria in spare time and she yells at me all the time about my deeds and even insult me in front of her friends I don't like her but she is your girl friend because of which I have to bear her I don't like her in fact she yesterday only told me all this and asked not to tell it to you otherwise she will reveal about my habit of watching cartoons in class , whenever u are not around me she mocks on me with her friends, calling me an orphan and a burden on your family am I a burden on your family ? saying this she started sobbing badly she looked in shlok eye - tell me shlok am I really this bad that u feel ashamed to stand beside me shlok cupped her face and hugged her, she started crying badly shlok took her face in both his palm and made her look into his eye intense black eyes, his eyes were teary a lone tear dropped from his eye he kissed her forehead and said with a smile filled with lot of care and love for her " no my betu u r sweetest girl in this whole world u are my angel and most beautiful girl u are no burden to me or my family in fact u are our family u know it's me u aai and baba , four of us and no one can come between us . I promise I will never tease you for your any deed I will never make fun of you in front of my any friend you know u are my only best friend I love you my beta he pecked on both her cheeks and hugged her she hid her face on his chest and he hugged her back she was still sobbing and in between that she said please don't tell Ria I told u everything you know she said if I will reveal you all this then she will ask boys to follow me she even once did that too...

hearing that shlok anger was on seventh floor what u said? She asked some boy to follow U? tell me who was that guy and what he did to you?, his anger was clearly visible in his eye he was burning with furry he roared again what he did to you tell me? and with this he shrieked Aastha from both his hand and held her shoulder making her see him. she could see the sheer anger in his eyes, with teary eyes she said " he did nothing to me he only warned me to be polite to Ria and follow her instruction he also called me a fool and I don't know him I have never seen him before he is not from our school she said stammering as she too was sacred from this look of shlok . shlok took her in his embrace so tightly it was difficult for her to breathe she nuzzled in his chest and said I am sorry shloky I didn't tell u earlier about this I was scared of Ria...

Shlok-( stroking her back with full care and sheer anger in his eyes for Ria and that boy who made his Aastha suffer ) don't cry my baby I won't tell anything to her ok mere bte now stop crying and from now onwards no need to follow anyone's instruction leaving mine and all elders ok . he kissed on her forehead again looking into her brown doe like eyes filled with sheer innocence and purity he thought in his mind ( she is so honest and guileless so selfless that anyone can take advantage of his Aastha is so cute he thought) finally after 15 minutes of this silent embrace aastha finally said Shlok leave me I am not able to breathe properly leave me shlok came out of his trance and left her with a sorry look on his face ...

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Edited by pt311288 - 11 years ago
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interesting and nice concept
do continue dear😊
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Such a innocent love story

Please continue ...
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nice start, so how old is your shlock? like anjali slapping both of them, and shlocks shock when aastha swore...looking forward to more
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Interesting, waiting for morešŸ‘šŸ¼
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Originally posted by: Neelum.drashti



Interesting, waiting for morešŸ‘šŸ¼


thnxs dear
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thnx
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Originally posted by: latha_555

nice start, so how old is your shlock? like anjali slapping both of them, and shlocks shock when aastha swore...looking forward to more




will update in coming chapters about shlok and rest of family n will update soon

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