ArHi SS: ThE BrOkEn BaNgLeS *Chap 04* Pg 100

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kritash

@kritash

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Posted: 11 years ago

#551

nice concept .
loved it.
Please do pm me.

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Anu

@soapopera

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Posted: 11 years ago

#552

great story...dint know it was updated. just read it...was waiting for centuries for an update!

t stories is progressing very well...loved t play of emotions u had written while describing khushi s and arnav s feelings for each other! i just could n take it tat they have started hating each other in 4th chap itself! i wonder why his big bro had died and wt had really happened! hope arnav finds t real reason before jumping into conclusions...well he is famous for those though :)

please update soon...really wannna read wat would happen further :P

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--MISHTEE--

@--MISHTEE--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#553

Awesome story

pls pm me wen u update

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Anjali

@Payaash

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Posted: 11 years ago

#554

It's been so long !! And I must admit I forgot the story ,.. So I had to read everything all over again ..

But ya I felt it more amazing when I read all the 4 chap together ... I had tears in my eyes ... Khushi is really in pain ... Well I don think it is just her even Arnav us going though the same thing ... But Khushi is in more pain as her best buddy is not ready to give her an ear

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Russell

@russelskhushi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#555

very nice and emotional update... things really went bad for khushi... she is truly a jinda lash :(

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paaskhanna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#556

Thanks to Appy I came across this very interesting story... Emotions of both Khusi and Arnav are described beautifully... Both when are attracted to each other in college and when they are feeling the pain and hurt of betrayal...looking forward to next chapter