Arhi OS: The Language of Love

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Posted: 11 years ago

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

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Posted: 11 years ago

Congratulations...

Sami, I voted for this one...I loved Banke ji in it and loved the concept oo ...I laughed aloud while reading.

Just the very idea of Arnav getting jealous of BL...and all possessive...wanting to impress his Khushi and loved how,the entire family is rhyming...

Loved how annoyed he gets at the entire family fawning over him...

The poetry was so good, but never knew you could rhyme in hindi too! But then your hindi is superb...😉

I loved how she introduced BK to Arnav as her ' meant nothing' who he thought was a figment of her imagination so to see him in flesh and blood...and being praised by his Khushi...a nightmare!

And then his making her jealous with Monica...backfiring...on him hearing Khushi's plan to go out with BL instead...and K worried about his sugar ...made for perfect comedy...

Loved loved it! Would love to read more...about Khushi' meant nothing'... That was a genius touch!

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Nidsubh007

@Nidsubh007

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Congrats Sami!! This OS was hilarious and just put the biggest smile on my face. I love how it stayed true to each IPK character. I think I've told you from your story ANK that I love how you portray NK and once again you hit the mark with him.

This was pure and simple a IPK classic.

It had a little bit of everything and of course Arnav romancing Khushi. Hamesha!

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littlemissstar

@littlemissstar

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

congrats!!
loved it.. 😊

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Hawa1997

@Hawa1997

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

Amazing OS!!!

Many congrats!!👏

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pinkly

@pinkly

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Posted: 11 years ago

This was one of the most hilarious stories I have read. That's why I voted this as number 1. The poetry was awesome and funny. The last one Arnav reads to Khushi was the best.

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Simran

@dmg123

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Posted: 11 years ago

This was an Amazing OS!!

I especially liked Arnav's poem, it was perfect!!

Great job!

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canapoem

@canapoem

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Posted: 11 years ago

Sami, it was too good. how did you come up with such a hilarious idea. Congrats on your story being in the top 10 and Good Luck too for future stories.

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_disha_

@_disha_

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Posted: 11 years ago

Nothing less expected out of you ...loved it ! ❤️

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Pooja agarwal

@Barun_Gf

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Main q soyi itni der 😭

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Soo banke lal was ur os 🤣 ahhh u have no idea dii how badly i was rofling wile reading it

obviously it was funny infct i lovd d jaelous arnav who was going mad wid d very fact dat his khushi nd his crazy family is copying banke lal and talking in rhym 🤣

aww myy poor arnav 😆😆

and lastly how he wrote poem just to show banke he is D ASR Arnav Singh Raizada no one dares too mess wid him 😳😳

I also lovd d fact he bought all d typs of pan poor aman kahan kahan jana padta hai aur kya kya karna padta hai😆😆

Lovd it dii ❤️ muaahss apko😳😳

Edited by Barun_Gf - 11 years ago