Arhi OS: The Language of Love

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hmm.. guess karo :P

@jas0308

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#41

congrats sami.. i havent able to read all the os's in the competition, infact i justread first one!!!

but i am sure, if i wouldve read this one, i surely, would vote!!!

it has everything, jealousy, possessiveness, their shart, fun, and lovely, cuite moments!!!

really loved it👏

PS: peoms were awesome btw😊👏⭐️

Edited by jas0308 - 11 years ago

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opsyellow

@opsyellow

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#42

🤣

BRAVO👏

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kondhili

@kondhili

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Sami 🤗

Sorry for getting here so late kya karoon my AD is rocking these days 🤔

Anyways this is was just the perfect thing for me to read...had a good hilarious laugh so much so that my daughter was wondering what the hell is wrong with her mom.

You did it Sami tumne kar dikhaya u made ASR get jealous of a mere bankelalji the paanwala.😆

So much so that the poor man was reduced to making poetry himself. Thank you for making bankelal so cute and adorable. I loved this one.

And sami with this another talent of yours come to our notice Ms blossoming poetess. The poems were written so well sami...kudos to you.

This definitely deserves to be in the top 10. Congratulations sami loved super loved the OS.

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

LOVED THE OS VERY CUTE AND VERY HILARIOUS AWESOME THANKS FOR THE PM ASR LOVED THE ONE HE MADE UP ABOUT BLAKE JI

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hotchic.

@hotchic

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

That was so cute and lovely, loved arnav being so poetic🥳

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AquaSandhya

@AquaSandhya

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Sami, to me this OS was a culmination of classic IPK humour and chemistry that blends perfectly Sami's humour and chemistry for Arnav and Khushi.

Loved it. Laughed hard. I could actually imagine Arnav and Khushi doing the the things you write coz Arnav coming from the world he does adjusting to Khushi's eccentricities would be nothing short of a daily roller-coaster ride.

Congratulations and thank you👏

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Crazy4Sobti

@Crazy4Sobti

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Sami,

Banke lal scene is one of my favorites and I totally enjoyed it...it totally cracked me up and so did your OS. This was so creative and so IPK. It took me back to golden days of IPK and refreshed the memories.🤗

Your poetry was fabulous and you were so apt to each and every situation👏.

I enjoyed this OS so much that I gave poetic touch to my comment. (I know it's a very lame attempt).

Sami ne likhi ek kahani, Padkar usko hui mein deewani

Arnav ne socha, Kushi ka pyar, Banke lal

Sochkar ye Arnav hua gusse se lal

Gusse mein Arnav ne likhi Kavitha kamaal

Arnav ki kavitha sunkar Khushi ke gaal hue lal

100 paan khakaar Arnav aur Khushi ke romantic moments hue malamaal ❤️

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RizArshi

@RizArshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Aww a jealous Arnav wanting to impress his Khushi is so adorable. Arnav must've got the biggest shock of his life when he met a very handsome "meant nothing" of Khushi. Arnav is correct though, who needs poetry when they have got so much of chemistry 😳 The rhyming by the entire family reminded me of the movie Khoobsoorat. Poor Arnav didn't even get some peace at home. To top it all Khushi refused to let him recite a poem for her, didn't get jealous of Monica and also planned an evening out with her meant nothing. Poor poor Arnav. Their fight was uber cute and so was Arnav's surprise. I loved Arnav's plan of stuffing a paan whenever Khushi attempted to spoil a romantic moment. Its a brilliant idea actually 😆 It was a very sweet, cute, adorable and hilarious OS. Loved it. The poems were good too. Congratulations and thanks for the PM :)