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Shruti Gupta

@Shruti21

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Posted: 11 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: Nandz

Absolutely shruti!
So from next time you will write the comment and i will quote it! Watsay!

😭 chal koi nai likh dungi...😛

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sudhareddy

@sudhareddy

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#92

Anupama congrats👏 for Most tragic Os

The story is tragic or not I don't know but it felt like lovely and real story⭐️.

Chap 1 - Story of Lt.Col. Arnav singh Raizada and Khushi from neighbouring land came in search of missing brother. Loved how Khushi saved injured Arnav and bandaged his wounds. They both felt something unknown towards each other when they spent 8 days together and circumstances pushing them to not act on those feelings.

Chap 2 - Started with dream it shows Arnav's longing for Khushi. It has been 9 long years since Arnav and Khushi meeting and aparted. Now Arnav was married and his wife passed away and had a cute daughter Shubi. His wife was sweet woman and he cared and adored her but didn't loved her as he still thinks of Khushi. That is the reason he blamed himself for his wife's death. He lives for his little for her. Now he is Ex.Lt.Col.

Chap 3 - Loved the way you described Aman's physical and motional condition. One could easily imagine how hard it is for him to forget and move on. When two neighbouring countries constantly at war, sometimes it is innocent people who suffers most and the way people treated is scary when they were caught. Aman had found angel in the form of Dr Ananya .

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Amanram

@Amanram

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Posted: 11 years ago

#93

have read your note - re last chapter. does this mean you will not post it here on this thread?

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meera30

@meera30

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Posted: 11 years ago

#94

You know what I love even more than happy endings? Hopeful beginnings.

And that is what the last chapter and by extension your entire story has been about. Very rarely can someone take a meeting of chance - shadowed by pain and hurt and turn it around to spin the future of rainbows and roses. But despite the underlying melancholy of this tale, it is eventually about life giving you second chances and you taking it, grabbing it with open arms without mourning what was and what could have been!!

I love this little tale of Arnav and Khushi and Amaan and Ananya and not to mention Shubhi - what better than fate and a little girl to play cupid.

I am so happy you wrote this story out. I am telling you this from personal experience - it hurts when you don't get the response you hope for but the more I think about it, the more I see no rhyme or reason for why some stories soar and some other, much more heartfelt tales remain restricted to a bunch of exclusive folks - but then, that's the difference between an Audi Q7 and a Alto VXi :D

Much love to you and at the risk of sounding condescending, might I add that this story shows just how beautifully you have come about to spinning fiction. You should keep doing this.You will always have a reader in me :)

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momoahmd

@momoahmd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#95

😊

Edited by smartgirl9009 - 11 years ago

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Anupama

@Anupama.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#96

Hi all,
Dearies, limiting or restricting the last chapter was never my goal. Let alone first making the readers say please and then giving them to read it. I am feeling bad.

As it was predecided by me and also known by all who had recieved the last chapter as a PM, I will be posting it in a couple of hrs. So not to worry, my pm-ing the last chapter to the ones who had liked or commented or expressed themselves was just a way to tease the silent readers for some time 😆

You'd come to know of last chapter being posted by the title.

Thanks! :)

Edited by Anupama. - 11 years ago

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rashmi

@anamika00

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#97

beautiful story and thanks for the pm...:)

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Anupama

@Anupama.

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#98

To everyone who have been with this story since I decided to write beyond the OS that it was initially--

I cant thank you all enough. If there was a way to make you feel how heartfelt it is..

I was, though hurt initially but I would never let that rule over happiness that I feel because of you all. Its takes up a lot of will to continue if I think of lesser response and silence but its easier when I think of you all.

And thank you again for putting up with all of my drama in the course of this story. It would be special just because of you all..🤗

And thank you everyone who just came here. I hope you liked the story. 😊

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-Chudel-

@-Chudel-

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#99

Reserved to anchor myself at some place.😆

Unreserved-

I was content with just reading part one. It was heartbreakingly wistful and yet it was an end in itself. That open ending gave us a ball of yarn we could spin however we wanted to but now let me just say this- nothing, nothing could have made me imagine that this would be the end.

You do pen down soulful details in whatever you write so naturally it just surpasses my imagination. And now I am just grateful that you continued this!

The narration, the plot, the characters and most importantly the setting that you gave the FF were individually delightful and together magical. Of Arnav's aloofness and hardship, of the potential of Aman and Ana's relationship, of the 8 days that gave Khushi more memories than the other years of her life combined, and most importantly of the way Khushi deliberates that she wouldn't let go of Arnav. How refreshing is that!

You wrote about a strong willed Khushi in Brewing up and over here too...I admire that thought process, Anupama! Cheers for sharing this story! It will be cherished for a long time. Thank you! :-)

Edited by -Delilah- - 11 years ago